2016改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧

2016改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧2021/5/91内容摘要：写作新题型考的是summary+comment。这种题型看似新颖，其实更加简单,明显不同的是开头需要summarize。Comment部分不一定要写考生自己的观点，完全可以摘取阅读材料中现成的观点稍作展开。这样考生至少从头到尾不愁“无话可说”。2021/5/92“Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewontheissue.”新样题中的“阅读材料”由原来的一段话变成了对某个issue的正反双方鲜明对立的几段文字，并且题目明确要求考生先summarizebriefly。summary应该用原文四分之一的文字表达原文的主要观点。新专四的样题阅读材料原文一般200词左右，这样概述以后大概保留80字左右。对于一篇总共200字左右的考试作文，这样的开头会让整体结构不太匀称，因此也可以稍微再做压缩到50-60。2021/5/93Inrecentyears,traditionalprintednewspaperhasfacedaseriouschallenge.TheChristianScienceMonitor

becamethefirstnationalnewspapertoshutdownitsprintedition,andrecently,theworldfamousmagazineNewsweekannouncedthatitwouldsoonceasepublishingonpaperandshifttoanonline-onlyformat.Willtheprintednewspaperonedaybereplacedbyonlinenewspaper?Somebelievesowhilemanystillholdanoptimisticviewonthefutureoftraditionalnewspaper.Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandwriteyourresponseinabout200words,inwhichyoushouldfirstsummarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewsontheissue.EXERCISE12021/5/94Traditionalcharacters,whichdatebacktomorethan2000yearsago,haveamore

beautifulappearanceandamorereasonablestructure.Traditionalcharactersmakemoresenseconveytraditionalvaluesandcanthereforerepresenttraditionalculture.Fortwomillennia,Chinesehistoricalrecordsandclassicworkswerewrittenintraditionalcharacters.Tobeabletoreadthemand

inherittraditionalculture,weneedtobringtraditionalcharactersback.Politically,itisalsonecessarytorestoretraditionalChinesecharacters.Currently,traditionalcharactersarestillinuseinHongKong,TaiwanandmanyChinesecommunitiesaroundtheworld.Restoringthemcancontributetocross-straitsexchangesand

nationalreunification

anduniteChinesepeoplearoundtheworld.YES2021/5/95Intoday'sworld

efficiency

mattersmost.Traditionalcharacters,whichusuallyhavemorestrokesthansimplifiedones,aremoredifficulttolearn.Bycontrast,simplifiedcharactersaremucheasiertolearnanduse.

Overthepast50years,lotsofclassictextshavebeenturnedintosimplifiedcharacterversions,whichmeanssimplifiedcharacterscanalsopromoteand

preservetraditionalculture.ConstantsimplificationhasbeenatrendintheevolutionofChinesecharacters.Fromtheoraclebonesscriptof3000yearsagototraditionalcharacters,theChinesewritingsystemhasalwaysbeen

slimmingdownforbettercommunication.NO2021/5/96Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.2021/5/97找出对立双方的主要论点

感觉有难度，简单的办法是用句子代替词组（注意尽量不要照抄原文）；实在感觉个别观点有难度还可以忽略Whenitcomesto

simplifiedChinesecharacters

(或Whenitcomesto

whetherweshouldrevivetraditionalChinesecharacters),people’sviewsvaryfromonetoanother.Someclaimthat

weshouldadoptthepolicyfor

aesthetical,culturalandpoliticalbenefits.Others,however,contendthatsimplifiedversionsarebetterchoicebecausetheyare

easiertolearn,slimmerforbettercommunicationandalsohelpfultopreservetraditionalculture.Frommyperspective,itiswisetochoosetraditional/simplifiedversionsforthefollowingreasons.2021/5/98YESThenewmedia,suchastheInternetandmobilephoneapplications,haveexertedagreatinfluenceonpeople’slife.Onlinenewspaperisfast,instant,andconvenient,whiletheprintednewspaperoftenrespondsslowlytothelatestnews.Peoplearenowusedtoreadingonlinenewspaperontheirsmartphones,andnoonehasthepatienceofwaitingfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaperisalsoenvironment-friendly,whichisinaccordwiththetrendofsavingenergyintoday’sworld.Theprintednewspaperconsumesalargenumberofnaturalresources,andwill,inthelongterm,begraduallyreplaced.Themultipleservices,suchaspostingcommentsandfindingrelatednewsthroughthelinksprovidedbyonlinenewspaperhavegreatlyenrichedpeople’sreadingexperiencesandknowledge.Traditionalnewspapercanhardlycompeteinthissense.EXERCISE22021/5/99NOTherearestillalargenumberofpeopleintheworldwhohavenoaccesstotheInternet.Forthesepeople,printednewspaperisanimportantwaytoknowaboutthelatesteventsathomeandabroad.Althoughtheprintednewspapercannotbeasfast-respondingastheonlinenewspaper,itstillcanprovidemanyin-depthreportsandanalyticalarticlesforreaders.Manycolumnwritersareinvitedtowritespecialfeaturereportsfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaper,ontheotherhand,isonlysuitableforfastreading.Manyreadersprefertoreadtheprintednewspaperfortheydonotlikestaringatthecomputerorcellphonescreen.Printednewspaperisalsopreferredbytheelderlypeople.2021/5/910

难以抗拒的网络报纸潮流审题思路:本题讨论的是在网络媒体的冲击下，传统报纸是否会被网络报纸所取代。在具体行文方面，应首先根据材料简要概括正反两方的观点：正方认为网络报纸优势明显，反方则认为纸质报纸仍然有存在的理由。然后提出自己的观点：纸质报纸最终会消失，并给出论据。最后总结全文，重申观点。2021/5/911Withtheadventofinformationtechnology,thetraditionalmediaarepushedtothecornerandarestrugglingtosurvive.Surprisingly,notallpeoplearehailingthebirthofonlineversionnews.SomepeoplebelievethattraditionalprintednewspaperisirreplaceablesincealargenumberofpeoplestillhavenoaccesstotheInternet.However,othersbelievethatthedemiseofprintedversionisathand.Beingfasterandmoreconvenient,cellphonesandpersonalcomputershaveledustoapaper-freelifestyle.TheIrresistibleTrendofOnlineNewspaper2021/5/912AsfarasIamconcerned,itisirresistiblethattheprintednewspaperwilldemisewhiletheonlinenewspaperwillprosper.Asthemodernlifepicksupspeed,newsisreportedateveryturn(到处).Newsisnolongernewwhenprintedonpaper.Whiletheprintingprocessoftraditionalnewspapertakeshours,anditsdistributionmaytakeevenlongertime,theelectronictransmissionofnewsontheInternetmayonlytakeacoupleofseconds,evenincludingvideosandaudios.Besides,youngpeople,thelargestnumberofconsumers,prefertoreadnewsviacellphoneorlaptop.Bythesedevices,userscanshareandcommentonthenews,whichenablesthemtoenrichtheirknowledgeandmindinashorttime.2021/5/913Inconclusion,Ifirmlyholdtheideathattheonlinenewspaperwilldominatethemarketinthefutureandtheprintednewspaperwillbedisplayedinthemuseumrepresentingaperiodofhistory.

2021/5/914Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptonterm-timeholidayargumentsintheUK,andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerptandthencommentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtemtimeinordertosavemoney.Youshouldsupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.EXERCISE32021/5/915TermtimeholidayswillbeBannedParentsaretobebannedbyMichaelGove,theEducationSecretary,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschooltosavemoneyonholidays.Heistoabolishtherightofheadteachersto“authoriseabsence”fromtheclassroom,whichhasbeenusedtoletfamiliestaketerm-timebreaks,andwillwarnthemtheyfacefinesfortheirchildrennotbeingatschool.“Anytimeoutofschoolhasthepotentialtodamageachild’seducation,”aseniorsourceattheDepartmentforEducationsaidthisweekend.“Thatiswhythegovernmentwillendthedistinctionbetweenauthorisedandunauthorisedabsence.”2021/5/916“Thisispartofthegovernment’swidercommitmenttobringdowntruancylevelsinourschools.Therewillalsobestricterpenaltiesforparentsandschools.”ThetoughmeasuresontruancyarepartofawiderattemptbyMr.Govetomakeeducationmoreacademicallyrigorousandtotackleacultureintheeducationalestablishmentwhichhebelieveshasaccepted“excusesforfailure.”RussellHobby,thegeneralsecretaryoftheNationalAssociationofHeadTeachers,saidthemeasurewoulddiscourageparentsfromtryingtoputpressureonheadstosanctiontermtimeholidays.“Thehighcostofholidaysoutsideoftermtimeisstillanissuebutultimatelyachild’seducationismoreimportantthanaholiday,”hesaid.

2021/5/917WhichIsMoreImportant,EducationoraCheaperHoliday?

sample1NewresearchhasshownthatalmostfouroutoftenparentsintheUKhavetakentheirchildrenoutofschooltogoonholidays.Costisthemainreasongivenbyparentsforsacrificingtheirchildren’seducation.Parentsaretobebanned,however,byUK’sEducationAuthority,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschoolforholidayduring

term

time.2021/5/918Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguaranteekid’sacademicperformance.Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild,whichissupposedtobeforillnessandisnotsupposedtobegrantedforholidays.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto“authorizeabsence”fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosavemoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess.What’smore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkid’splayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease.2021/5/919Accordingly,thegrowingtrendofterm-timeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid’seducation.2021/5/920Sample2Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtaketheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson.Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachild’seducation.Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningterm-timeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits.2021/5/921Shouldlocalauthorit