基础写作课件雅思第四次

基础雅思写作(四)请输入文本雅思写作功能句型开头段结尾段导入句观点句总结句主体论证段内部雅思写作九大逻辑关系1.原因原因状语从句Parentsshouldencouragechildrentotravelalone,becausetravellingcanenablethemtolearnhowtodealwithproblemsindependently.SinceLondonwonthechancetohosttheOlympicgames,theUKgovernmenthadtospendalotofmoneyimprovingfacilities.强调原因强调结果1.原因介词短语Duetothelackofoutdooractivities,theconditionofpersonalhealthhaseworsethanbefore.Thankstotheimprovementofcommunicationtechnology,peoplecouldliveandworkanywhere.1.原因原因状语从句介词短语Because/For;Since/As句子DuetoOwingtoThankstoBecauseof名词1.原因高分玩家选修1.forthesakeof+名词

为了…的利益或目的Manyelderlypeopleprefertoliveinthecountrysideforthesakeoftheirhealth.2.byvirtueof+名词

通过…来…Shesucceededbyvirtueofhereffortratherthanherluck.

1.原因3.Given…Inviewof…Inlightof…考虑到；鉴于Giventheseverityofthisphenomenon,wehavenoalternativebuttotakeimmediatestepstoaddressthissituation.

高分玩家选修2.结果句首1.Therefore,thebanonplasticbagswillbenefitusinthelongrun.

Therefore,/Thus,/Hence,/Consequently,+句子.Asaconsequence,/Asaresult,+句子.2.结果句中2.

Theenvironmentproblemsaresevere,sosomeeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.

句子,so句子.3.Theenvironmentproblemsaresosevere;therefore,someeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.句子;therefore,/thus,/hence,句子.

2.结果句中4.Childrenaresoinnocentthattheycannottellrightfromwrong.

so+adj/adv+that从句.Childrenareinnocentsothattheycannottellrightfromwrong.

sothat+从句.

Advertisingissuchaneffectivemarketingstrategythatmanycompaniesuseit.such+n+that从句.

Translation1.因为孩子不能分清是非黑白(tellrightfromwrong),所以他们倾向于模仿(tendtoimitate)电影里的暴力行为(violentbehavior)。

(分别用since/dueto)2.政府的预算(thegovernment’sbudget)是有限的，所以艺术不能

被资助。

(分别用so…that/therefore)Translation1.因为孩子不能分清是非黑白(tellrightfromwrong),所以他们倾向于模仿(tendtoimitate)电影里的暴力行为(violentbehavior)。

(分别用since/dueto)

Sincechildrencannottellrightfromwrong,theytendtoimitateviolentbehaviorinmovies.Duetothefactthatchildrencannottellrightfromwrong,theytendtoimitateviolentbehaviorinmovies.

Translation2.政府的预算(thegovernment’sbudget)是有限的，所以艺术不能

被资助。(分别用so…that/therefore)Thegovernment’sbudgetislimited.Therefore,artscannotbefunded.Thegovernment’sbudgetislimited；therefore,artscannotbefunded.

Thegovernment’sbudgetissolimitedthatartscannotbefunded.

条件状语从句1.Ifyoungpeopleareencouragedtogetinvolvedinvolunteerwork,theywillrealizetheirsocialvalue.If(希望或者不希望看到)

Providingthat/Providedthat(希望看到)2.Socialstabilitywillbeindangerunlessthegovernmentprovidesfinancialaidtounemploymentpeople.

unless（除非）=ifnot3.假设4.让步让步状语从句1.Althoughthebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.

尽管,虽然Although/though/eventhough/while句子,句子.Evenifhewinsthelastround,hewillstilllosethematch.evenif（对没发生的情况让步）句子,句子.

4.让步1.Althoughthebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.

2.Inspiteofthenumerousbenefits,teleworkisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.

Inspiteof+N,句子.Despite+N,句子.Despitethefactthat句子,句子.

4.让步1.Although

thebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.3.Nevertheless/NonethelessThebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous.Nevertheless,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.Nevertheless/Nonetheless,+句子.

尽管如此

Although

thebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.However/ButThebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous,butitisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.Thebenefitsofteleworkarenumerous.However,itisnotwithoutitspotentialdrawbacks.句子,but+句子.句子.However,+句子.5.转折Translation1.如果大学毕业生的失业率(unemploymentrate)继续上升，那么年轻人就会认为教育无用。Iftheunemploymentrateofgraduatescontinuestorise,youngpeoplewillthinkthateducationisuseless.2.尽管政府已经采取了行动去限制私有汽车的使用，但是交通堵

塞还是很严重。

Althoughthegovernmenthastakenactionstorestricttheuseofprivatecars,trafficcongestionstillremainsveryserious.Thegovernmenthastakenactionstorestricttheuseofprivatecars,buttrafficcongestionstillremainsveryserious.

6.顺序英文表达首先

firstly/inthefirstplacetobeginwith/tostartwith其次secondly/inthesecondplacemoreover/furthermore/besides最后lastly/finally/additionallylastbutnotleast7.比较单词或词组解释出现的位置while/whereas

…,而…句首或句中(连接句子)

Comparedwith+N,与…相比句首In/Bycontrast,与之相比句首Likewise,/Similarly,类似地句首7.比较1.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinotherfactors.2.Comparedwithotherproblems,airpollutionistheseverestone.3.Janelikeswesternmovies.Incontrast,TomlovestraditionalChinesemovies.4.Toplishthetask,employeesneedtohaveambition.Likewise,theyneedtobediligent.8.解释单词或词组解释出现的位置Inotherwords,换句话说句首—thatistosay,那就是说句中例句：1.Tourismcangeneratemanyjobopportunities.Inotherwords,manypeoplecanbeemployedwiththedevelopmentoftourism.2.Thesechildrenarespoiltinmaterialways—thatis

tosay,theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant.8.解释1.Work-relatedstresscanleadtoconditions,suchasdepression,anxietyandotherpsychologicalproblems.(句间)

Suchas/forexample/forinstance2.Animalsarehuman’scompanions.Forinstance,dolphinsoftenrescuesailorsfromsinkingships.(句首)Forinstance,/Forexample,3.Thispointcanbeconfirmedbytheexampleofsharkfins.

Thispointcanbeconfirmedbytheexampleof+NThispointisbestillustratedwiththeexampleof+N9.举例9.举例单词或词组解释出现的位置Suchas例如句中（加名词）Forinstance/Forexample例如句首和句中(名词或句子)Thispointcanbeconfirmedbytheexampleof+Ｎ

这个观点可以被…的例子支持加名词Thispointisbestillustratedwiththeexampleof＋Ｎ

这个观点可以用…的例子最有利地证明加名词雅思写作九大逻辑关系1.原因2.结果3.假设4.让步5.转折6.顺序7.比较8.解释9.举例选择适当的关联词填在括号里although;while;therefore;;if;suchas;dueto()theadvancesinscience,peoplecanworkwithoutfacetofacecontact.Theparentsaretooyoung.(),theydonotknowhowtoeducatetheirchildrencorrectly.Therearemanyreasonsleadingtoenvironmentalpollution,()theincreasingpopulation.Somepeoplethinkweshouldprotectanimals,()otherpeoplethinkweshouldpaymoreattentiontoproblemsofhumanbeings.()tourismisbeneficialtotheeconomy,itbringsmanydrawbackstotheenvironment.()theirchildrenspendmoretimestayingwiththem,theelderlywouldnotfeellonelyandisolated.选择适当的关联词填在括号里although;while;therefore;if;suchas;dueto(Dueto)theadvancesinscience,peoplecanworkwithoutfacetofacecontact.Theparentsaretooyoung.(Therefore),theydonotknowhowtoeducatetheirchildrencorrectly.Therearemanyreasonsleadingtoenvironmentalpollution,(suchas)theincreasingpopulation.Somepeoplethinkweshouldprotectanimals,(while)otherpeoplethinkweshouldpaymoreattentiontoproblemsofhumanbeings.(Although)tourismisbeneficialtotheeconomy,itbringsmanydrawbackstotheenvironment.(If)theirchildrenspendmoretimestayingwiththem,theelderlywouldnotfeellonelyandisolated.主体论证段的结构开头段1.论证段2.论证段结尾段开头段1.论证段2.论证段结尾段3.论证段Whendesigningabuilding,themostimportantthingtotakeintoaccountistheuseofthebuildingratherthanitsoutwardappearance.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree(2013.03.14)开头段1.功能重要2.外表也重要结尾段开头段1.功能重要2.功能重要结尾段3.功能重要1.功能重要2.外表也重要1.功能重要2.功能重要3.功能重要让步过渡并列过渡主体论证段段间过渡1.功能重要2.外表也重要让步过渡主体论证段段间过渡Evenso,Iadmitthattheexteriorofabuildingisalsoofgreatimportance.1.Evenso,Iadmitthat…尽管如此，我还是承认…

让步过渡句其他常用句型2.Ontheotherhand,itisworthpointingoutthat…3.Despitethefactthat…,weshouldalsoacknowledgethat…4.Granted(的确),Iwouldagreethat…5.Admittedly(得承认),itisalsoreasonablethat…1.功能重要2.功能重要3.功能重要并列过渡主体论证段段间过渡Anotherpointtonoteisthatbuildingsthatfocusonitsfunctioncansuitthepracticalneedsofthepublic.1.Anotherpointtonoteisthat…另外要注意的一点是…

并列过渡句其他常用句2.Thesecond/thirdreasonfor…isthat…3.Anotherfactorthatshouldbetakenintoaccountisthat…4.Anotherargumentinsupportofmyviewisthat…5.Itisalsoacceptedthat…常用词汇Furthermore,…/Moreover,…（而且）Moreimportantly,…Inthesecond/thirdplace,Inaddition,….（此外）Besides,…（此外）

Lastly,…/Finally,…Thegovernmentshouldcontroltheamountofviolenceinfilmsandontelevisioninordertodecreasetheviolentcrimesinsociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?控制媒体暴力反对控制媒体力控制媒体暴力:对青少年有害控制媒体暴力:威胁到社会稳定尽管如此，媒体暴力不应该被严格控制。另外一个需要被考虑到的点是媒体暴力会威胁到社会稳定。控制媒体暴力反对控制媒体力尽管如此，媒体暴力不应该被严格控制。1.Evenso,Iadmitthatmediaviolenceshouldnotbecontrolledstrictly.2.Ontheotherhand,itisworthpointingoutthatmediaviolenceshouldnotbecontrolledstrictly.3.