读后续写-追捕进行时导学案 高三英语二轮专题+

TheChaseisOnItwasdarkoutside.justafterthedinnerhour,whenBennyCorreaandAmandaDislerandthreeoftheirfivekidsclimbedintotheirblackCadillacEscalade.Astheypreparedtoexittheparkinglotoftherestaurantwherethey'djusteaten.adarkblueHondaCivicwithheavilytintedwindowscrossedtheirpath.“Yo.babe”Correahollered.“that'sthatcarThat'sthatcar!"Earlierintheday,DisleyhadmentionedanAmberAlertissuedforamissing11-year-oldgirlinBrimfield,Massachusetts,lessthan30milesfromthefamily'shomeinSpringfield.Thecarthatpassedthemwasthesamemakeandmodelastheonethathadbeenusedinherabduction.CorreatookahardrightoutoftheparkinglotandtailedtheHondainanefforttoviewthelicenseplate.Thedriverimmediatelyspedupandblewthroughastopsign.Correashockedhisfamilybyfollowingsuit.Hewasn'tabouttolosetheHonda.“Beingafather,hadtodowhatIhadtodo”hetoldABCNews.TheHondapulledaroundthebackofaliquorstore.“They'retryingtoditchme,"Correayelled.WhentheHondacamearoundtothefront,Correacaughtupandpulledahead,tryingtocutitoff.TheHondahitthebrakesandthenjumpedacurb.TheCadillac'shighbeamsflashedonthedriver-ayoungmanwithblackhair,pullingahoodedsweatshirtupoverhisface.Theycouldseehimforcingagirl'sheaddownintheback,asiftryingtohideher.Disley,whobythenhadcalled911,wasfranticallyrelayingtheirsituationtothedispatcher.“lt'shim!”sheyelledintothephone.“Thekidnapper!”Confused,thedispatcherasked,“TheblueHonda?Yes,it'shim!"CorreastayedclosebehindtheHonda,cuttingoffcarstodoso.Theywerenowbarrelingdowntheroadat100mph.“He'sgoingthroughredlights!"Disleyyelledtothepolice.Correaslammedonthebrakestoavoidanoncomingcarandthenhitthegastocatchup.“Gethim,Dad!”hissonshoutedexcitedlyfromtheback.KeepingontheHonda'stail,Correadiscoveredanotherproblem:ThelowgaslightwasblinkingontheCadillac'sdashboard.Infact,ithadbeenblinkingformuchofthe15-minutechase,andthebeat-upCaddy--they'dfindoutlaterthatthesuspensionhadbeendamagedduringthechase-wasrunningonfumesThecarsoonsputteredtoahalt.TheHondadisappearedontotheMassachusettsTurnpike.ButthankstoDisley'schatteranddirections,thecopshadplottedthepaththekidnapperwastakingandsetuparoadblockontheturnpike,trappingthecarsoonafter.Thedriverwas24-year-oldMiguelRodriguez.He'dpulledaknifeonCharlotteMocciaasshewalkedhomefromschoolandforcedherintohiscar.Ifshescreamed,he'dwarned,hewouldkillher.Mocciawasfoundhuddledinthebackseat,terrifiedbutunharmed.whichmightnothavebeenthecasehaditnotbeenforCorreaandDisley.“ltfeltlikewewonthelottery"Disleysays.“Thefeelingofknowingshe'ssafeandbackwithherfamilybecauseofusisjustunexplainable.para1:The

Cadillac

sooncametoastop

._____________________________________para2;Thekidnapperwas24-year

-old

named

Miguel

.________________________写作思路分析：（1）

文本内容本文主要讲了Correa一家晚饭后，在停车场发现了新闻中提及的绑匪，因此一家人驾车追踪，却因车没油了，且抛锚了而受阻。庆幸的是，妻子Disley一直在给警方提供信息，因此绑匪最后被成功抓住，8岁小女孩也获救的故事。文章的故事性和情节性较强，体现的主旨是社会主义。（2）文本基本信息Writingstyle

:narration

When--just

after

the

dinnerhourWhere--parking

lot

;road

Who--Correa;Disley

;Correa'sthree

kids

;

Miguel

(the

kidnapper

;

the8-year-oldgirl

(themissinggirl)What--Correa

drove

his

car

tochasetheHonda,

tryingtocatch

the

kidnapper

.Meanwhile

hiswife

,Disney

,reported

thesituation

to

thepolice

.(3)

人物性格分析--Correaand

Disley

Para2

(Correa

)

"Yo

,babe

,"Correa

yelled

,"that

isthat

car

.Thatisthatcar!"------careful

andsensitive

Para4(Correa)

Correa

tookahard

rightoutof

theparking

lotandclosely

followed

thaHonda

inaneffort

tosethecarnumber

.-----activeand

quick

-reacted

Para4(Correa)

Hewasn't

abouttolose

theHonda

-----responsible

andenthusiastic

Para

5(Correa

)

Correa

caught

upand

pulled

ahead

,trying

tocutitoff.----brave

;fearless;determined

Para6(Disley)

Disley

,whobythen

hadcalled

911,wasreportingtheir

situation

tothepolice.--careful;thoughtful

Thefamily

isunited

,sharing

thesamebelief

.Therepetition

ofthe

word

"yell"presentsus

thatthefamily

are

anxious

,eagering

tocatchthekidnapper

.（3）写作难点分析写这篇文章就如同在拍电影一样，由第一个提示句可知，主人公的车出了问题，那接下来就是要描写如何化解这个问题抓到绑匪。第二段根据提示语可知，已知抓到罪犯，所以写的是故事的结局，并点出主旨即可。注意在续写的时候对动作，语言和情感及场景的描写。二、语言学习（language

learning）

1、Understandingthestory

Correa

andhisfamily

haddinner

atarestaurant

andwereabouttoleave________theyspotted

aHondawith

heavily__________(color)

windows

,whichwas

__________(report)

involved

inacase,where

an

8-year-old

girlwaskidnapped.Immediately

,Correa

___________(加速），closelyfollowing

theHondain

an

____________toseethecarnumber

.And

his

wife

,Disley

calledthepolice

stationtoreportthesituation

.Thekidnapper,well_______ofwhatwashappening

,hetriedeverymeans

possible

to

_____

___________thecar

followinghim.Unfortunately

for

Correa

,hisgas

wassoon

running

______and

whatmadethesituation

evenworse

wasthatthe

suspension

hadbeen

damaged

duringthe

chase

.He

hadto

_________hiscar.2、词组积累1

、停车场

parkinglot

2、偶遇某人

crosssb'spath;comeacross;bumpinto

3、涂了很重的颜色的玻璃

theheavily

coloredwindows

4、提到、谈及、查阅

referto

5、为了，试图（介短）

inanattempt/efforttodo6、加速

speedup;accerlerate

7、学样，模仿

followsuit

8、甩掉，除掉

getridof

9、截止那辆车

cutoffthecar

10、把衬衫拉上来遮住脸

pull

uptheshirtoverhis

face

11、朝电话里大喊

yellintothephone

12、猛踩刹车

salm

onthebrakes13、更糟糕的是

what

wasworse;worsestill

14、停了下来

cometoastop

/halt

三、段落开头语分析Para1

:

The

Cadillac

sooncametoastop

._____________________________________第一段眼看绑匪驾车消失的懊恼以及妻子提供给警方的信息，铺垫了绑匪落网的结局.Thekidnapperwas24-year

-old

named

Miguel

.________________________1、WhatwouldhappentotheHonda?

2、Whatwas

Correa'sfeeling?3、How

would

Correa

reacttotheunexpected

situation?4、Was

there

anyone

canoffer

help

?5、Howaboutthepolice

?思路：Correa停下车，Honda消失在远方-----Correa无可奈何，生气失望------在Disley继续打电话告诉警察罪犯的行踪-----Correa一家焦急的等待------罪犯被抓住场景一：本田消失了

（WhatwouldhappentotheHonda？）1.The

Hondabegantopullthedistance

gradually

,disappearing

inoureyesightsquickly.本田开始逐渐拉开距离，很快消失在我们的视线中。2.The

dark

blue

Honda

spedup

,only

toleaveashanddirt

dancingintheair

.(寻找货拉拉中的句子）深蓝色的本田加速，只留下灰尘和泥土在空中飞舞。3.Though

theHonda

wasjustacrossroadsaway,

hefailed

tocatchhim.虽然本田车离他只有一个十字路口，但他没能赶上他。4.Beforehecould

dosomething,theHonda

was

already

nowheretobeseen.他还没来得及做点什么，本田就已经不见踪影了.5.Atthatverymoment

,thedark

blueHonda

withheavily

colored

windows

spedup

,disappearing

inthedistance

.就在那一刻，深蓝色的本田（Honda）加速行驶，车窗颜色浓重，消失在远处。场景二:Correa的心情（失望；生气）1.Correastampedhisfeet,annoyedthattheHondashoulddisappearoutofsight

atsuchadisadvantage.

科雷亚跺脚，对本田在如此不利的情况下消失在视线之外感到恼火。2.Staring

attheHondazoomingpasthim

,

Correa

trembledwithrage.盯着从他身边飞过的本田车，科雷亚气得发抖。3.Correa

hadastrongsenseoflossandstamped

hisfoot

inanger

,staringattheHondazoomingaheadofthem.科雷亚有一种强烈的失落感，愤怒地跺着脚，盯着在他们前面疾驰的本田车。4.A

senseofmountinganxiety

graduallyfilledtheCorrea'smind

.科雷亚的脑海里渐渐充满了一种日益增加的焦虑感。5.Nevercouldhehaveimaginedthat

thekidnapper

shouldhaveescaped

this

way

!他怎么也想不到绑匪竟然这样逃走了！6.The

Honda

disppeared,watching

the

kidnapper's

carvanished

,the

kidscoulddo

nothing

butkeeping

stampingtheir

feetwildly.本田车突然停了下来，看着绑匪的车消失了，孩子们只能继续疯狂地跺脚。7.It's

awfully

terrible

.We

havelostthekidnapper

!"

Correashouted

whilehitting

thesteeringwheelhard

.太可怕了，我们失去了绑匪！科雷亚一边大声喊道，一边使劲打方向盘。场景三:

如何抓到绑匪1.Meanwhile,Disley

keptoninforming

thepolicewheretheywereandinwhatdirction

thekidnapper

wasgoing

.Based

onthegiveninformation

,thepolice

soonlocated

theHondaandlayinwait

forhim

where

thekidnapper

wastopass.与此同时，迪斯利不停地通知警方他们在哪里，绑匪要往哪个方向走。根据所提供的信息，警方很快找到了本田，并在绑匪要经过的地方埋伏等待他。2.Fortunately,thanksto

Disley

'scontinuous

directions,thepolice

hadblocked

thepath

thekidnapper

was

taking

andsetup

aroadblock

ontheway

,trappingthecarsoon.幸运的是，多亏了迪斯利不断的指点，警方封锁了绑架者的道路，并在路上设置了路障，很快就把车困住了。3.Fortunately,withthe

accurate

information

offeredbyDisley

,thecops

successfully

followedthetracesofthekidnapper

,plotted

thepath

hewastakingandsetup

aroadblock

ontheroad

,trapping

thecar

soonafter

.幸运的是，在迪斯利提供的准确信息下，警察成功地追踪了绑架者的踪迹，规划了他要走的道路，并在路上设置了路障，不久就把车困住了。场景四：Correa一家焦急的等待警察抓捕的结果1.Theywere

waitinganxiously

inthecar,hoping

thepolice

would

catchthe

kidnapperandrescuethe

littlegirl.他们在车里焦急地等待着，希望警察能抓住绑架者并营救小女孩。2.Watching

thecriminal

withhiscar

outofsight

,thewhole

familycoulddonothing

butstayintheirowncar

,waiting

anxiously

forthepolice

.看着罪犯的车消失在视线之外，全家只能呆在自己的车里，焦急地等待警察。场景五：衔接下一句1.And

itwasnotlongbeforethat

themanwasinthepolice'snet.不久，该男子就落入了警方的网中2.And

the

kidnapper

wasarrested.绑架者被逮捕了。3.It

wasnotlong

before

thepolice

calledback

tosaythat

thegirl

wassaved

andthekidnappedwas

caught

.

不久，警察打电话回来说，女孩得救了，被绑架的人被抓住了。第二段绑匪被抓住后的神情，被救女孩的状态以及其家人的感激.1、Wasthekidnapper

caughtsuccessfully?2、Was

the8-year

-old

girlsaved

successfully

?And

shehurtornot?3、What

would

thefamily

do?Whatwould

theysay

?4、

What

would

Correa

orhiswifesay

?思路：Miguel绑架小女孩的原因-----小女孩被救出时的场景------女孩一家对Correa一家的感激之情-----主题升华场景一：绑架者绑小女孩的原因1.Having

beenoutof

workforquitealongtime,hehadnomoney

inhispocket.他失业很长时间了，口袋里没有钱。2.

Seeing

thegirl

wandering

aloneonthe

street

,he

tookheraway,wantingtogetsomemoney

fromhisparents

.看到那个女孩独自一人在街上徘徊，他就把她带走了，想从父母那里弄点钱。3.Heflanklyconfessed

[kənˈfes]

坦白(错误或罪行)tothecops

thathe'd

pulled

aknifeon

an8-year-old

girlin

Brimfield

,Massachusetts

as

shewalked

homefrom

school

andforced

herinto

hiscar.他坦率地向警方供认，他在马萨诸塞州布里姆菲尔德的一名8岁女孩放学回家时拔出一把刀，将她逼上了他的车。场景二：女孩被救出的场景1.The

missinggirl

wasfound

huddled[ˈhʌdl](

缩成一团)intheback

seat

,terrifiedbut

unharmed.失踪的女孩被发现蜷缩在后座，惊恐万分，但安然无恙。2.Whentheyopenedthedoor,huddling

atthe

backseat

wasthemissinggirl

.当他们开门时，蜷缩在后座的是失踪的女孩。3.Themissinggirlwas

taken

tothepolicestationwherehereager

parentswere

waiting

forher.失踪的女孩被带到警察局,她热切的父母在那里等她。4.The

poorgirl

ranintohermother's

arms,

streaks[striːks]

oftearsstreamingdown

hercheeks

.

这个可怜的女孩跑进了她母亲的怀里，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来5.Thepoorgirl

wasfound

huddledinthe

backseat

,trembling

withfear