天津市2021-2023年中考英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达（含解析）

试卷第=page1010页，共=sectionpages1111页天津市2021-2023年中考英语试卷分类汇编书面表达2023年天津市中考英语试题九、书面表达(本大题共15分)86.假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。(1)一个下雨天,王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。(2)他走过去,看到一位老妇人躺在地上。(3)了解情况后,他蹲下为老人撑伞。(4)救护车到达后,他悄悄地离开了。(5)你认为……参考词汇：蹲下crouchdown救护车ambulance要求：(1)词数：80~100个。(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。DearPeterHowiseverythinggoing?I'dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua2022年天津市中考英语试题九、书面表达（本大题共15分）86．假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。（4）人们过来帮忙。（5）你认为……参考词汇：被吹倒beblowndown

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树干trunk要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua2021年天津市中考英语试题九、书面表达（本大题共15分）66．假如你是某中学学生李华,最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示,给你的英国好友Tom写一封信,与他分享你的感动。（1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。（2）王红上下楼很困难,但想来。（3）校长知道后,决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。（4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。（5）你认为……要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。DearPeterHowiseverythinggoing?I'dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua答案：2023年天津市中考英语试题66．例文：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,WangLiangsawagroupofpeoplegatheringontheroad.Hewentoverandsawanoldwomanlyingontheground.Knowingthesituation,hecroucheddowntoholdanumbrellafortheoldman.Whentheambulancearrived,heleftquietly.IthinkWangLiangisagoodstudentwhohelpsothers.Weshouldlearnfromhim.Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的五个要点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学王亮的感人故事。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事；第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事；第三步，发表自己的感想；第四步，期望收到对方回复。[亮点词汇]①tellsb.sth.告诉某人某事②goover走过去③seesbdoingsth.看到某人正在做某事④learnfromsb.向某人学习[高分句型]①Whentheambulancearrived,heleftquietly.（when引导时间状语从句）②IthinkWangLiangisagoodstudentwhohelpsothers.（省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句）2022年天津市中考英语试题86．例文DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。2021年天津市中考英语试题66．范文：DearTom,Howareyou?Ihaveamovingstorytotellyou.WangHongismyclassmate.Shehurtherleftleginanaccidenttwoweeksago.ItwasdifficultforWangHongtogoupanddownthestairs,butshewantedtocometoschool.Theheadmasterdecidedtomovemyclassroomfromthefourthfloortothefirstfloorafterheknewit.WangHongisverygratefultotheheadmaster.Asherclassmates,weshouldalsohelpher.Somehelpedherbuylunch,othershelpedhertocleanup.Sheishappy.Ithinkstudentsshouldhelpeachotherandmakeprog