读后续写写作Join the School Choir A gift box 学案-高三英语写作专项

读后续写写作：JointheSchoolChoirLookingbackatmylife,IfoundthatthemostimportanteventoccurredwhenIwasin4thgrade.Fromthebeginningofthesemester,IstartedlearningdancingeverySaturday,butIdidn'tdowellinthefirstfewmonths.Mrs.Smith,mydancingteacher,alsomymusicteacherinmyschool,keptteachingmeandhelpedmewitheverymovementButitalwaysenhancedtooslowly.Ibegantogiveupandcanceledthisclass.Fewdayslater,wehadamusicclassatschool.WesangsongswhileMrs.Smithwasplayingpiano.Thebeautifulmelodysuffused(thewholeclassroom.Everyonewasveryearnest,lookinguptheteacherandfollowingtherhythm.AlthoughIwasnotgoodatsinging,Iwassingingreallyhard.Allthethingsinthisclassroomseemedveryharmonious.Wehadafreeclassaftersinging.Wejustsatonourchairsandtalkedtoeachother.AndMrs.Smithstartedtotalkabouttheschoolchoirthatsheledverywell.I'veseensomemembersbefore,whoareexcellentandgraceful.IwasimaginingifonedayIjoinintheschoolchoirthatwillbereallyawesome:wehavecompetitionseverymonth;wedogreatperformanceeverytime;wegetpopularinourschool.Thosewerejustmyimagination.Idon'tthinkonedayIcanbeoneofthedancers.Justthen,Mrs.Smithsaidmynameintheclass,"Angelinawasinmydancingclass.Shewasreallyhard-workingandtough.Ihopeshecouldrejoininmyclassandpracticemoretobeamemberoftheschoolchoir."Everyoneturnedbackandlookedatmewithamazedface.Iflushedtomatored.Mrs.Smithwaspleasedtolaugh.Wehadareallysilentmoment.Andthenthebellrang,thestudentsbegantoleave.There'sagirlwalkinguptomewithsomeofherfriends.HernameisCarrie,whoisapianoplayerandalsorecommendedtojointheschoolchoir.Shefacedme,andsaidtoherfriends:"Doyouthinkshereallycanjointheschoolchoir?It'sunbelievable!”Herfriendsthrewherafaintsmile.Ididn'tevenreactforthisbriefmoment,andtheyleft.Paragraph1:

Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere'sastrongforcestrikingmypride.Paragraph2:

Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedtheschoolchoir.参考范文:

Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere’sastrongforcestrikingmypride.Iwasveryangryanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.Istoodup,walkingoutoftheclassroom.There’snooneelseonthefloor,justme.Iwalkedveryslowlywithheaddown.Thegentlebreezeflickedmyface.Istopped.There’sastrongvoicecomingfrommymind,“Gobacktothedancingclass.Don’tgiveupuntilyougetintotheschoolchoir,andyouwillprovetothemthatyoucanmakeit.”Later,Itooktheclassagain;Ipracticedeverynight.

Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.IdidthesamethingasIimaginedbefore.Carriewassurprisedaboutme.Shesaidsorrytomeatonce.Ijustfeltreallyhappyandenjoyableduringtherestofmyschoolyearsinelementaryschool.Atfirst,Iwasshyandlackedconfidence,butafterwardIwasaspirantandstrivedreallyhard.IrealizedthatIcandoanythingifIjustputonmorefocusandworkinghard,don’tgiveupeasilyandtrythebest.Iwillneverrepentmyfinaldecision.考场优秀作文1

Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere’sastrongforcestrikingmypride.Atthe

thoughtofCarrieandherfriendslaughingatmetomyface,Iwasovercomeby

theurgetoprovemyself.Mypreviousself-doubtgavewaytothefeelingofbeingoverlooked.IrejoinedthedancingclassandturnedtoMrs.SmitheverytimeIhaddoubtswithasinglemovement.ShewaspatientandkindasusualWhileIwasconcentratedandcareful.Overandoveragain,Ipracticeddancingafterschool,listeningtothemelodies,imitatingfacialexpressionsandmanagingtocarveeverymotionintomymind.Thefollowingseveralmonthswitnessedmystiffandclumsyfigureturnedsofterandlighter.Andeventually,IwascapableofdancingsmoothlyandgracefullyandthenIsignedupforthechoirconfidently.

Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.ThefirstdayIsteppedintotheclassroomoftheschoolchoir,IdiscoveredCarrie,standingamongtheothermembers,eyesgluedtome,chinsdropped.Ienjoyedsinginganddancingthatday,andafterclass,Carrieturnedtome.Sheshuffledup,flushedscarletandsaidsorrytome.Sheapologized,“Ishouldn’thavebeensorudetoyouandcouldwebecomefriends?”

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brightsmilecreptuponmyface.Ireachedoutmyhandsforher.Then,overthenextperiodoftime,wedidgreatperformancestogetherandgotpopularinourschool.Reflectingontheexperience,Iwasgrateful

tohersomehow.Afterall,itwasshethathelpedmetastethesweetofperseverance.考场优秀作文2

Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere’sastrongforcestrikingmypride.ReflectingonCarrie’soffensivewords,Isensedanemotionaltsunamiofrageandunyieldingdignitywashingoverme.“NeverwillIfail!”Isworetobeather,changinghermind.Fromthenon,IrejoinedMrs.Smith’sdancingclasswithblazingdetermination.Delightedtoseemypresence,sheofferedtotransformme,astiffwoodintoagracefulswan.However,Iwasstillunabletoadjustmymovementstofollowtherhythm.Oneday,whenIwasfrustratedandleaningagainstthewindow,Iwasinspiredbyatinybirdstretchingitsswingstoembracethesky.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethingchangedinmybody,Imadeanattempttomovelikethebird,twitteringandglidingandintegratingmyselfintothemusic.NotonlydidImakeit,butalsoputmorepracticeinit.ThenIkeptpracticingdayafterday.

Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.Theinstantthenewscame,allmytirednessandfatiguegavewaytono-edgeexhilarationandpride.Thenextday,Isteppedintotherehearsalroom,withmyheadraisedup.TherestoodCarrie,herchawopeningwideandhereyespoppingout!Whatanamusingexpression!Withthetonguetiedandherfacetomatored,shecameuptomeandapologizedtome,“I’mreallysorryandItakebackwhatIsaid!CanIplaythepianoforyourdancing?”Inoddedandhuggedher.Tobefrank,sheplayedwonderfully,holdingmeentirelyinhermusic.Amazingly,myimaginationcametrue:wedidhavecompetitionseverymonth;wedidgreatperformanceeverytime;wegotpopularinourschool!Tomygreatsurprise,Carriebecamemygoodfriend,thepreciousexperienceintheschoolchoirundoubtedlyhadalife-longimpactonme.读后续写写作：Agiftbox1.Inthebackofmyclosetisasmallboxthathasfollowedmetoeverynewaddress.It'sthefirstthingIfindaplaceforasthemovingtruckpullsaway.Theonlyremainingcontentsinitaredozensofnotesinmymother'stidywriting.2.Mymother,whoputherbusinessdegreetouserunningasmallcompanywithmyfather,whileraisingme,wasalwayspreparedandalwaysgavemeabundantlove.Bydaythemademarketingslogansanddistributionstrategies.Bynight:Hubblebathsandbedtimestories.SheandIhadthesameFebruarybirthday.Eachyearmyparentsarrangedwonderfulparties.3.WhenIwas3,shelearnedshehadadvancedbreastcancerandimmediatelybegantopreparebyresearchingeveryavailabletreatment.Eachday,shewouldsitforhoursatourdiningtable,herstraightdarkhairtiedback,surroundedbypilesofpaper,studying,technicalparagraphs.4.WhenIwas7,thematerialsonthediningtablebegantochange.Wrapping(包装)paperandribbonstooktheplaceofherhighlightedpages.Scissorsswishedthroughgiftwrap.Papercreased(折)underherfingers.Ribboncuttolengthwithonesnip.Knotscametogetherwithatinycreak.Swish,crease,snip,creak.Shehadbegunassembling(装配)agiftboxforme.5.Inside,shepackedpresentsandlettersforthemilestonesofmylifeshewouldmiss--graduation,wedding,andeverybirthdayuntiltheageof30.Mymotherdied10daysbeforeoursharedbirthday.Thatmorning,whenIturned12andshewouldhaveturned49,Iwokeupearlyandopenedtheboxasmymotherhadshownme.6.Neatrowsofbrightlywrappedpresentsglowedlikethespringtulips(郁金香)thatwerejustcomingupinthefrontyard.Inthepackagemarked"12thBirthday",Ifoundalittleringwithanamethyst(紫水晶)atitscenter.Awhitecardcurlingaroundthepresentread:"IalwayswantedabirthstoneringwhenIwasalittlegirl.Ihopeyoulikeit,too.Happybirthday,darlinggirl!Love,yourMommy.”para.1Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox.___________________________para.2TodayIhit31,andIsatinmyroom,holdingthenearlyemptybox.___________________________范文1Para.1:Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox.Theboxsatquietlyatthefootofmybed,asifwaitingforme.Iopenedit,foundoutthepackagelabeled“graduation”andunwrappedit.Astrandof(一串)pearlsmadeasoundlikeamaraca(沙球)asIdrewthemfromthebox.Hernoteread,“Thereseemedtobeatraditioninmyfamilythatwhengirlsgraduatedfromhighschool,theyreceivedastringofpearls.Youmustbeshinyattheceremony.”AsIread,Iwantedtofallthroughthewhite,lightlytextured(质地不平的)pageandintoherarms.Wearingthepearlsthatafternoon,Iacceptedmydiploma.Para.2:TodayIhit31,andIsatinmyroom,holdingthenearlyemptybox.For20yearsIhavepulledmothering(母亲的呵护)fromthebox.WhenIwasachild,openingthenextpackagefeltlikeatreasurehunt.AsIgrewolder,itbegantofeellikesomethingfarmorefundamental,hermessagesmeetingmelikeguideposts(路牌)inadarkforest.Thereisnogiftsleftintheboxnow,buttheselettersareaconstantreminderthatIhavealreadybeengivenwhateverychild,whateveryhuman,needs.Ihavebeenfiercely,extravagantly/ɪkˈstrævəɡəntli/(过度地),wildlyloved.Theloveispowerfulenoughtohelpmecarvemylifeinthenext20years,andmywholelife.范文2Para.1:Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox.Withgreatcare,Iopenedita