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如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作,我们一起来看看吧,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。
如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作
GRE写作满分要点解析,主要包括以下四点:
1、迎合GRE考试评卷人的评卷思路:
每个评卷人对你文章的评阅特别快,不行能对每个细节都很认真地去看。考生应当迎合评卷人的评卷思路,用最规范的结构和最清楚的表达来体现自己的思路:首段要鲜亮地提出观点,中间段落层次要拉开,每段的开头应当就是该段的topicsentence。
2、娴熟把握新GRE写作题库:
为了达到公正,ETS公布了它考试的全部写作题库,那么为了达到能和nativespeaker一起竞争,考生应当在考前对全部题目都进行预习(节省考试时的审题时间),并通过100-150个提纲的写作了解GRE写作的一般结构,通过30-50篇写作来练习自己的写作思路和表达。对题库中的题目越娴熟,对考试越有利。
3.新GRE写作评分注意三方面
首先,从ETS公布的各分数段评分标准看,其评分主要注意以下三个方面:①、规律分析力量(要求insightful);②、文章的组织(要求well-organized);③、语言力量(要求standardwrittenEnglish;concise;variedstructure等)。
4.尽量提高AI部分的写作力量而力保AA部分满分
由于AA的写作不牵涉自己观点的绽开,只须指出规律上的漏洞,因此在经过训练以后,写起来并不困难;而AI的写作需要自己绽开自己设立的观点,不但需要规律上的洞察力量,还需要论证观点的力量,语言组织的力量,因此对于中国考生来讲比较困难,难以短期内有较大提高。
但是这两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的,因此考生的策略应当是尽量提高AI部分的写作力量而力保AA部分满分(或高分)。由于假如AA部分满分的话,AI部分只需争取在4分以上就可以保证整体作文分数在5分以上。
GREissue写作优秀实例:钱是否花在当下
题目:
Itismoreimportanttoallocatemoneyforimmediate,existingsocialproblemsthantospenditonlong-termresearchthatmighthelpfuturegenerations.
与其花钱进行可能有助于后代的长期性讨论,还不如把钱花在迫在眉睫,已经存在的社会问题上。
正文:
Inthiscontradictoryeraofpleasureandpain,loyaltyandtreachery,joyoflifeandfearoffuture,whichariseaconsiderableofproblemsgovernmenthasbeenboredby.Nomatterhowseriousandurgentoneaspectturnsouttobeinacertainperiod,governmentissupposedtocallforabalancebetweenallocatingmoneyforimmediateproblemsandspendingitonlong-termresearchwhenmakingbudget.
Toberesponsibleforcurrentcitizens,governmentshouldsolvethoseexistingsocialproblems,suchasunemployment,illiteracy,andsocialcrimes,inordertooilthesocialmachine.Tosomeextent,increasingtheamountofjobsmaygetmorebenefitthanitself,becauseitisawaytoreleasesocialpressureanddissatisfactionofthoseunemployedworkerswhomayeventuallybeeaticklishfactortosociety.
Additionally,illiteracyistosocietyastheshortestbaffleistoacask.Anditcoulddonothingbutlengthentheshortestbaffletothesamelengthastheotherbafflesifmorewaterissupposedtobepouredinthiscask.Asamalignanttumor,socialcrimesdoharmtotheeconomyandsecurityofoursocietyand,insomecases,isapotentialfuseespeciallywhenthereisaninternalorexternaloppositiontothegovernment,so,tokeepsocietystabilizedandbooming,governmenthastopaymoreattentiontosocialcrimes.
Ifnot,citizensmayfeelunderperilandloseconfidencetotherulingclass.Asaresult,forsavingmoney,thegovernmentisboggeddowninSargassoSeaoftroubles.Nonetheless,thegovernorsarenotbornonlyfortoday’speople.Thatistosay,anothersignificantandmeaningfulresponsibilityofgovernmentistotryitsbesttosupplyourposterityasocietythatconsistsofpeoplewhoarewelleducatedandobtainadesirablejoborcareer,lessjuvenilecrimeanddrug,andstableeconomy.As
H.W.Beecherpointed,“Weshouldsoliveandlaborinourtimethatwhatcametousasseedmaygotothenextgenerationasblossom,andwhatcametousasblossommaygotothemasfruit.Thisiswhatwemeanbyprogress.”Itistruethatlong-termresearchcouldnotgiveoutanimmediatevalue,forexample,howtoafforestawasteland,butweshouldn’tbesonarrowfociandmisprizetherealvaluenormallyingupinaboutdecadesormore.“Lifecanonlybeunderstoodbackwards,butitmustbelivedforwards”,saidbyKierkergaard.Thephrase“belivedforwards”here,inthiscase,meansdiggingouttheprofitinfuture,thesameasfutures.Althoughnooneknowswhetherornotthefutureisinconcordwithwhatweexpect,westillcouldinvestinitbasedonapileofwideinvestigationandacogentdemonstrationratherthanagambling.
Simplyput,withoutspendingmoneyonimmediateandexistingsocialproblems,oursocietycannotkeepflourishandrobust.Withoutinvestingonsomanylong-termresearches,wewilllivenoguaranteesandaimless.Therefore,toensurethestabilityandhealthaswellaslastingdevelopmentofoursociety,spendingmoneyonimmediatesocialproblemsandinvestingonlong-termresearchesweighthesame.
GREissue写作优秀实例:竞争利弊问题
题目:Competitionisultimatelymorebeneficialthandetrimentaltosociety.
归根结底,竞争对于社会是利多弊少。
正文:
Darwinsuggestedthattheprocessofevolutionisonebasedonpetition.Thisdeadlypetitionweedsouttheweakandonlythefittestofthespeciessurvives.Humans,beingtheproductofmillionsofyearsofevolution,arebynature,petitivebeings.Yet,humansarealsosocialbeings.Likethebeesinthehive,wearenotverysuccessfullivingpletelyonourown.Weneedtocooperatewithotherindividualsforoursurvival.Thus,aconflictensues,betweenourinnatepetitiveness,andourneedtocooperate.Thereareprosandconsassociatedwithboth.However,itismybeliefthatoverall,petition,ismoredetrimentalthanbeneficialtohumansociety.
First,letustrytoidentifywhythereispetitioninthefirstplace.Inanenvironmentabundantwithresources,wheresupplyoutstripsdemand,thereisverylittleneedfortheinhabitantstofightwitheachotheroverthem.Thisisnotthecaseonplanetearth.Resourcesarelimited,andthereisconstantjostlingtogettothefrontofthequeuetogetacquirethem.Forexample,thousandsofprospectivestudentsapplytogainentrancetotopuniversitiesaroundtheworld,butthereareonlyahandfulofplacesinthoseuniversities.Thus,thereispetitiontogetintotothesehallowedinstitutionsofhigherlearning.Fromautilitarianperspective,petitionisagoodthing.Inevolutionitisresponsiblefortheeliminationofweakgenes.Inthebusinessenvironment,itgetsridoftheweakerplayers.Inpolitics,itweedsoutunpopularcandidates.Inacademia,itgetsridofweakstudents.
Furthermore,petitionleadstoselfimprovement.Businesseswillstrivetoofferbetterproductsandservicesatlesserprices.Theconsumerreapsrichrewardsfromthispetitivespirit.Politiciansstrivetodotheutmostforthepeople,sotheywouldgetreelected.Studentsexcelintherestudies,tryingtooutdoeachother.
Thus,ostensibly,petitionisresponsibleforthebettermentofthesocietyasawhole.However,thisisjustthesuperficialview.Underneaththesurface,petition,ineveryaspect,isslowlyeatingawayattheveryfabricofthesociety.
Whileitistruetosaythatpetitionincorporateworldhasbroughtgreatbenefitstotheconsumer,thesocietyasMissedAherewholeisplayingagreatpriceforit.Mostbusinessesareexploitingcheaplabourinthethirdworldtomaximisetheirprofits.TherearethousandsofsweatshopsrunbywellknownwesterncorporationsincountrieslikeIndonesia,BangladeshandChina.Peopleareforcedtoworkinsqualidconditions,often16hoursaday.Theyareluckytoreceiveadollaradayfortherelabours.Themomentagovernmentinanyofthesecountriestrytoimprovetheworkingconditionsoftheemployees,thesemultinationalgiantsfleethecountry,oftenleavingwholemunitiesfacingfinancialruin.Thecorporationsareawarethatthereareplentyofotherlabourmarketsthatcouldbeexploitedwithgayabandon.
Thatisjustthehumancost.Whatabouttheenvironmentalcosts?Competitionhasforcedmanycorporationstostreamlinetheiroperations.Environmentalstandardsarenormallythefirstvictimsofthisstreamlineprocess.Asignificantamountofenvironmentalpollutionandlanddegradationhasbeenblamedonindustry,yetthefactorieskeepproducingmoreandmore.Thousandsofitemsgounsoldeachyearduetopetition.Onlyafractionofthismerchandiseisrecycled.Therestgoestothealreadyoverflowinglandfills.
Inpolitics,thedetrimentaleffectsofpetitionareblatant.Politiciansoftenresorttopopularyetsociallydamagingpoliciestogainvotes.Thesemeasuresincludeimprudentspendingtorabblerousing.ThecurrentvolatilityinIsraelandPalestine,theethnicconflictinSriLanka,andthefamineinZimbabweareall,atleastpartially,
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