书面表达之求助信导学案-高三英语二轮复习

书面表达之求助信答案(2019·辽宁省六校协作体高三期初联考)假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛，已写好演讲稿。给教你英语口语一年并已回国一个月的外教Mr.Daniel写封邮件，请他帮你审核稿件并做出必要的修改。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题(Review):1.体裁____________________________________4.要点__________参考句式首段※I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.※I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.※IamLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginyourwritingclass.※I’mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyduringthesummervacation.※Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforapart-timejobinacertainforeigncompany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.※Ihavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.※Ihavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume,whichhasbeenattachedtothisletter.3.写作目的※I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.※I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresume.※I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavortooffermesomerevisiontips.中间段1.主旨句※Herearemyproblems.※Herearetheproblemsthathavebeendisturbingmelately.※Iwishyouwouldbesokindastogivemesomesuggestions/helponthefollowingproblems.2.要点内容1）文字※Foronething,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmeimprovemyvocabularyandgrammarusedinmyapplicationletter,whichisofgreatsignificancetome.※I’mafraidthattheremightbesomethegrammarandvocabularymistakesinmyapplicationmaterialsasaresultofmothertongueinterference(干扰).2）格式※Foranother,wouldyoubesokindastotellmeifmyapplicationletterhasbeenwritteninthecorrect(appropriate)format?※There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.结尾段Hopefully,yourkindhelpwouldbeofferedtome.Thanksforyourconsideration(kindness).Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.［常见困难句型拓展］1.Ihavetrouble/difficultyindoingsth.,whichhasannoyed/bothered/upsetmeforquitealongtime.2.Ifinditextremelychallengingformetodosth.3.Whattroublesmemostisthat……4.Ihavenoideaofhowtodo……5.Ihavesomedifficultywithsth.II.写前（Pre-writing）套用词组：做某事有麻烦__________________2.给某人帮助______________________havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.dosb.afavor/givesb.ahand3.寻求帮助______________________4.遇到一些问题______________________askforhelp/seekforhelpencountersomeproblems5.面临困难______________________6.忙于做某事________________________befacedwithdifficultiesbebusydoingsth./beengagedindoingsth.7.渴望做某事_____________________8.集中精力________________________beanxioustodosth./longtodosth.concentrateon/focuson套用句式：我写信想请您帮我一个忙。Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.Iamwritingtoaskyoutolend/givemeahand.我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，……其次，……最困扰我的是……Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…因此，我将感激不尽，如果你能提供些怎样克服以上问题的建议。Therefore,Iwillbemuchobligedifyoucanoffermesomeadviceonhowtoovercometheproblemsabove.词组:参加演讲比赛______________________2.修改______________________attendaspeechcontestdosomecorrections抽出时间做某事_____________________4.审核稿件_____________________sparetimetodosth.gothroughthedraft句式：语言无法表达我对你的思念。Wordsfailtoconveymymissingforyou.Nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveymymissingforyou.Beyonddescriptiongoesmymissingforyou.仿写：语言无法表达我的焦虑/高兴。Wordsfailtoconveymyanxiety/delight.2.自你回国已经一个月了。Wordsfailtoconveymyanxiety/delight.仿写：自你在这儿读书已有三个月了。Itisthreemonthssinceyoustudiedhere.下周我将参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。NextweekIwillattendanEnglishspeechcontestorganizedbymyschool.仿写：上个星期，我参加了在学校举行的篮球比赛。LastweekItookpartinabasketballgameheldintheschool.III.写中（While-writing）谋篇布局：三段式说明写信的目的－－寻求帮助。详细地说明自己的困难。表示感谢并期盼回复。写作模板:DearXX,IamLiHua,aSenior3studentstudyinginYunnanProvince.WordsfailtoconveymyworryingfeelingwhenIhavetroublein求助的事项方面.Bathedinananxiousatmosphere,I’mwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor.Iamfacedwiththreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…Therefore,Iwillbemuchobligedifyoucanhelpme.Hopefully,yourkindandtimelyhelpwillbeofferedtome.Iamprayingforyourpromptreplywithfullappreciation.Yourstruly,LiHua成篇：DearDaniel,（语言无法表达我对你的思念。(自你回国已经一个月了)afterteachingusspokenEnglishforayear.(我写信是想请你帮个忙)。（下周我将参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛）。ＩhavecompletedmyspeechdraftbutFacedwiththeaboveproblems,I’meagerthatyourkindandtimelyhelpwillbeofferedtome.Iamprayingforyourpromptreplywithfullappreciation.Yourstruly,LiHuaIII写后(post-writing)请检查你单词拼写、语法、上下文衔接、对某些句子进行润色和升华后，誉写在下面。DearMr.Daniel,Howtimeflies!It’sbeenamonthsinceyouwent