2021年广东省潮州市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)

2021年广东省潮州市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledWriteanEnglishDiary.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter.SupposeyouareLiMing.WritealettertoMartha,ateacherofyoursintheseniorhighschool.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinesgivenbelow:

1.得知老师要来伦敦访问非常高兴；

2.介绍自己的学习和生活；

3.希望能带老师参观伦敦。

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前很多父母在子女高中毕业前就送他们出国学习

2.形成这种趋势的原因

3.我对些的看法

OverseaStudyatanEarlyAge

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1．图中所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况，请描述其变化

2．请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)

3．请预测我国成人教育(或继续教育)的前景

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic"AFewRemarksonCompetition".Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan150wordsandbaseonetheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow.

1．竞争是存在于当今社会的普遍现象；

2．竞争的好处；

3．竞争的同时不要忘记合作。

6.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic2008OlympicsandI.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1．北京2008年奥运会的重大意义

2．你能为北京奥运会做些什么

3．展望北京奥运会的前景

2008OlympicsandI

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnPrivateTutoring.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍

2．有人认为这对孩子有帮助，有人则不以为然

3．我的看法

OnPrivateTutoring

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic"AFewRe.marksonCompetition".Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan150wordsandbaseontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.

1.竞争是存在于当今社会的普遍现象

2.竞争的好处

3.竞争的同时不要忘记合作

9.1.大家希望构建一个和谐社会，但社会上存在一些与和谐社会不相符合的现象

2．分析造成这种现象的不良影响

3．从自身应如何做起

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守儿童的现象在农村非常普遍

2.这种现象带来的弊端

3.我诊断该如何时处理这些问题

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

Recedinggumsisoftentheresultofhardtoothbrushing.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.

Thefollowinginfectiousdiseasesthatcandevelopintoamentalillnessis______.

A.dementiaB.syphilisC.malariaD.untreatedHIVinfection

13.SharingEconomicLossesthroughInsurance

Eachminuteofthedayornight,everyonefacesapossiblefinancialloss.Ahomemaybedestroyedbyfire,damagedbylightning,orleveledbyatornado.Personalbelongingsmaybestolen.Acarmaybedamagedinanaccident,oritmaycauseinjurytopeopleandproperty.Incomemaybelostastheresultofthe.death,disability,orunemploymentofafamilywageearner.Thechancethatalossofthiskindmayoccuriscalledaneconomicrisk.

Savingsprovideonewaytotakecareoffinanciallosses.Butsavingsarenottheanswertolargelosses.Thebestwaytoguardagainstlargefinanciallossesisthroughinsurance.

InsuranceIsaplanforsharingRisksandLosses

TedMatherandfourofhisfriendshavearockgroupcalledQuint.Eachmemberofthegroupownsavaluableinstrument.Ted'sbassalonecost＄900.Ifaninstrumentwerestolenordamaged,itwouldbeaseriousfinanciallossforitsowner.

Suppose,however,thatthemembersofthegroupagreetoshareanylossesthatoccur.Forexample,ifTed'sbassisstolen,eachmemberofthegroupwouldcontribute＄180toreplaceit.Inotherwords,theywouldsharetheloss.Thisistheprincipleofinsurance.Personsfacingthesamerisksharethelossesthatamongthem.

Fromaninsurancestandpoint,however,aninformalagreementlikethatmadebyQuintwouldnotprovidemuchprotection.Why?Thereasonisthatalltheinstrumentsmightbestolenordamagedatthesametime.ThegrouprehearsesintheMathers'garageandsometimesleavestheirinstrumentstherebetweenrehearsals.Theyalsotraveltogetherinavanwhentheyperform.Supposethatathiefbrokeintothegarageandstolealltheinstruments.Whatifthegaragecaughtfire?Whatifallinstrumentsweredamagedinanaccidentonthewaytoorfromaconcert?Eachmemberofthegroupwouldhavetopayone-fifthofthetotalloss.Forsomemembers,thismightbemorethantheamountoftheirownactualloss.

Thepurposeofinsuranceistoprovideprotectionagainstfinanciallossatareasonablecost.Thisispossibleonlywhenthecostofinsuranceissharedbymanypeoplewhofaceasimilarrisk.Butnotallofthemarelikelytohaveactuallossesatthesametime.

YouBuyInsurancefromInsuranceCompanies

Almost4,800companiesintheUnitedStatesareinthebusinessofprovidinginsuranceprotection.Thesebusinessesarecalledinsurancecompanies.Becausemostinsurancecompaniesoperateonabigscale,theyprovideawayforlargenumbersofpeopletosharetheirlosses.

Whenyoubuyinsurance,youenterintoawrittenagreementwiththeinsurancecompany.Thisagreementiscalledapolicy.Thepersonwhobuysinsuranceisthepolicyholder.Accordingtotheagreement,theinsurancecompanypromisestopaythepolicyholderifcertaintypesoflossesoccur.Thepolicystatesexactlywhatlossesthecompanywillpayfor.Forthisprotection,thepolicyholdersmakeregularpaymentstotheinsurancecompany.Eachpaymentiscalledapremium.Thepremiumspaidbyallpolicyholdersareusedtopaythosewhohavelosses.Inthisway,alossthatmightresultingreatfinancialhardshipforonepersonorhouseholdissharedbymanypeople.Becauseonlyaportionofthoseinsuredwillactuallyhavelosses,premiumsaresmallcomparedtotheamountofprotectionprovided.

ManyKindsofRisksCanBeInsured

Insurancecanprovideprotectionagainstalmostanykindofloss.Singersmayinsuretheirvoices.Photographersmayinsuretheirnegatives.Theownerofahomefreezermayinsureagainstfoodlossincaseofapowerfailure.Abusinessownercaninsurehisorherplaceofbusiness.Abusinessownercanalsoinsureagainstalossofprofitsduringashutdownfollowingafireor

A.YB.NC.NG

14.

ThoseimagesproducedbyFDG-PETcanreveal______.

A.thenumberofglucosemetabolism

B.thesizeofglucosemetabolism

C.thepatternofglucosemetabolism

D.thedistributionofglucosemetabolism

15.

Thereleaseoflargequantitiesofthegreenhousegasmethaneaspermafrostmeltswillspeedup______.

16.Theprogramaimedatcreatingasingle,federatedsign-onsystemiscalled______.

17.AccordingtoDavidVaughan,theAntarcticisshrinkingduetoclimatechange.

18.

China'seconomicopportunitiesandits______onthefuturecontributestopeople'sinterestinlearningChinese.

19.Whatissaidaboutthespilloccurringfarbelowthesea?

A.Itresultedinthedeathofbirdsthatfeedonfish.

B.Itisathreattothewholeecosystemthere.

C.Itislessharmfulthanthespillonthesurface.

D.Itiseasytoassessthelikelyimpacts.

20.

Thepistonofanatural-gasvehiclemovesupanddownbythepowerof______.

A.thesparkplug

B.thefour-strokeengine

C.theairinthecylinder

D.theheatofnatural-gasburning

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.听力原文：M:Hey,Jane.Whatdoyouthinkoftheartmuseumyouvisitedlastweek?

W:Itiswonderful,especiallythenewwing.

M:Ihavejustreadanarticleaboutthatnewwinganditsaysthecostisninetymilliontotal.It'samazing,Ithink.

W:Yeah,theguidementionedthat.Youcouldseetheybuiltitatallcosts.

M:Hmm.Itlooksreallyunusual,atleastfromwhatIsawinthepicture.

W:It'sreallyimpressive.Therearetrianglesalloverthepavingstonesinthecourtyard,theskylights,andevenalotofthesculptures.Allthesculpturesaremobileandaremadeofpiecesofaluminumthatmoveslowlyintheair.You'lllikeit,Ibet.

M:Thearticlesaidthat,too.Itwassaidtheoriginalwassteel,anditweighedsomuchthatitwasn'tsafetohang.

W:Right.Theyusedaluminumlatersothatthosesculptureswouldn'tcomedownonsomeone'shead.

M:Fromthearticle,Ialsolearnedthereappearedmanyotherproblemswhentheybuiltit.

W:Thearticlesoundsinteresting.

M:Yes,itwentintoeverydetailaboutthenewwing.Therewasevenaninterviewwiththesculptor.

W:I'dliketoreadthat.MayIborrowyourmagazine?

M:Ofcourse.Justcometomyplaceandtakeittonight.

(20)

A.Shethoughtitwasawasteofmoney.

B.Shewasamazedthatithadbeenfinishedinsuchashorttime.

C.Shewasimpressedbyit.

D.Shedidn'tlikeitasmuchastheotherwings,

22.(47)

23.(28)

A.Becausemountainousregionshaveaveryrichbiology.

B.Becausetheycanmoveuphilltogetcooler.

C.Becausetherearenodesertsinmountainousregions.

D.Becausetheyneedawarmerenvironmenttosurvive.

24.听力原文：M:It'snotgoingtosnowagaintomorrow,isit?Itwassupposedtobewarmallweek,

W:Well,ifyougobytheforecastthatIheard,youshouldn'tputyourcoatandhatawayquiteyet.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanimply?

(14)

A.It'sgoingtosnowagaintomorrow.

B.It'snotgoingtosnowtomorrow.

C.Theforecastisalwaysaccurate.

D.Themanshouldputoncoatandhat.

25.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthepassageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneralidea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillintheblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissinginformation.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhavejustheardorwritedownthe

Life-style.isthewayapersonliveswork,leisuretime,hobbies,otherinterests,andpersonalphilosophy.One'spersonallife-style.maybe【B1】______work,includingfewsocialactivities.Another'smayinvolvehobbies,【B2】______activities,orpersonalphilosophy.

Thereislittledoubtthatlife-stylesarechangingandthatthesechangeswillhavean【B3】______onthewaybusinessoperatesintheyears【B4】______.Severalfactorsarecausinglife-style.changesinU.S.society.

First,thereismoreleisuretimethaneverbefore.Theworkweekisnowlessthanfortyhours,as【B5】______toseventyhoursacenturyago.Some【B6】______believeitwillbetwenty-fivehoursorlessbeforetheyear2000.Severalfirmshave【B7】______fourdayworkweekswithmorehoursperday.Othershavecutthenumberofhoursworkedeachweek.Reducedwork【B8】______meanincreasedleisuretime.

Second,familieshavefewerchildrenthanbefore—【B9】______Thistrendhasforcedmanybusinessmantomodifytheircompetitivestrategies.GerberproductsCompanyusedtoadvertise"babiesareourbusiness—andouronlybusiness".【B10】______.

Third,peoplearebettereducatedandmoreprosperousnowthan,theywereearlier.【B11】______Inquiriesofthisnaturehavesometimesledtopersonallife-style.changes.

【B1】

26.(25)

A.Leadersofthesouthernrebellion.

B.Slavesinthesouthernstates.

C.Northernopponentsofthewar.

D.Southernsoldiers.

27.

【B3】

28.听力原文：Careeristsarepeoplewhoseself-imageisdeterminedalmostexclusivelybytheftjobs.Virtuallyeverythingtheydoisdesignedtoadvancetheircareers.Theyaredefinedbytheftjobs.Whenyoumeetacareeristataparty,heimmediatelytellsyouhisoccupation.Takeawayacareerist'sjobandhedoesn'tknowwhoheis.Heloseshisidentity.Hislifeisseriouslyout-of-balance.Thisparticulardiseaseiscalledcareerism.

(29)Workaholicsmayormaynotbecareerists.Workaholicsalsospendmostoftheirtimeandenergyontheftjobs,buttheremaybedifferentreasonsfortheftworkpattern.Theymaynotevenidentifywiththeirjobs.Workmaysimplybeanescape,anefforttoavoiddealingwithlife.Onthe,otherhand,aworkaholicmaylovehisjobandsimplybecomeaddictedtothepleasureofdoingitanddoingitwell.

Careeristsmaynotevenliketheirjobs.Infact,theymaynotevenworkthathard.Theymayspendmostofthefttimeonorganizationalpoliticsandotherschemesforadvancement.(30)Careeristsarenotsomuchintoworkasintoseekingidentitythroughtheirjobs,theircareenadvancement,andthesymbolsofsuccess.

Aworkaholicmaybeworkingtohelpothersorsupportanoblecause.Ifweareworkingonprojectsweseeasimportanttosocialtransformation,itiseasytobecomeobsessedwiththeprojectandletotherareasofourlifeslide.Wemustallstrivetoavoidthispitfall.(31)Managersmustbealerttobothcareeristsandworkaholics,recognizethedifferences,andseektohelpbothmoveinthedirectionofwholeness.

(30)

A.Careeristsspendmoretimeandenergyontheirjobs.

B.Careeristsdon'tliketheirjobs.

C.Workaholicshavedifferentreasonsfortheirworkpattern.

D.Workaholicsaremoresuccessfulthancareerists.

29.(29)

A.Tobringelectricityintohishouseforlighting.

B.Tohavefun.

C.Toattractthunder.

D.Toconductascientificexperiment.

30.(19)

A.Bygoingonadiet.

B.Bydoingphysicalexercise.

C.Byhavingfewermeals.

D.Byeatingfruitandvegetables.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Basicresearchisvitalbecause______.

A.itleadstoresultsthatcanbeappreciated

B.itisdrivenoutbyappliedresearch

C.itprovidesthebasisforscientificprogress

D.itsresultscannotbeanticipated

32.

【C4】

33.

TheresearchteamsuggeststhatthemodemhumansinAfricaweremodemintermsof______.

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.(72)

35.

【S6】

36.

【S4】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.Itishardtopredicthowscienceisgoingtoturnout,

andifitisreallygoodscienceitisimpossibletopredict.

Ifthethingstobefoundareactuallynew,theyareby

definitionunknowninadvance.Youcannotmakechoices

inthismatter.Youeitherhavescienceoryoudon't,ifyou【S1】______.

haveityouareobligedtoacceptthesurprisingand

disturbingpiecesofinformation,alongwiththeneat

andpromptusefulbits.【S2】______.

TheonlysolidpieceofscientifictruthaboutwhatI【S3】______.

feeltotallyconfidentisthatweprofoundlyignorant【S4】______.

aboutnature.Indeed,Iregardthisasthemajordiscovery

ofthepasthundredsyearsofbiology.Itis,initsway,an【S5】______.

illuminationpieceofnews.Itwouldhaveamazedthe

brightermindsofthe18thcenturyEnlightenment(启蒙【S6】______.

运动)tobetoldbyanyofushowlittleweknowandhow

bewilderedseemsthewayahead.Itisthissudden【S7】______.

confrontationtothedepthandscopeofignorance【S8】______.

thatrepresentthemostsignificantcontributionofthe【S9】______.

20thcenturysciencetothehumanintellect.Inearlier

times,weeitherpretendtounderstandhowthings【S10】______.

workedorignoredtheproblem,orsimplymadeup

storiestofillthegaps.

【S1】

38.【S8】

39.

【S9】

参考答案

1.WriteanEnglishDiaryEnglishlearnersspendmosttimeinpracticingreadinglisteningspeakingandtranslation.ButtheyseldomtrytowriteanythinginEnglish.WritingdoescomethelastintheprocessoflanguagWriteanEnglishDiaryEnglishlearnersspendmosttimeinpracticingreading,listening,speakingandtranslation.ButtheyseldomtrytowriteanythinginEnglish.Writingdoescomethelastintheprocessoflanguag

2.ALettertoMyTeacherMarch232006DearMissMarthaIhavebeenmissingyouallthetimedearteacher.IamsogladtoknowthatyouaxeplanningtocometoLondonforavisitthissummervacation.I'meagerlylookingforwardtoseeingyouhereassoonaspossible.IhavebeeninLondonforalmostayear.ThistermItakefourcourses:Englishhistorysociologyandinternationallaw.Theyareinterestingandbeneficial.Ilikethemverymuch.Ihaveadaptedtothelifestylehere.NowIamlivingwithanEnglishgirlofmyagewhoismajoringinChinese.Sheiswarm-heartedtomeoftentakingtimetohelpmewithmyEnglishandtellingmemanyfunnystoriesaboutEnglishcustoms.InreturnIhaveofferedhelptoimproveherChinese.We'regettingalongwellwitheachother.IhopethatIcanserveasyourguidewhenyoucomehereonatourinthecomingsummervacation.IwillshowyouaroundLondontheworldfamousculturalcity.I'msureyouwillbedeeplyimpressedbywhatyonsee.Beatregards!YoursgratefullyLiMingALettertoMyTeacherMarch23,2006DearMissMartha,Ihavebeenmissingyouallthetime,dearteacher.IamsogladtoknowthatyouaxeplanningtocometoLondonforavisitthissummervacation.I'meagerlylookingforwardtoseeingyouhereassoonaspossible.IhavebeeninLondonforalmostayear.ThistermItakefourcourses:English,history,sociologyandinternationallaw.Theyareinterestingandbeneficial.Ilikethemverymuch.Ihaveadaptedtothelifestyle.here.NowIamlivingwithanEnglishgirlofmyage,whoismajoringinChinese.Sheiswarm-heartedtome,oftentakingtimetohelpmewithmyEnglishandtellingmemanyfunnystoriesaboutEnglishcustoms.Inreturn,IhaveofferedhelptoimproveherChinese.We'regettingalongwellwitheachother.IhopethatIcanserveasyourguidewhenyoucomehereonatourinthecomingsummervacation.IwillshowyouaroundLondon,theworldfamousculturalcity.I'msureyouwillbedeeplyimpressedbywhatyonsee.Beatregards!Yoursgratefully,LiMing解析：[审题]这次考试的写作题属于应用文写作。总的来说，这类信函一般都会给出题头(很可能仅包括时间)，称呼，结束语和签名。所以它的考察重点是语言本身而不是格式。根据题目要求，文章应包含以下三项基本内容：

第一项是得知老师要来伦敦访问非常高兴。

第二项是介绍自己的学习和生活。如学习哪些课程；生活是否适应等。

第三项希望老师来访时带老师参观伦敦。

[提纲]

1.Gladtoknowthevisit.

2.Aboutmystudy:

takefourcourses

interesting

3.Aboutmylife:

adapttothelife

livewithanEnglishgirl

helpeachother

4.Mywish:

showyonaroundLondon

3.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAgeNowadaysmoreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevercost.Itisquiteunderstandableforparentstosendtheirchildrentostudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavecompletedtheiroverseasstudy.Withthedevelopmentofeconomycompaniesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiencestoo.Consequentlypursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindofshortcutingainingabetterfuture.Moreoverthereisstilloneunderlyingreasonforthisrash-economicreason.TherapideconomicprogressinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren'soverseasstudy.Asformeoverseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiencesbutoverseasstudyatanearlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybetooyoungtoeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone'sself-improvementbutit'sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathomewhenheismorecapableoflearningandlivingonhisown.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAgeNowadays,moreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevercost.Itisquiteunderstandableforparentstosendtheirchildrentostudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavecompletedtheiroverseasstudy.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,companiesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiences,too.Consequently,pursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindofshortcutingainingabetterfuture.Moreover,thereisstilloneunderlyingreasonforthisrash-economicreason.TherapideconomicprogressinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren'soverseasstudy.Asforme,overseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiences,butoverseasstudyatanearlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybetooyoungtoeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone'sself-improvement,butit'sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathome,whenheismorecapableoflearningandlivingonhisown.

4.ABoominContinuingEducationThegraphaboveshowsusthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeopletakABoominContinuingEducationThegraphaboveshowsusthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989there,wereonlythirtythousandpeopletak

5.AFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletesforexamplefightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．TheunemployeAFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletes，forexample，fightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．Theunemploye

6.2008OlympicsandIItiswellknownthattheOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2008.ThisisagreatchanceforthewholeworldtoknowmoreaboutChina.TheOlympicGameshasbroughtalongnotonlysp2008OlympicsandIItiswellknownthattheOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2008.ThisisagreatchanceforthewholeworldtoknowmoreaboutChina.TheOlympicGameshasbroughtalongnotonlysp

7.[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudywhileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudy,whileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon解析：这篇作文要求讨论“请家教”的问题。Outline足“现象—正反两种观点-自己的观点”模式。这种题目有两种写作思路。

第一种思路，把重点放在“不同的看法”上，然后略写自己的观点(支持其中一个观点，或者当“和事佬”，说具体问题具体分析)。这时，要重点考虑：支持请家教的观点有什么?(激发学生学习兴趣、培养学生交际能力、提高成绩、充分利用时间，等等。)反对请家教，有什么理由?(没有必要，课堂上学好的话，不必请家教；作用不大，如果学生自己没有主动性，请厂家教也没有用；占用过多学生自主学习、游玩的时间，不利于学生的健康发展；等等。)

第二种思路是把写作重点放在“我”的看法上。就如范文那样，先简要介绍存在的不同看法，然后着重论述自己的观点。当然，自己的观点可以是支持，也可以是反对，但总的说来，要言之成理，要有逻辑性，沿言要衔接、连贯、自然。

Analysis

[1]对应outline的第1条，简要说明现象

[2]对应outline的第2条，说明存在两种不同的看法。

[3]对应outline的第3条，提出自己的看法。文章剩余部分就用来论证自己的看法。

[4][6]是[3]的支持句。用first，second关联。

[5][7]分别对两个分论点予以展开；

[8]用inoneword总结自己的观点。

8.AFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere.Tileathletesforexamplefightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholarshipsatschool.Theunemployedstruggleforanyopportunitiesavailableinthejobmarket.Andeverydayinthebusinessworldthefiercestcompetitionistakingplaceaseachenterprisetriestogetabiggersliceofthemarket.Hardascompetitionisithascertainadvantagesaswell.Firstlyitprovidescitizenswhateversocialstatustheyhavewithopportunitiestoachievetheirgoals.Everyonewithhisowneffortsisequalonthewaytosuccess.Secondlypeopleusuallyfeelstimulatedbythechallengesfromrivals.Undercompetitiononeturnsouttobemoreactiveandefficient.Furthermorecompetitiongivesimpetustothefastdevelopmentofthemodernworldinwhicheachpersonshowsgreaterinitiativeatwork.Howeveracompetitivesocietycanneverneglecttheimportanceofcooperationforcompetitiondoesnotmeantheisolationfromothers.Infactrightcooperationwithotherpeoplewillmakewiserandmoreeffectiveuseofourintelligenceandenergyandthusincreasetheforcefulnessofcom-petition.AFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere.Tileathletes,forexample,fightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholarshipsatschool.Theunemployedstruggleforanyopportunitiesavailableinthejobmarket.Andeverydayinthebusinessworldthefiercestcompetitionistakingplaceaseachenterprisetriestogetabiggersliceofthemarket.Hardascompetitionis,ithascertainadvantagesaswell.Firstly,itprovidescitizens,whateversocialstatustheyhave,withopportunitiestoachievetheirgoals.Everyonewithhisowneffortsisequalonthewaytosuccess.Secondly,peopleusuallyfeelstimulatedbythechallengesfromrivals.Undercompetitiononeturnsouttobemoreactiveandefficient.Furthermore,competitiongivesimpetustothefastdevelopmentofthemodernworld,inwhicheachpersonshowsgreaterinitiativeatwork.However,acompetitivesocietycanneverneglecttheimportanceofcooperation,forcompetitiondoesnotmeantheisolationfromothers.Infact,rightcooperationwithotherpeoplewillmakewiserandmoreeffectiveuseofourintelligenceandenergy,andthusincreasetheforcefulnessofcom-petition.

9.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety①Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Alongwiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyoursocietybecomesmoreandmorebeautifulandcomfortable.②Howevertherearesomethingsthatareincontrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywherenoawarenessofpublicsanitationbreakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldomyetitinfluencesourqualitiesoflives.④ForonethingtosomeextentwecannotenjoyagoodenvironmentandIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranotheritinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughatus.Lastbutnotleastinthequality-orientededucationtodayitbreachesthestandardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabovewemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentofoursocietyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelementwhichmakesourwholesocietylikeafam