2023学年完整公开课版九上Unit9writing

IlikemusicthatIcandanceto.

SectionBWriting

Unit9

myexperienceenergeticcheerfulsadexcitedNothingisworthlivingforwithoutmusic.

没有音乐，生命就没有价值。----尼采

Musicisveryimportantinourdailylives.

Guessing:Whatkindofmusic/songsdoIlike?

Ilike/prefermusicthat/which____________Ilike/prefersongsthat/which_____________smoothcheermeup

havegreatlyrics

loudhelpmerelaxsingalongwithdanceto

energeticwonderfulgentlequietbemakemesadQuestion:Whatkindofmusic/songsdoyoulike?Task1

Freetalk【Pre-writing】A:Whatkindofmusicdoyoulikebest?B:Ilikesmoothmusic.Ilikemusicthat/

whichissmooth.A:Whydoyoulikethiskindofmusic?B:Ithinkit’squitebeautiful,ithelpsmerelaxafteralongweekatwork.A:Howdoyoufeelwhenyoulistentothiskindofmusic?B:IfeelreallyrelaxedwhenIlistentoit.Task2Amodel【Pre-writing】namewhatwhyhowA:What

kindofmusicdoyoulikebest?B:Ilikemusicthat/which...A:Whydoyoulikethiskindofmusic?B:Ithink...A:Howdoyoufeelwhenyoulistentothiskindofmusic?B:Ifeel...Task3Survey(Pairwork)feelingenergeticcheerfulwonderfulsadunforgettablegentleexcited…moved【Pre-writing】

LevelA:xxx

likesmusicthatis...Itmakeshim/her…whenhe/sheenjoysit.Asforme,

I

prefer…because…WhenIlistentoit,Ifeel…LevelB:xxxlikesmusicwhichis...Itmakeshim/her…whenhe/sheenjoysit.While

I

prefer…becauseitnotonly…butalso…WhenIlistentoit,Ifeel…

【Pre-writing】Task4Report:Enjoyingmusicisquiteawonderfulthing.Thereare42studentsinourclass.Mostofuslikepopmusic.Butotherslikemusicofdifferentkinds

aswell.20studentslikemusicwhichtheycandanceto.Theysaythiskindofmusicmakesthemexcitedandenergetic,theywanttodancewhenevertheyhearit.12ofuslikemusicthathasgreatlyrics.Theysaytheylikelyricsbecausetheycanhelpthemimprovetheirpersonalqualities.Whilethereare10ofusnotonlylikemusicthattheycansingalongwithbutalsolikemusicthatisquietandgentle.Theysaymusiccangivethemconfidencetofaceallthechallenges.Wethinkmusicislikeair,wecan’tlivewithoutmusic.Let’senjoymusictogether.

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EndingTip1:Payattentiontothestructure.（注意结构）Task5Appreciation(欣赏)

Enjoyingmusicisquiteawonderfulthing.Thereare42studentsinourclass.Mostofuslikepopmusic.___otherslikemusicofdifferentkinds

______.20studentslikemusicwhichtheycandanceto.Theysaythiskindofmusicmakesthemexcitedandenergetic,theywanttodance_________theyhearit.12ofuslikemusicthathasgreatlyrics.Theysaytheylikelyrics________theycanhelpthemimprovetheirpersonalqualities.______thereare10ofus_________likemusicthattheycansingalongwith________likemusicthatisquietandgentle.Theysaymusiccangivethemconfidencetofaceallthechallenges.Wethinkmusicislikeair,wecan’tlivewithoutmusic.Let’senjoymusictogether.aswellbecauseWhilebutalsowheneverTip2:Trytousesomelinkingwords.

notonlyButTask5AppreciationEnjoyingmusicisquiteawonderfulthing.Thereare42studentsinourclass.Mostofuslikepopmusic.Butotherslikemusicofdifferentkinds

aswell.20studentslikemusicwhichtheycandanceto.Theysaythiskindofmusicmakesthemexcitedandenergetic,theywanttodancewhenevertheyhearit.12ofuslikemusicthathasgreatlyrics.Theysaytheylikelyricsbecausetheycanhelpthemimprovetheirpersonalqualities.Whilethereare10ofusnotonlylikemusicthattheycansingalongwithbutalsolikemusicthatisquietandgentle.Theysaymusiccangivethemconfidencetofaceallthechallenges.Wethinkmusicislikeair,wecan’tlivewithoutmusic.Let’senjoymusictogether.saysaysayfeelfindTip3:Trytousedifferentwords.Task5AppreciationEnjoyingmusicisquiteawonderfulthing.Thereare42studentsinourclass.Mostofuslikepopmusic.Butotherslikemusicofdifferentkinds

aswell.20studentslikemusicwhichtheycandanceto.Theysaythiskindofmusicmakesthemexcitedandenergetic,theywanttodancewhenevertheyhearit.12ofuslikemusicthathasgreatlyrics.Theysaytheylikelyricsbecausetheycanhelpthemimprovetheirpersonalqualities.Whilethereare10ofusnotonlylikemusicthattheycansingalongwithbutalsolikemusicthatisquietandgentle.Theysaymusiccangivethemconfidencetofaceallthechallenges.Wethinkmusicislikeair,wecan’tlivewithoutmusic.Let’senjoymusictogether.quiteawonderfulthingkindsmakes

themexcitedandenergeticchallengesfaceallthedifferentTip4:Trytouseusefulexpressions.Task5AppreciationEnjoyingmusicisquiteawonderfulthing.Thereare42studentsinourclass.Mostofuslikepopmusic.Butotherslikemusicofdifferentkinds

aswell.20studentslikemusicwhichtheycandanceto.Theysaythiskindofmusicmakesthemexcitedandenergetic,theywanttodancewhenevertheyhearit.12ofuslikemusicthathasgreatlyrics.Theysaytheylikelyricsbecausetheycanhelpthemimprovetheirpersonalqualities.Whilethereare10ofusnotonlylikemusicthattheycansingalongwithbutalsolikemusicthatisquietandgentle.Theysaymusiccangivethemconfidencetofaceallthechallenges.Wethinkmusicislikeair,wecan’tlivewithoutmusic.Let’senjoymusictogether.Tip5:Trytousedifferentsentencepatterns.(使用不同的句式。）Task5Appreciation(欣赏)Useyournotestowriteanarticleforanewspaperormagazinetotellpeopleaboutyourfavoritekindofmusic/movieandyourfavoritesong/movie.UsefulexpressionsMyfavoritekindofmusic/movieis…Ilike…because…Itwas…by…WhenIlistento/watchit,Ifeel…Ithinkyoushouldlistento/watchittoobecause…Task6:Writing(3b)【While-writing】music/moviebodyendingwhathow,whyopinionMyfavoritekindofmusic/movieis…Ilike…because…Itwas…by…WhenIlistento/watchit,Ifeel…Ithinkyoushouldlistento/watchitbecause…beginning【While-writing】Self-assessmentDeskmate’sassessmentTeacher’sassessment

Structure&Tense(0-3)Linkingwords(0-2)Differentwords(0-2)Usefulexpressions(0-2)Theattributiveclausesetc.(0-2)Handwriting(0-2)Thenumberofwords(0-2)

TotalFullmark:15（满分15分）ShowTimeAssessmentPost-writing

There’remanykindsofmusicintheworld,butmyfavoritekindofmusicispopmusic.

WhenIwastenyearsold,IheardoneoftheEnglishsongsforthefirsttime,andthenIfellinlovewithit.ThiskindofmusicthatIcandancetohasmademylifecolorfulandisfullofexcitingthingsandhappiness.Recently,myfavoritesongisLushLifewhichissungbyZara.It’sasongthattellsusaboutnevergivingup,andthere’salwaysahopeinyourlife.WhenIlistentoit,Ifeelastrongpowerinmyheartanditsaystome,“Nevergiveup!”Ithinkyoushouldlistentothispowerfulsong,too.Becauseittellsuseventhoughlifeisfullofchallengesandproblems,youshouldfaceitbravelyandtrytosolveitbyyourself.

Sample

1.LevelA:Goonmodifying（修改）andpolishingyourarticlecarefullyaccordingtotheassessment.2.LevelB:Writeanotherarticleaccording

tothefollowingrequests.Homework书面表达

作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”从这句话中，我们足可见音乐对人的发展的影响。请你根据以下提示，以Music为题，写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文比赛。

提示：1、音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐；

2、没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣；

3、你喜欢的音乐是……；

4、你不能忍受的音乐是……。

要求：1、80--100词左右；

2、恰当运用写作技巧和本单元所学语

法—定语从句。中考链接Musicisthemedicineofthebreakingheart.

音乐是医治心灵创伤的良药。----朗费罗Musicistheuniversallanguageofmankind.音乐是全人类共通的语言。---雨果Musicmakesaqualitiesofracehigherandexpensive.

音乐使一个民族的气质更加高贵。---奥尔巴克Proverbs课后拓展Americancountrymusic,alsoknownascountrywesternmusic,hasaverylonghistory.Itcomesfromthesongsofimmigrants(移民)fromtheGreatBritain.Countrymusicusessimplemusicandwordstoexpress(表达)everydayfeelingssuchasloneliness,loveandsadness.Thatistosay,countrymusicdescribeslife.Ittalksaboutfriendsandenemies,trucksandroads,farmsandcrops.Peopleinmanypartsoftheworldlikecountrymusicbecauseeveryonecanunderstandwhatthemusicisabout.ItisbelievedthatcountrywesternmusicbecamepopularfirstamongcowboysintheAmericanwestcountryside.Cowboysh