九年级上册Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.演示文稿1

英语写作评价量表维度A等B等C等D等一结构赋分(4分)写作内容结构清晰可见,有合理性,明显的分段。(4分)写作内容结构不是很清晰,有分段。(2分)写作内容结构混乱。(0分)内容赋分(5分)符合要求,内容充实。(5分)符合要求,内容不充实。(3.5分)基本符合要求,内容很不充实。(2分)跑题,偏题,不知所云。(0分)三写作技巧词组，句型，复合句赋分(6分)能大量使用已学固定搭配，基本句型，适当的运用复合句组织写作内容,不重复且表达恰当,准确。(6分)能使用已学的固定搭配，基本句型，使用少量复合句组织写内容,重复少且基本准确。(4.5分)能使用3—5个已学固定搭配，基本句型，没有使用复合句组织写作内容,有重复,且有少量的错误。(3分)基本不能使用已学固定搭配和基本句型组织写作内容,错误很多。(0—2分）时态赋分(4分）能根据写作要求和写作内容准确地选择时态，准确无误。（4分）能根据写作要求和写作内容准确地选择时态，有少量的错误（2分）不能根据写作内容准确地选择和切换时态，通篇时态混乱，存在大量错误。（0分）逻辑赋分（4分）写作内容中句子之间，段落之间逻辑明显，且有明显的and，but等逻辑关联词，（4分）写作内容中句子之间，段落之间逻辑不明显，关联词使用不足，不合理。（3分）写作内容中句子之间，段落之间逻辑混乱，无关联词（1分）四书写（2分）整洁，美观（2分）较整洁，美观不够（1分）不整齐，涂涂抹抹。糟糕（0分）范文一Thisweekend,ourfamilyhadabigget-together.Mygrandparentssaidtheyhaven’tseenusforalongtime.Sotheyaskedallofustocomehomethisweekend.Myuncle’sfamilyandmineallcamehomeontime.TheiradultstalkedhappilyandIplayedwithmylittlecousin.Ihaven’thadsuchagreattimeforalongtime.Thisweekend,Icouldplay,eatbigmealandreceivepresent.Ilovefamilytime.

范文二I

had

a

happy

weekend

last

week.

I

was

very

excited.

On

Saturday,

I

visited

XiHui

park

with

my

family

in

the

morning.

We

saw

kinds

of

flowers

in

the

park.

They

were

so

beautiful.

We

all

liked

them

very

much.

Then

we

watched

an

animal

show

in

the

zoo.

In

the

afternoon

we

went

shopping

in

the

supermarket.

There

were

a

lot

of

things

in

it.

We

bought

some

foods

and

tasted

them.

After

that

we

went

home.

I

watched

a

funny

cartoon.

Then

I

did

my

homework

and

helped

mother

do

some

housework.’

How

a

happy

weekends.范文三Iwas

so

happy

last

weekend.Let

me

tell

you.

On

Saturday,

I

got

up

at

seven

o’clock

in

the

morning.I

brushed

my

teeth

and

washed

my

face

before

I

ate

breakfast.Then

I

went

to

children’s

palace

and

had

a

Math

lesson.When

I

went

home,

I

ate

lunch

at

once

because

I

had

a

Music

lesson

at

noon.In

the

afternoon,I

watched

a

film

and

played

with

my

friend.

I

did

some

homework

in

the

evening,.

On

Sunday

morning,I

cilmbed

the

hill

with

my

mother

and

her

friends.In

the

afternoon,I

had

an

Engilsh

lesson.It

was

very

interesting.An

American

teacher

taught

us.And

we

were

very

happy.

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