周末高分讲座0303笔记

Insomecountries,smalltown-centershopsaregoingoutofbusinessbecausepeopletendtodrivetolargeout-of-townstores.Asaresult,peoplewithoutcarshavelimitedaccesstoout-oftownstores,anditmayresultinanincreaseintheuseofcars.Doyouthinkthedisadvantagesofthischangeoutweighitsadvantages?Today,thenumberofout-of-townshopshasincreasedremarkably,andthismeansthatpeoplehavetotraveltoshopsbycars.Iamoftheopinionthattheproblemsofthischangeoutweighthepositiveinfluence.(c)manyout-of-townshopshavesprungup/mushroomedinrecentyears.社会环境、稳定、文化和传统价值heavilypopulated,shopmalls,reduceshoptrips,benefiteconomicallyfrom/economicABCsuburbsarenormallynotasheavilypopulatedastheinnercityarea.(c)Ithasadequatespacefortheconstructionofshopmalls.(c)B:Shopperscanreduceshoptrips.C:Thisprovideseconomicgainsforconsumers.把“C中心句（中心句最好包括三点：1连接词23观点Oneobviousbenefitof（连接词）increasingshop mallsinout-of-ownareas（ itcanprovideeconomicgainsforconsumers.扩展Oneobviousbenefitofincreasingshopmallsinout-of-ownareasisthatitcanprovideeconomicgainsforconsumers,especiallyforthosethosewhohavecars/motorists.（ car也加上了）suburbsarenormallynotasheavilypopulatedastheinnercityarea,andinotherwords,theseareashaveadequatespacefortheconstructionofshopmalls.(c)A:Ithasadequatespacefortheconstructionofshopmalls.B:对B“Shopperscanreduceshoptrips(c)”进行扩展的两种方法Shopperscanreduceshoptrips,sotheycandedicatemoretimetotheirworkandotheraspectsoflife(c)Shopperscanreduceshoptrips,whichcanotherwiseconsumealargeproportionoftheirsparetime.(c)Shopperscanbuywhattheyneedineveryvisittotheseshopfacilitiesandreduceshoptrips,whichcanotherwiseconsumealargeproportionoftheirsparetime.(c)Oneobviousbenefitofincreasingshopmallsinout-of-ownareasisthatitcanprovideeconomicgainsforconsumers,especiallyforthosewhohavecars.Suburbsarenormallynotasheavilypopulatedastheinnercityarea,andinotherwords,theseareashaveadequatespacefortheconstructionofshopmalls.Shopperscanbuywhattheyneedineveryvisittotheseshopfacilitiesandreduceshoptrips,whichcanotherwiseconsumealargeproportionoftheirsparetimeandreducetheirproductivity.(c).AB尾气增加，能源消耗C、污染环境car-dependentsocietylimitedaccesstoaccessothermeansoftransportexhaustfumes.caremissionsenergyconsumptioncauseenvironmentalproblemscausepollutionhaveadetrimentaleffectonthePeoplecanconfrontmanyenvironmentalproblemsinacar-dependentsociety,ascaremissionsincreaseandenergyconsumptionaccelerate(c)Inordertoaccessthestoresinremoteareas,peoplewhodonotowncarswillbedtodriveortravellongdistancebyothermeansoftransport.(c)peopleneedtobuycarsortakeothermeansoftransportduetothefactthatalargeproportionofoff-townshopsarebuiltintheremoteareas,butthiswillcauseenormouscaremissionsandenergyconsumption.(c)Theincreaseincarusenotonlyexacerbatesfuelscarcitybutalsocausesaseriesofproblems,suchasairandnoisepollution.(c)Ontheotherhand,asshopmallsareconcentratedinsomesuburbs,itcanfuelthecaruseandcausesomeenvironmentalproblems,suchasair-pollution.(c)Peoplehavetodriveortakeothermeansoftransportwhenshop,butthiscanincreasecaremissionsandaccelerateenergyconsumption.(c)Thisproblemisparticularlyacuteinthoseneighborhoodswherepublictransportisnotreadilyavailableandtransportinfrastructureisinadequate.(c)（扩展句子，用特定化这个方法）ABC：A小店B人们的生活方式改变C社区的生活改C:Anotherproblemisthattheincreasedpresenceoflargeshopcenterscanchangecommunitylifeandsocialfabric.(c)（中心句）SomesmallshopscanbedoutofmanyoftheseshopsserveasthegluethatholdspeopleitfollowsthatmanyresidentshavetochangetheirshopSomesmallshopscanbedoutofbusiness.扩展Somesmallshopscanbedoutofbusiness,andthisisatragedy,inviewofthefactthatmanyoftheseshopsserveasthegluethatholdspeopletogether.(c)（“andthisisatragedy,inviewofthefactthatA中的两个句子itfollowsthatmanyresidentshavetochangetheirshophabits.扩展itfollowsthatmanyresidentshavetochangetheirshophabitsandcannotpreservesometraditionsincommunities.(c)serveasthegluefamilydinnerssometimesserveasthegluethatholdsfami