读后续写蒲公英也有自己的魅力讲义-2023届高三英语写作专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Igrewupinasmalltownwhereelementaryschoolwasaten-minutewalkfrommyhouseandinanage,notsolongago,whenwechildrencouldgohomeforlunchandfindourmotherswaiting.Atthetime,Ididn'tconsiderthistobesoimportant,althoughtodayitcertainlywouldbe.Actually,ourlunchtimetogetherinthepastyearshadhadagreatinfluenceonmylifebeforeIrealizedit.OurlunchtimewhenIwasinthethirdgradewillstaywithmealways.Ihadbeenpickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakinglypractisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedpatientlythatsheneededanarratorandhadwrittenanarrator'sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.Herwords,kindlydelivered,stillhurtme,especiallywhenIsawmypartgotoanothergirl.Ididn'ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtherosevine（藤）wasturninggreen.Underthehugetrees,wecouldseeyellowdandelions（蒲公英）appearingunexpectedlythroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithsmallamountsofgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthebushes."IthinkI!mgoingtodigupalltheseweedsJshesaid,pullingablossomupbyallitsroots."Fromnowon,we'llhaverosesinthisgarden."Iimmediatelyprotested,"ButIlikedandelions.Allflowersarebeautiful-evendandelions.”注意：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:“Doyoumeanthateveryflowerhasitsownbeauty?”askedmymotherthoughtfully.Paragraph2:“ButyouwillbeabeautifulnarratorJMomsaid.【菲常视角】好词好句mymotherhadpainstakinglypracticedmylineswithme妈妈煞费苦心地给我练习台词nomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.不管在家里怎么背得滚瓜烂熟，只要一上舞台，我的脑子里就成了一片空白。myteachertookmeaside.我的老师把我拉到一边Herword,kindlydelivered,stillstung,especiallywhenIsawmypartgotoanothergirl.尽管老师这些话说得和和气气，可还是刺痛了我的心，特别是当我发觉自己扮演的公主角色让另外一个女孩顶替wecouldseeyellowdandelions（蒲公英）appearingunexpectedlythroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithsmallamountsofgold.我们可以看到，一丛丛黄色的蒲公英冒出草坪，仿佛是一位画家为了给眼前的美景增色而着意加上的点点金色。IthinkI!mgoingtodigupalltheseweedsJshesaid,pullingablossomupbyallitsroots.我看得把这些野草都拨了，”她说着，一边使劲把一丛蒲公英连根拨出。Iimmediatelyprotested,"ButIlikedandelions.Allflowersarebeautiful-evendandelions.“可是我喜欢蒲公英，"我不满地说，“凡是花都好看-蒲公英也不例外。”梳理原文Whydidmymomtakemeforawalk?MymomwantedtoinspiremetofindmyownmotivationtoshowmybeautyWhatdidIandmymomthinkofthebeautyofthedandelions?WefoundthateventhedandelionshavetheirownbeautyWhat'sthepersonalityofmymumandI?Mymumisacaring,patient,considerateandwisewomanIamanambitiousbutapersonoflackofconfidenceWhatdoesthedandelionssymbolize?Theuniquenessofeveryperson addatitletothepassage,showmethereasonMymom'sgiftIcouldbeabeautifuldandelionMybeautyUniqueness...分析续写Para1"Doyoumeanthateveryflowerhasitsownbeauty?”askedmymotherthoughtfully.1.Whatdoe"thoughtfully"mean?Thoughtfullymeansthatlookseriousandquietwhensheisthinkingalot.Whatshouldbethelastsentencesinthefirstparaaccordingtothebeginninginpara2?Mymum'sconsiderateactionsMynegativefeelingsorremarks...WhatwouldIdoorfeelafterhearingwhatmymumsaidthat?noddedwildlywithdeterminationBeggedmymumtokeepthedandelionWhatwouldmymumrespondtome?SheagreedShesmiledShestrokedmyhairSheinquiredthereasonswhyIfeltunhappyWhatweremyreactionstomymum'swords?Myactions:pouroutmypainfulexperienceandmyuneaseoftherole5sshift.Mynegativefeelings:DissatisfiedUnhappySadVividDescriptionofhowsadIwaspouringoutmypainfulexperiencewithnegativefeelings:Withtearsstreamingdownmyface,Ipouredoutmypainstomymumandtoldher:IfeltalumpinmythroatbutsoonclearedmythroatandutteredinalowvoiceFeelingmyselffloatingintheoceansofsadness,!utteredinalowvoiceIchokedwiththeunwillingnesstoacceptthereality.IcouldnotutterasinglewordIthrewmyselfintomymom'sarmsandcouldn'thelpsobbing.Myremarks:IpreferabeautifulprincesstoaboringnarratorWhatwouldmymumdonextbasedonmymum'spersonality?ListenedtomeattentivelyandpatientlypattedmeonmybackPara2"ButyouwillbeabeautifulnarratorJMomsaid..WhatwouldIdoorfeelafterhearingmymum'swords?clearedupmythoughtsrealizedmymum'sintentionwenthomePluckedupallmycourageTookallmynegativethoughtoffmymindWasdeterminedtopracticelines.WhatchangeswouldIhaveinpractisingthenarrator'slines?IwouldachievemysuccessinplayingthepartasanarratorOnthestage,withmymum'swordsechoinginmymind,myfluentandemotionalnarrationwasrespondedwiththunderous/deafeningcheers.Whatisthethemeofthisstory?Howwillyourepresentitattheending?Everyonehashisownbeautyreflectionontheexperience:Fromthenon,IfelttremendousconfidenceinmyselfnomatterwhatroleIplayedinmylife,Iwouldgotogreatlengthstoexhibitmyownbeauty.Eventually,thethunderousapplauseprovedthatIwasanirreplaceablerole,thoughinvisible.Environment'sdescription:Idashedtowardstheyard,breathedtheairandsawyellowdandelions（蒲公英）flyingintheairandrosesblossominginthebushes.Mymom'swordsechoinginmymind,Ialwaysfoundmyownbeautyinmyfuturelife.Plotmap:Para1[Myreactionstomom'swords]【Mum'sresponse][Myactions+Mynegativefeelings+remarks]Myactions:Mynegativefeelings:Myremarks:[mymom'sreaction]Plotmap:Para2【Myreactions][mypractice]【mysuccessinplayingthepartasanarrator][theending-reflectionontheexperienceorenvironmentdescription]（官方范文）Paragraph1:“Doyoumeanthateveryflowerhasitsownbeauty?”askedmymotherthoughtfully.Inoddedwithouthesitation,asifasecondwastedcoulddeprivethedandelionsoftheirlife.“Thesametoyou,“sheadded,hervoicesoft."Noteveryonecanbearose,anditisalsoanhonourtobeadandelion.Knowingthatmymotherhadrealizedmypain,ItookoffthemaskthatIhadwornforthewholelunchtimeandpouredoutmyuneaseheartily."IwanttobethebeautifulprincessbutnowIwaschosenasanarrator."S