2023学年完整公开课版Unit11CommunicationWorkshopLetterWriting（必修4）

LetterWritingU11CommunicationWorkshopAttheendofthelesson,youwillgetaclearideaofdifferencesofaformalletterandaninformalletterinlanguageandlayout.2.beabletouselinkingwordsforcontrastingideas.3.beabletowriteaformallettertoanewspaper.ObjectivesPre-writing–language1.Readanddecidewhichisformalandwhichinformal2.Underlinetheinformallanguage&theformallanguageInformalFormalHiSue/DearSue2.ButIthink…3.

I’m…;I’ve

…4.Writesoon.5.Love6.Steve7.Anyway/Youknowwhat?Verywell,Ihope.Goodnews?DearEditor(DearSir/Madame)2.However,…3.Iam…/Ihave…4.Ilookforwardto…5.Yoursfaithfully6.STEVEMORGAN

Mr.StevenMorgan

DearEditor/DearSir(Madame)2.Nocontractions(不用缩写）

e.gI’m;We’ll

3.Nocolloquialvoc.(不用口语词汇）

e.g.Youknowwhat?Anyway,Well,..;Pleasewritesoon!but…3.Usecompleteandlongsentences4.Usefullnames××Pre-writing--layout28WexfordGroveTamford9THJanuary,2004TamfordEveningNews,12MainStreetTamford.

DearEditor,Iamwritingtoprotestabouttheplanforanewairport.Manypeoplehavebeenagainsttheideafromthestart.However,thegovernmentisplanningtogoaheadwiththebuildingnextyear.First,thegovernmentsaysthattheairportwillbringusindustryandjobs.However,inmyopinion,itwillruinthecharacterofTamford,ahistoriccountrytown.Althoughtheairportwouldbringtourists,Iamnotsuretheywouldwanttostayinadirty,industrialtown.Nomatterwhatthegovernmentsays,itisclearthattheairportwillalsoaffectourhealth.Problemswillincreaseeventhoughthegovernmenthaspromisedusanewhospital.Airpollutionwillgetworseandthiswillbeharmfultopeople,forexample,itcancausecancer.Noisepollutionwillalsohaveaneffectonthehousesandschoolsneartheairport.Ithinkotherpeopleshouldwritetothegovernmentaboutthisproblem.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantostopthisairport.Ilookforwardtoreadingmorelettersaboutthismatterinyournewspaper.Yoursfaithfully,STEVEMORGANMrSteveMorganSender’saddressthedateBodyPara1.Para2.Para3.Para4.--purposeofwriting--detailsoftheproblem(dividedopinions)--suggestionsforaction-DearEditor,(DearSir/Madame）Receiver’saddressGreeting:EndingIlookforwardto…YoursfaithfullySteveMorganMrSteveMorganSign-offPurposeOpinions(detailsoftheproblem)ForAgainst(youropinion)

Suggestionsprotestabouttheplanforanewairportbringindustry&jobsbringtouristsruinthetownwont’likeadirty,industrialtownaffectourhealth(airpollution&noisepollution)Otherresidentsshouldwritetothegovernment……doeverythingwecantostop…ReadtheletterandcompletethetablePre-writing—linkingLinkingwordsforContrastingideas

howeveralthougheventhoughnomatterwhat/when/where…despitesth.neverthelessWhile-writingTosolvethecar-parkingproblemintheresidentialquarter(小区),thepropertymanagementcompany(物业管理公司)isplanningtorebuildasmallparkinthequarterintoaparkinglot.Youareagainsttheplan.PleasewritealettertoBeijingEvening,complainingabouttheplan.Stage1.discussingroupsandcompletethetablePurpose

protestabouttheplanforrebuildingthesmallparkintoaparkinglotOpinionsForAgainst(youropinion)

SuggestionsWhile-writing

28WexfordGroveTamford9THJanuary,2004TamfordEveningNews,12MainStreetTamford.

DearEditor,

Iamwritingtoprotestabouttheplanforanewairport.Manypeoplehavebeenagainsttheideafromthestart.However,thegovernmentisplanningtogoaheadwiththebuildingnextyear.First,thegovernmentsaysthattheairportwillbringusindustryandjobs.However,inmyopinion,itwillruinthecharacterofTamford,ahistoriccountrytown.Althoughtheairportwouldbringtourists,Iamnotsuretheywouldwanttostayinadirty,industrialtown.Nomatterwhatthegovernmentsays,itisclearthattheairportwillalsoaffectourhealth.Problemswillincreaseeventhoughthegovernmenthaspromisedusanewhospital.Airpollutionwillgetworseandthiswillbeharmfultopeople,forexample,itcancausecancer.Noisepollutionwillalsohaveaneffectonthehousesandschoolsneartheairport.Ithinkotherpeopleshouldwritetothegovernmentaboutthisproblem.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantostopthisairport.Ilookforwardtoreadingmorelettersaboutthismatterinyournewspaper.Yoursfaithfully,STEVEMORGANMrSteveMorganStage2.writetheletterfollowingthesamplePost–writing---Peereditingyourevaluationclear

layout?yesnonecessary

linkingwords?yesnocorrecttense?

yesnoproperstyle(formal)?

yesnoEvaluatio