初中英语九年级主题作文13-保护环境

主题：环境保护

导读本单元的主题是保护环境，引导同学们培养环保意识，关注和保护环境.与本主题有关的英语作文命题通常有提示性作文和看图作文等.同学们写此类作文时，要注意点明写作意图,描述问题所在，并提出解决问题的建议.可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多，如Howtoprotecttheenvironment,Creatingagreenerworld,Walkingtoschoolisagoodchoice等.题目回放随着社会的发展，我们的生活越来越便利，但我们周围的环境问题却变得日益严峻.环境问题严重影响着人们的工作、学习和生活.我们应该如何保护环境呢?假如你是李华，你校要在6月5日这个世界环境日开展以“保护我们的环境”为主题的演讲比赛.请你自拟标题，根据以下要求,写一篇90词左右的英语演讲稿.写作要求：L举例说明现存的环境问题；2.说明我们应采取怎样的措施保护环境.审题指引1审体裁：演讲稿，属于应用文.2审内容：点明环境现状和问题，提出应对措施.3审时态：以一般现在时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：第一段点明环境现状，引入主题.中间：主体段落列举现存的环境问题.结尾：最后针对问题提出具体应对措施.范文:CreatingagreenerworldHello,everyone!IamLiWen,a15-year-oldChineseboyfromtheWuxiSunshineMiddleSchool.Asweallknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseacrosstheglobe.Luckily,theChinesegovernmentsatalllevelshavetakenmeasurestoimprovetheenvironment.Thefactoriesthatcausedpollutionhavebeenshutup,andthenewenergyfromwind,waterandsolarpowerisbeingfullyused.Tohelpreduceairpollution,Ioftengotoschoolonfoot.Besides,Iremembertoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavingmyhouseormyclassroom.Moreover,Talwaysreuserecyclables,suchasfoodcansandbrownbags.Ibelieveaslongaswetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentaroundus,wewillhaveagreenerworld.Thankyou.段落素描.Firstparagraph:TodayisJune5,anditisWorldEnvironmentDay.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironmentbecause...(TodayisJune5,celebratedasWorldEnvironmentDayaroundtheglobe.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironment,forthepollutionaroundus...)(...).Thebody:Overthepastfewyears,ourgovernmentshavedonesomethingtocontrolpollution,butitstillexists.Mostvehiclesemit..:somepeoplethrowtrashandinsomeareas,farmerspollutethesoilwithchemicals...(Inrecentyears,governmentsatvariouslevelshavetakenmeasurestocontrolpollution,butitstillarises.Insomeareas,factoriesdischargeelectronicproductsproduceandsomepeoplecutdowntrees,...)(...).Lastparagraph:Therefore,wemustfindwaystoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecan...Besides,weshould...(Inviewofthesefacts,wemusttakeactiontoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecan...Moreimportantly,weneedto...)(...)范本淬炼AProtectingourenvironmentHello,everyone!TodayisJune5,anditisWorldEnvironmentDay.It①remindsustoprotecttheenvironmentbecausethepollutionaroundus②doesharmtoourhealth.Overthepastfewyears,ourgovernmenthasdonesomethingtocontrolpollution,butitstillexists.Mostvehicles③emitexhaustgasandmakenoise;somepeoplethrowtrashintorivers;andinsomeareas,farmerspollutethesoilwith④chemicalssuchasfertilizersandpesticides.Therefore,wemustfindways⑤toprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecangotoschoolbybus,bybikeoronfoot*Besides,weshoulduselessplasticbags,⑥whichcausewhitepollution4①remindsb.todosth.,提醒某人做某事.②doharmto,损害.③emitexhaustgasandmakenoise,排放废气和产生噪音.④chemicalssuchasfertilizersandpesticides,诸如化肥和杀虫剂等化学品.⑤toprotect…是动词不定式短语充当后置定语，修饰前面的ways.⑥which引导非限制性定语从句.亮点点评.文章紧扣保护环境这一主题，内容完整，要点齐全，段落清晰..文中运用了一些不同的句式，如because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句,为文章增色不少..作者使用了较为丰富的词汇和短语，如remindsb.todosth.,doharmto,control,exist,vehicle,emit等，增强了文章的生动性.ProtectingourenvironmentHello,everyone!TodayisJune5,①celebratedasWorldEnvironmentDayaroundtheglobe.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironment,forthepollutionaroundushasseriously②affectedourhealthanddailylife.Inrecentyears,governmentsatvariouslevelshave③takenmeasurestocontrolpollution,butitstillarises.Insomeareas,factories④dischargewastesmoke,exhaustgas,wastewater,andresidualwaste;⑤electronicproductsproduceelectromagneticradiation;andsomepeoplecutdowntrees,⑥resultinginincreasedcarbondioxideintheair.⑦Inviewofthesefacts,wemusttakeactiontoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecangotoschoolbybusoronfoot,andtellourrelativesandfriendstogotoworkbybusor(8)bysubwaytraininsteadofbycar.Moreimportantly,weneedtosaveasmuchenergyaspossible⑨bysavingwater,turningoffthelightswhenweleavethehouse,andusingrecyclablepaperinourstudies.①celebratedas…，作为….••被庆祝.②affectourhealthanddailylife,影响我们的健康和日常生活.③takemeasures,采取措施.④discharge,并日出.⑤electronicproducts,电子产品.⑥resultinginincreasedcarbondioxideintheair,导致空气中二氧化碳增加,此处现在分词短语充当结果状语.⑦inviewofthesefacts,鉴于这些事实.⑧bysubwaytrain,乘坐地铁.⑨bysavingwater,通过节水.亮点点评L开篇直接点明污染环境造成的危害，主体段落叙述影响环境的具体问题，最后提出改善环境的措施.与上文相比，本文叙述更完整,内容更丰富..文章句式多样，除了用简单句、并列句外，还用了现在分词充当结果状语和by+动名词等句式，显示了作者驾驭多种句式的能力..文中用inrecentyears,insomeareas,inviewofthesefacts,moreimportantly等用语衔接句子，使文章逻辑性更强，上下文更连贯..比起上面的二类文，本文用词更丰富，如seriously,atvariouslevels,arise,wastesmoke,exhaustgas,residualwaste等用语增强了文章的感染力.佳作赏析AHowtosaveenergy①Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,theresourcesontheearth②tendtobedecreased.Inordertoprotect③theexistingresourcesandsaveenergy,somethingmustbedone.Firstofall,asasourceoflife,waterisveryimportanttous.Weshouldprotectwater,especiallydrinkingwater,andpreventfactoriesfromdischargingpollutedwaterintorivers.Besides,wemustsaveelectricity④byturningoffthelightswhenweleavethehouse.Moreover,weneedtostopcuttingdowntreesandincreaseforeststomakeourworldagreenerone.⑤Mostimportantly,wearesupposedtosaveourresourcesby⑥reusingrecyclables,suchasfoodcans,brownbagsandplasticbottles.Inshort,everyoneshould⑦takeactiontoprotecttheenvironmentandsaveenergy.①withtherapiddevelopmentof…，随着,…•的快速发展.②tendto,趋于.③theexistingresources,现有资源.④by,通过.此处后接动名词.⑤mostimportantly,最重要的是.⑥reuserecyclables,重复使用可回收物品.⑦takeaction,采取行动.亮点点评L本文首段简介节约能源的原因和意义,主体段落说明如何节约能源，尾段再次点明主题.文章结构分明,层次清晰..文中运用了多种句式，如动词不定式充当目的状语以及when引导的时间状语从句等..衔接语如firstofall,besides,moreover,mostimportantly等使文章逻辑性强，上下文连贯通顺..文中词汇和短语丰富，如withtherapiddevelopmentof...,tendto,especially,prevent...from...,saveelectricity,reuserecyclables,takeaction等，增强了文章的感染力和生动性.WhatIdotoprotecttheenvironment①Atpresent,wearefacingseriousenvironmentalproblems,especiallyairpollutionandwaterpollution.②Tomakeourlifebetter,Ioftentrytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Firstofall,Ialways③switchoffthelightswhenIleavethehousetosaveelectricity.Besides,whenIbrushmyteeth,Ineverwastethetapwater.Also,Ioftentellmyparentsandfriendstogotoworkbybus④insteadofbycaranduserecyclablebagswhengoingshopping.Moreover,Ialwayssavepaperbywritingonbothsidesofthepaperattheschool.Inmymind,⑤onlywheneveryonetriestoprotecttheenvironmentcanwehaveabetterplacetolivein.Iwill⑥keepmyhabitofprotectingtheenvironment.①atpresent,目前②tomakeourlifebetter是动词不定式，充当目的状语.③switchoff,关闭.©insteadof,而不是.此处后接介词短语.⑤onlywhen…是only+时间状语引起的倒装句.⑥keepmyhabit,保持我的习惯.亮点点评.开篇简要介绍保护环境的背景和意义，主体段落叙述作者自己采取的措施，结尾呼吁大家保护环境并说明自身将保持爱护环境的习惯.文章布局合理，逻辑清晰..文章句式丰富，除多次运用when引导的时间状语从句外,还运用了动词不定式作目的状语、when+现在分词、by+动名词，以及only+时间状语引起的倒装句等句式..文中用firstofall,besides,also,moreover,inmymind等衔接语,把文章紧密连接起来，增强了段落和句子之间的连贯性.CProtectingtheearthAtpresent,suchenvironmentalproblemsasglobalwarming,the①significantlyincreasingacidrainanddeserts,reducedforestsand②non-renewableresources,waterandairpollutionhaveposedseriouschallengestohumanbeings.3)Consideringthesefacts,wemusttakemeasurestoprotecttheearth.Firstofall,weshoulddoourbesttosaveenergy.Whenweleaveourhome,weshouldturnoffthe④electricappliances;whenwegotoschoolorgotowork,wecantakeabusorrideabike.Besides,weneedtosaveforestsbycuttingdownnotreesandplantingmoretrees.Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtoreuserecyclables,suchasbrownbagsandfoodcans.⑤Anyway,sincewehaveonlyoneearth,weshoulddoeverythingtoprotectit.significantlyincreasing,显著增力口.non-renewableresources,不可再生资源.③consideringthesefacts,考虑到这些事实.electricappliances,电器.⑤anyway,无论如何.亮点点评.文章思路清晰,段落设计合理.开篇列举环境污染的各种问题,中间段落说明环境保护的具体措施，尾段呼吁大家保护环境..灵活运用长短句，并注意交叉使用简单句和复合句(如含状语从句的复合句)，避免了句式单调..用firstofall,besides,lastbutnotleast,anyway等衔接语，使段落之间和句子之间衔接紧密，表达流畅自然.用词丰富、精准,如使用globalwarming,significantlyincreasing,non-renewableresources,poseseriouschallenges,considering,electricappliances等，增力U了文章亮点.素材宝库.好词妙语usedtobeclean过去彳艮干净getworseandworse变得越来越严重reduceairpollution减少空气污染theadvantages/disadvantagesof....…一的优（缺）点beharmfultotheenvironment对环境有害haveaninfluence/impacton...对有影响non-renewableresources不可再生资源consideringthesefacts考虑到这些事实tendtobedecreased趋于被减少theexistingresources现有资源resultinincreasedcarbondioxideintheair导致空气中的二氧化碳增加.提分佳句Thisisnotonlycruel,butalsoharmfultotheenvironment.这不但残忍，而且对环境有害.Youcansaveelectricitybyturningoffthelightswhenyouleavethehouse.你可以通过离家时关闭电灯来节约用电.Ourjointeffortswillmakeagreatdifferenceandbringaboutabetterfuture.我们的共同努力可以起很大作用,带来更美好的未来.Ithinkitisagreatideathatyouhavetopayforplasticbagsinsomestores.在一些商店里你得为塑料袋付费，我认为这是一个好主意.Remembertothrowrubbishindustbinsandkeeppublicplacescleanandbeautiful.记住要把垃圾扔在垃圾箱里并且保持公共场所干净而漂亮.Weshouldwritetothegovernmenttomakethemclosedownthefactoriesthatcausepollution.我们应当给政府写信让他们关闭那些引起污染的工厂.Ifeveryonemakescontributionstobuildingagreencity,theworldwillbecomeabetterplaceforeveryonetolivein.如果每个人都为建设绿色城市做出贡献，世界将变成一个更适合每个人居住的地方.Tosavetheearthistosaveourselves.拯救地球就是拯救我们自己.Wemusttakeactiontoprotectwildanimals.我们必须采取措施保护野生动物.Wecannotwaitanylonger.Justtakeaction!我们再也不能等了.采取行动吧！Protectingtheenvironmentiseveryone*sresponsibility.保护环境，人人有责.写作预热.句子改错Pollutionisharmtoalllifeontheearth.Eattoomuchsugarcanleadtohealthproblems.Protectingtheenvironmentiseveryone'sresponsible.Sofar,noscientificresearchhasshown