高考英语读后续写the juggler课件

读后续写第70期Juggler续Prediction(4mins)Para1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皱的)pieceofpaper.Whatdidwediscuss?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenIandthejuggleraswellashismom?Whatwasthenumber?WhydidIcallthenumber?[1]ManyyearsagoIvisitedBern,thebeautifulcapitalofSwitzerland.Oneevening,Iwalkedintotheheartofthecity.Oldmenplayedcheckersatstonetablesamid(在...中)musicians,jugglers(变戏法的人)andotherstreetperformers.Istoppedtoenjoythesightsandsounds.[2]AnAmericanaccentrangout①abovethevoicesoftheothers."One...Two...Three!"Heartylaughter②erupted(爆发)fromthecrowdaroundajuggler.Afterthequick-handedmagictricks,hisattentiveaudiencethrewcoinsandmovedon.[3]Asthejugglerbentdown(弯下)tocollectthesmallchange,Isaid,"Ilikedyouract."Thejugglerlookedupwithasurprisedexpression,asifhedidn'texpectanyonetostayaround."Hey,thanks!YousoundlikeanAmerican.''[4]Ilaughed,admittingthatI'dbeendrawn

to③speakwithhimpartlybecauseofhisAmericanaccent.IpolitelyaskedhimwhatpartoftheStateshewasfrom.读Reading-GivenParagraphs(5mins+3mins)发出响声爽朗的笑声被...所吸引

"California,"thejugglerreplied."Andyou?"Irespondedinthesamegeneralway.“Pennsylvania.OutsidePhiladelphia."Thejugglerstoppedpickingupcoins."Oh...whereoutsidePhiladelphia?"Iwasslightlytakenaback.④WhydidthenameofthetownmatterifhewasfromCalifornia?Feelingstrange,Ianswered."Haverford."[5]Thejugglerwasverysurprisedandhisfacesoftened.Hespokejustaboveawhisper.⑤"IwenttoHaverfordHighSchool.""ButIthoughtyousaidyouwerefromCalifornia?"Isaid.Thejugglerdrewinabreath⑥andpouredout⑦astoryhe'dlockedawayforalongtime.[6]"IdiscoveredIlovedtoperformwhileIwasinhighschool.IwantedtostudytheartsincollegebutmyfatherfeltIshouldstudyaserioussubject,likemedicine.IfeltIhadnochoice,soIwenttocollegeinCalifornia,butIcouldn'tstudywhatIdidn'tlove.Ratherthangohomeandfacemyfather,IlefttheStatestoachievemydreaminEurope.”Withaquietsigh(叹气),heconcluded,"Ihaven'tspokenwithmymominsevenyears.'读Reading-GivenParagraphs(5mins+3mins)我有点吃惊。低声说话吸一口气倾吐；倾诉KeyExpressions动作描写1ringout

2heartylaughter

3bedrawnto

5speakjustaboveawhisper

6drawinabreath

7pourout

心理描写4Iwasslightlytakenaback.读Reading-KeyExpressions发出响声爽朗的笑声被...所吸引低声说话吸一口气倾吐；倾诉我有点吃惊。读Reading-5W1HWHOWHEREWHENWHYWHAT/HOWIajuggler“Bern,thebeautifulcapitalofSwitzerland”inEurope.→backhomeManyyearsagosevenyearsafterleavingthecollegeAmericanaccent“IlefttheStatestoachievemydreaminEurope.”“Ihaven'tspokenwithmy

mominsevenyears.”thejuggler’smom读Reading-Analyse(4mins)PlotConflictEmotionConflictThejuggledidn’twanttogohomeandfacehisfather,sohelefttheStatestoachievehisdream

inEurope.

Hehasn'tspokenwithhismominsevenyears."Misshismomdidn’tobeyhisfather’swordsSolutionThejugglergavemethenumberofhismomandIcalledtohismomtosharehislife.Themedreamandfamily写WritingPara1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Action:Emotion:Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皱的)pieceofpaper.Action:Emotion:moved,inreliefaskedandgavemethenumberofhismomsurprised,thankfultalkedaboutthecurrentlifeofthejuggler写

万能句型--动作描写Withoutasecondthought,句子。没有多想/毫不犹豫，....Withoutasecondthought,Inoddedandhuggedwithhimtightly.1.没有多想，他捡起了地上的食物。Withoutasecondthought,hepickedupthefoodontheground.2.我毫不犹豫地将我知道的告诉她。Withoutasecondthought,IpouredouteverythingIknewtoher.3.没有多想，他追随自己的心去追求自己的梦想。Withoutasecondthought,hefollowedhishearttopursuehisdream.写

万能句型--情绪描写Awaveof+情绪名词+sweptover人.谁感到一阵xx。Awaveofreliefsweptoverhim.1.他感到一阵惊喜。Awaveofsurprisesweptoverhim.2.我感到非常尴尬。Awaveofembarrassmentsweptoverme.3.Jenny感到非常失望。AwaveofdisappointmentsweptoverJenny.wave n.波浪sweep-swept-swept v.扫写HomeworkFinishthepassageandhandinyourworkonSunday.G103作业反馈--通病

单词：1.n.感动2.n.想念

句子：1.他非常想念他的妈妈。？Heverymissedhismom.!Hemissedhismotherverymuch.2.我回家。

？Ibackhome.!Iwentbackhomemovedadj.感动的

movementn.移动 movingn.感动miss v.想念

missingadj.丢失的

longingn.思念G103作业反馈--通病内容：1.不能纯对话,不然就是剧本2.对话里的动作不一定是过去时

细节：1.弄皱的纸条一开始并不一定是皱的，第一次出现的要用a2.纸条上有juggler的名字、纸条上对妈妈说的话3.用了各种哭的短语G103作业反馈--精彩句子1.黄：“Thankyouforyourcare.Ithinkinterestisthebestteacher,Ifeelverymoved”thejuggler’smothersaid.（2-对话描写）2.陈：Later,Isawtearsrunningoutfromhiseye.(1-动作描写)Isatonmysofa,justimaginingthatthejugglerwasshowingonthestreetandhismommissedhersoninherhouse.(2-升华主题）3.柯：Tovaluethisopportunitythatletusmeetintheamazingtime,Ipromisedhimtohelptosolvehisdilemmathathehadargumentwithhisfatheranddidn’tconnectwithhismom.(1-升华主题)4.庄：Inclosing,shecriedloudlyandsaidthatshehadbeenwaitingforthiscallformanyyears.5.李：Hopealllongingcanbecomereunion.(2-升华主题）1.郑：

Ilefttherewiththepaperfilledwithlongingandlove(1-上下文衔接)2.郭：Fortunately,theotherpartyanswered.3.蔡：“myheartputsdownatlast”4.马：Imisshimdayandnight.5.赵：WhenInoddedatearfulyes,hewashappylikea400-kilogram-heavybabyandgavemeapieceofpaperwithnumber.G103作业反馈--精彩句子

Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.

Infact,Idrovepastherhomeeverydayonthewaytowork.Westoodinsilence.Thejugglerbrokethesilence.“IfIgiveyoumymom'snumber,wouldyoucallherformewhenyou