英语教材解读人教八年级上册英语写作课件

e.g.Thisismyowncamera.

这是我自己的相机。1.ownadj.&adv.

自己的;本人的常用结构：“one’sown+事物”某人自己的事物e.g.Personal

healthisnecessaryforthisjob.这项工作需要健康的身体。2.personaladj.

个人的；私人的Thiskindofdogcanguidetheblindperson.这种狗能引导盲人行走。名词person(人)+al→personal个人的e.g.TherelationshipbetweenMr.Smithandhissonisveryclose.

史密斯先生和他儿子的关系很亲密。3.

relationshipn.

关系名词relation+ship→relationship关系1.Ideasforimprovingmyphysicalhealth___________________________________2.Ideasforimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends____________________________________________________________________getmoreexercise;helpmomcookmeals;helpmyfriendsWriteyourresolutionsunderthefollowingheadings.eatmorevegetableswiththeirEnglishhomework3b3.Ideasfordoingbetteratschool______________________________________________________________________makeaweeklyplanforschoolwork;workhardatmathandEnglishWhatareyourfirst/second/thirdresolutions?Iamgoingto…Howareyougoingtodothat?Iamgoingto…Useyournotestowritethreemoreparagraphsaboutyourresolutions.Ineachparagraph,writewhatyouaregoingtodoandwhy.3c【写作任务】假如你和你的美国朋友Rick分享了第一个新年计划之后，他表示对你的其他三个计划也很感兴趣。请根据所给提示，写一篇短文介绍你的另外三个计划，并说明你打算如何去做以及为什么这么做。Thesecondresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth._______________________________________Thethirdresolutionisaboutimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends._______________________________________Thelastresolutionsisabouthowtodobetteratschool._______________________________________【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：说明文时态：以一般将来时为主人称：第一人称2.谋布局、写句子计划二Mysecondresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth.(1)_______________________________________________________________(我打算少吃垃圾食品、不再熬夜)becausetheyarebadformyhealth.IamnotgoingtostayuplateIamgoingtoeatlessjunkfoodand计划三Mythirdresolutionisaboutimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends.(2)______________________________________(我计划帮我父母做家务).Atthesametime,(3)________________________________________________(我将和他们讨论我在学校遇到的问题).IhopemyparentsandIcanbelikefriends.(4)_________________________________________________________________(我计划和朋友们分享更多的快乐，更加地关心他们).Ihopewewillhaveabetterrelationship.Iamgoingtohelpmyparentswithhousework

IamgoingtodiscussmyproblemsatschoolwiththemIamgoingtosharemorehappinesswithmyfriendsandcaremoreaboutthem计划四Mylastresolutionisabouthowtodobetteratschool.(5)_______________________________________________________________________________(我将在课上记录重点内容，准时完成作业).Ithinkthesethingscanhelpmeimprovemygrades.Iamgoingtowritedowntheimportantpointsinclassandfinishmyhomeworkontime3.

巧衔接本文在罗列另外三个(threeother)新年计划时，用second,third,last这类表达列举顺序关系的词语使文章连贯。此外，说明如何实现新年计划时，应用begoingto...结构,

表示打算做某事，这样做能使文章连贯。4.

成篇章Hey,Rick!HereIwanttosharemythreeotherresolutionswithyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.

化“平凡”为“非凡”Iamgoingtokeepthem.

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I'msureIcanmakeitifItrymybesttokeepthem.Hey,Rick!HereIwanttosharemythreeotherresolutionswithyou.Mysecondresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth.IamgoingtoeatlessjunkfoodandIamnotgoingtostayuplatebecausetheyarebadformyhealth.Mythirdresolutionisaboutimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends.Iamgoingtohelpmyparentswithhousework.Atthesametime,Iamgoingtodiscussmyproblemsatschoolwiththem.IhopemyparentsandIcanbelikefriends.Also,Iamgoingtosharemorehappinesswithmyfriendsandcaremoreaboutthem.Ihopewewillhaveabetterrelationship.Mylastresolutionisabouthowtodobetteratschool.Iamgoingtowritedown