广州二模英语作文

广州二模谢昭霖1

假设你是李华。你的美国笔友Mike将到广州度假，以下是他给你发的邮件。请给他回信，欢迎他的到来，答复他的疑问，并提出合理建议。DearLiHua,I’mgoingtoGuangzhoufora2-weekholidayinMay.I’msoexcitedthatIfinallyhavethischancetomeetyouandyourcity.However,Iamabitworriedaboutthetrafficproblems.FromwhatIknow,trafficjamsareseriousinbigcities.DoyouthinkIshouldrentacar?HowshouldItravelaroundefficientlywhenI’minGuangzhou?Can’twaittoseeyou.Yours,Mike要点1

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要点3注意：Mike问的是“how”（方式），所以内容还是应该以“选择哪种交通方式”为主，而不是去哪里吃喝玩乐。2文章结构：Para1：收到来信，并表示欢迎Para2：答复疑问，提出建议Para3：期待你的到来3Para1收到来信，并表示欢迎参考“写作常用语句——祝贺信：句2，句3”表示“欢迎某人到来”的句型1.Ican’twaittoseeyou2.HowhappyIamtohearthat…3.I’velearnedwithdelightthat…e.g1.HowhappyIamtohearthatyouareplanningtovisitGuangzhou.2.I’mexcitedtolearnthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouinMay.4Para2答复疑问，提出建议1.用于回答的连接词当提及到就…而言至于；关于Whenitcomesto…,Intermsof…,Asfor…;Asto…e.g1.Whenitcomestothewaytotravelaroundthecity，主句.2.AsforyourconcernabouttravelingaroundGuangzhou，主句.5Para2答复疑问，提出建议2.表示“建议”的句型Isuggestthatyou(should)dosthIadviseyoutodosthYou’dbetterdosthIt’sagoodideatodosthIt’shighlyrecommendedthatyoucandosth引导原因的句型becauseyoucandosthifyouwanttodosthforthereasonthatyoucandosth4.whichenablesyoutodosth6Para2答复疑问，提出建议

推荐的交通方式：（1）坐地铁（2）坐公车（3）叫滴滴（4）骑共享单车（5）让我父亲载我们takeasubway;goto地点bysubwaybookaUberrideasharingbiketakeabus;goto地点bybus(1)takeyouanywhereyouwant(2)It'sconvenienttogosomewherefaraway(3)enjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway理由：askmyfathertogiveusaride7Para2答复疑问，提出建议e.g1.It'sagoodideatotakesubwayssincetheycantakeyouanywhereyouwant.2.Asharingbikeishighlyrecommended,whichenablesyoutoenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.8Para3期待你的到来Lookingforwardtoyourarrival/coming.9Reference2DearMike,I’mexcitedtolearnthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouinMay.Ican’twaittoseeyou.Asforyourconcernaboutthetraffic,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.

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thereisnoneedforyoutorentacar.Thereasonisthatyoumightbecaughtintrafficjams,especiallyinrushhour.Asweknow,publictransportationinGuangzhouisexcellent,whichmakesitconvenientforyoutogoanywhere.Notonlycanyoutakeabus,butyoucanbookaUber.Besides,tomakeyourtravellingefficiently,it’sagoodideatotakesubwaysforthereasonthattheytakeyouanywhere.Asharingbikeisalsoagoodchoice,whichenableyou