主题分类要掌握 写作片刻不停留【思维导图+要点必背】 中考英语能力提升必背清单 （牛津上海版）

专题03主题分类要掌握写作片刻不停留主题训练叙事忆旧名师点拨：这个主题训练是以记叙文为主的练习，也是初中学生必须掌握的写作文体之一。要写好此类主题，学生要学会做一个有心人，注意平时身边发生的小事（如：爱心捐款活动、志愿者活动等），从一个小的切入口来，清楚描述事情，从而悟出道理。=1\*ROMANI主题词汇anunforgettableexperience（一次难忘的经历），havealotofmemories（有很多回忆）,beinagoodmood,learn…from..,lookforwardtodoing,beproudof,inorderto,cometrue,dosb.afavor,givesb.ahand,helpsb.withsth.,withthehelpofsb.,takegoodcareofsb.,makeone'slifehappyandfulloflaughter（使某人的生活快乐并充满笑声）=2\*ROMANII常用句型Themore...,themore......isthebestwayto......inorderto...Itiscommonknowledgethat...Ioncehadanexperience...Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife.Iamsurethat...Memoryisakindoftreasure.…playsanimportantroleinourdailylife.Everyoneknows,"...'Weshoulddo...soastodo...=3\*ROMANIII模拟试题Themostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorya.Whathappenedtoyou?b.Whenandwheredidithappen?c.Whyisitunforgettable?要点分析：可以写写你的经历（时间、人物、事件、结果）和你的感受。仔细审题，确定时态（一般过去时为主），确定需要用的词组和句型。为什么难忘？从你的经历中学到了什么（详写）?切记不要偏题（如：不是“难忘的”而写成其他的感受）。写作思路I)你的经历（whenwhere,who,what,how...)Ioncehadanexperience...Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylite...Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.MyclassmatesandIhadabirthdaypartyinMarchthisyear.ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark,LastsummerIwenttovisitmyunclebyair.Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining.Oneday,Inoticedamanwasstealingawoman'spurseonabus.WewenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.WegotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwenttothecountrysidetohaveapicnic.TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan'tforget.WhenIwastenyearsold,Itravelledbyplanewithmyparents.Asweallknow,everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife.IthinkIwillneverforgetmy14thbirthdaybecauseonthatdaymyparentsgavememyfirstbirthdaypartyinahotel.Ithinkmychildhoodwaswonderful,anditmademeknow:"Tobepatient.”Itwasahappychildhoodthatwastilledwithknowledgeandrelaxation.WhenIopenthebookwhichisfullofphotos,IalwayslookbackonwhenIwassmall.It'sreallythemostvaluabletimethatIhave.Iwillneverforgetit.II)你的感受Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.Thereweremanyinterestingthingsandmanyfamouscartooncharacters.Ihadawonderfultimeinit.Onthatday,IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife.AndImustbestronger.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.Howfrighteningandunforgettabletheexperiencewas!Inevertookaplanebefore,soIwastooexcitedtofallasleepthewholenight.It'sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI’llbekindtomyparentsallthetime.Everyonehasadifferentchildhood.Itmaybewonderful,excitingorhard.Ihaveanunforgettablechildhood.Childhoodisamemorywithoutpressure,competitionandhypocrisy(虚伪).Friendssharecommoninterests.Itisshownthattwopeoplebecomefriendseasilywhentheyhavesomecommoninterests.Forexample,twofriendsmaybeinlovewiththesamesports,studyinginthesameschoolorlivinginthesameneighborhood.Friendsmakesacrifices.Friendsmakesacrificesforeachother.Friendsneverrunawayfromdifficulties.Itisalwaysshownthattruefriendsalwaysstandupfortheirfriendsintimesofdifficulties.Understanding:Friendsunderstandeachotherwithoutevensayingaword.Asinglesmilecanbrightenupthefacesofallthefriends.范文评讲：原文稿WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpringFestival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethefirecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butIstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.Iwastakengoodcareofbymyparentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tknowthatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.点评与评分这是一篇叙事性的文章，在这篇文章中，作者选择了一件小事，从过年玩炮竹受伤，明白了“安全第一”的道理。事情很小，但选材很新，意义很深刻。以小见大，正是这篇文章的成功之处。按中考作文20分计算，属于第二~第一档的文章，可得16~17分，需改进之处：Itwasnotveryserious,butIstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.因为absent是形容词，所以应与be动词搭配在一起使用，wasabsent.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tknowthatitissafe.这句话中安全是要“确保”的，所以把know改为makesure更合理。修改稿WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpringFestival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethefirecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butIwasstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.Iwastakengoodcareofbymyparentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tmakesurethatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.范文选登：1.WhenIwastwelve,myclassmatesandIhadafootballmatchinthepark.Allofuswereinterestedinit.Westartedthematchatnineo'clock.Althoughwelostthismatch,wewerestillveryhappy.Afterthematch,wewereverytired,sowewenttotheKFCtohavearest.Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.2.Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.Isawitfromtheplane.Oh,itisabeautifulisland.TherewewenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.Thereweremanyinterestingthingsandmanyfamouscartooncharacters.Ihadawonderfultimeinit.ThenwewenttoaJapaneserestaurant.Allthefoodwasdelicious.Wehadagoodmeal!Thatismyunforgettableexperience.3.LastSundaywasmybirthday.Mybirthdayisalwaysasweetexperienceformeeveryyear.Sowasthisone.WegotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwenttothecountryside.tohaveapicnic.Afterthatmyfatherdroveustothebeach.Thereweregoodviewsandthewindblewgently.Itwasverycomfortable.Atnightwewentbackhome.AndMumcookednoodlescalledLongLifeNoodlesforme.Itwasverydelicious.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.Whatanunforgettableexperience!4.There'realotofmemoriesinmymindwhichIwillneverforget.ItwasMonday,andtheweatherwasalittlehot.Afterhavingsomanylessons,Iwentoutofthemaingateofschoolwithmyfriends.Ilookedaroundtofindmyfather'scar,butIfailed.What'smuchworse,IforgottotakemycellphonesoIcouldn'tcallmyparents.Unfortunately,Ididn'tknowthatwhileIwaswaitingformyfatheranxiously,myfatherwaswaitingwithworry.Atlast,Icouldn'tbearitandtookataxitogethomeandmyfatherdrovehomealone.Howunforgettabletheexperiencewas!Fromthisexperience,IlearnthatIshallbecareful.IfIamcareless,Iwillgetmyselfintotrouble.相关主题A______(happy/bad/special)memoryA(n)_______(lucky/unforgettable/...)experience/dayThemomentIwaspraisedby_______a.Whopraisedyou?b.Whenandwhywereyoupraised?c.Howdidyoufeel?d.Whatdidyouthinkofatthatmoment?ThemostexcitingmomentWhathappenedthatday?Whywasitveryexciting?Howdidyoufeel?Mypresentdays/AdiaryMychildhoodAdayI’llneverforgetLovearoundus(2examples)ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysAvisitto_______AdayinspringThegooddeedsaroundme.,ThecomingweekendI________ThefirstexperienceI________Thatdaywe________Iwillneverforget________Whowillyouneverforget?b.Whatwillyouneverforget?c.Whywillyouneverforget?主题训练解决问题名师点拨：这个主题训练包括学生作业量问题，如何看待考试和测验，以及如何与父母进行沟通这几个方面。有效地解决这些摆在学生面前的现实问题，将会对学生的学习生活起到积极作用。=1\*ROMANI主题词汇Homeworkandexams:makefulluseoftime(利用时间),thebestwayofchecking,takeiteasy（放松些）,somuchhomeworktodo,complainaboutsth.,encouragesb.todosth.,givesomeadvicecommunication:happiness,sadness,feelings,communication,expect,smile,trouble,discuss,argue,getonwellwithsb./sth.,generationgap(代沟),takegoodcareof,playtogether,haveatalkwithsb.,quarrelwithsb.(与某人争吵),helpeachother,listentosb.patiently=2\*ROMANII常用句型Romewasn'tbuiltinaday.Iusedtohavethesameproblems,butIhavesolvedthem.Ithinkyoumustbepatienttofacealltheproblems.Youshouldbelievethattheharderyouwork,themoreyouearn.Weshouldimproveourselvestosolvetheseproblems."Nopains,nogains!"There'snosuccesswithouthardwork.Themoreyoucomplain,theworseyoufeel.Ihopewecanunderstandeachother.It'snecessarytounderstandeachother.Asthesayinggoes,"Parentsaresunlightinthedark."Althoughwesometimesquarrelwitheachother,yetwegetonwelllater.Weshouldgetonwellwithourparents.Parentscannotonlyhelpyou,butalsobringyouhappiness.Everybodyneedsparentstotalkwithandgetconfidencefrom.Don'targue,butdiscuss.Weneedtolearnhowtotakecareofourparents.=3\*ROMANIII模拟试题________inmyeyesa.Whatdoyouthinkof________?b.Whydoyouthinkso?(Givetworeasons.)c.Whatisyoursuggestionabout________?要点分析：本题写作要点包括三个部分：你对……的看法、原因及你的建议。第二点或第三点可适当展开，注意词组和句子的运用。时态：一般现在时。写作思路：=1\*ROMANI)针对alotofhomework的解决方法Itiscommontohavealotofhomeworkatourage.Asasecondaryschoolstudent,it'snecessaryforustodoalotofhomework.Ithinkalotofhomeworkisn'tveryfrightening.Nomatterhowmuchhomeworkthereis,youshouldfinishitbyyourself.Perhapsyoudon'tknowhowtouseyourtimeproperly.Youshouldmakefulluseoftimeatschoolandnotspendtoomuchtimeonrelaxing.Youcandothehomeworkassoonastheclassisover.IalsohavealotofhomeworkwhichIdon'twanttodo.Butweshoulddoitbecauseit'sourdutyandit'sveryhelpfulanduseful.Youmustbepatientwithhomework.Althoughthereisalotofhomework,youstillneedtodoitcarefully.Youshouldknowthatthemorehomeworkyoudo,thebettermarksyouwillget.Doyouwanttorealizeyourambition?Ifyoudo,finishyourhomeworkcarefully.=2\*ROMANII)针对toomanyexams的解决方法Anexamcanprovehowhardyouwork.Throughexams,weknowmoreaboutourselves.Mid-termexamsarejustthemiddle,nottheend.Youstillhavetimetoimprove,andtomakeprogress.Inaddition,examsarethebestwayofcheckingwhetherwestudywellandunderstandwell.Youknowwhatyouarepooratbyexams.Youshouldacceptexams,andtrytoenjoythem.Examsarethechancetocheckourstudy,sojusttakeiteasy.Andifyoukeepworkinghard,youwon'tbeafraidofitanylonger.Regardexamsasdoinghomeworkandtakeiteasy.Inmyview,havingexamscancheckwhatyouhavelearntandwhetheryouhaveobtainedtheknowledge.Youmaythinkit'sjustakindofexercisethatyoudoeveryday.Asweallknow,wearegoingtofaceoneofthegreatestexamsinourlives.Sohavingmanyexamsisgoodforus.III)针对getalongwithparents的解决方法Spendtimetogether.InsteadofplayingacomputergameorwatchingTV,youcangooutsidetogetherwithyourparents.Bekind.Youcanmakeyourparentshappyalldaywithahug,acardorajoke.It'salsolovelywhenakidhelpstodosomehouseworkwithoutbeingasked.Showyourcare.Youcanshowyourlovebyrespectingeachother,andbeingcaringandpolite.Shareyourfeelingsandaskforhelp.Tellyourparentsityou'resad.Ifyoudon'tusuallydothis,tryitandyou'llbeglad.Doyourbestatwhateveryoudo.Itmakesthemhappytoseehowyou'returnedintosuchagreatkid.范文评讲：原文稿ExamsinmyeyesAsastudentinChina,examsarealmostthemostimportantthingstome.TheycanshowhowmuchI'velearntfromschoolandwhatprogressI'vemade.Inaddition,IcanfindmydisadvantagesfromexamsandthenIcanworkhardertocorrectthemistakes.Soexamshelpusunderstandourlessons,buttoomanyofthembringusalotofpressure.Somestudentsevengettoonervoustofallasleepatnightbeforeexams.That'sterrible.Therevisionbeforeexamsalsohelpmefacethemeasily.Moreimportantly,agoodrestrefreshesmymemorysometimes.Weshouldn'tstayuplateatnighttogooverourlessons.Thatwillbeharmfultoourhealth.Examsarenotasfrighteningassomepeopleimagine.Justtakeiteasy,andmaybetheresultwillbecomeasurprise.点评与评分作者在整篇文章中用较为成熟的想法和流畅的语句表达了他对“考试、测验制度”的真实看法。文章观点鲜明、理由充分。按中考作文20分计算，属于第二档~第一档的文章，可得15~17分，需改进之处：1.Inaddition…mistakes这个句子可用when句型，更为简洁，避免重复使用Ican。2.第一段中的理由和建议可作适当调整，侧重点应与作者观点一致。3.文章可适当删减，使语言更加精炼，结尾应加上总结词。修改稿AsastudentinChina,examsarealmostthemostimportantthingstome.TheycanshowhowmuchI'velearntfromschoolandwhatprogressI'vemade.Inaddition,whenIfindmydisadvantagesfromexams,Icanworkhardertocorrectthemistakesintime.Frommypointofview,therevisionsbeforeexamsalsohelpmefacethemeasily.Moreimportantly,agoodrestrefreshesmymemorysometimes.Stayinguplateatnightwillbeharmfultoourhealth.Tosumup,examsarenotasfrighteningassomepeopleimagine.Justtakeiteasy,andmaybetheresultwillbecomeasurprise.范文选登：Inmyschool,therearetoomanyexams.WhenItakeexams,Iusuallyfeelbored.Somestudentswhofailintheexamsmaynotbeinterestedinstudy.What'smore,ifsomestudentsdon'tpasstheexams,theirparentswillbeangrywiththem.Itmakesthestudentsdepressed.Inmyopinion,examsshouldbeeasierthanbeforesothatmoststudentscanpass.Afterall,it'smoreimportanttomakestudentsconfident.范文链接:1．学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班开展家长会进行讨论，用英语写一篇简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。MostparentsAfewparents.reviewwhatstudentshavelearnt.developstudents'minds.stopstudentsplayingcomputergames.….takealotoftime.cannothaveagoodrest.cannotdothethingsstudentslike.…Lastweekourclasshadaparents'meeting.Atthemeeting,alltheparentstalkedaboutwhetherdoingalotofhomeworkwasusefulornot.Manyparentsthoughtthatdoingmuchhomeworkwasuseful.Theythoughtbydoingalotofhomework,thestudentscouldreviewwhattheyhadlearnt.Itwouldalsohelptodevelopthestudents'mindsandstopthemplayingcomputergames.Butafewparentsthoughtthattoomuchhomeworkwasuseless.Becausedoingmuchhomeworktookalotoftime,studentscouldnothaveagoodrest.What'smore,theycouldnotdothethingstheyliked.Inmyopinion,doingasuitableamountofhomeworkisnecessaryandhelpful.2.WhenImetadifficultyIusedtobeaveryfatgirlwhenIwasyoung.Thedailylifewastoughthen.Itwasdifficultformetodressmyself."Imetadifficulty,"Ithought.Tofacethereality,Istoppedeatingunhealthyfoodandhadexerciseeveryday.Itwashardatthebeginning.However,Iwasbraveenoughtodosomesportswhichhelpedmeloseweight..Noweverythingisdifferent.I'mnotworriedanylonger.IamreallyveryhappyafterIovercomethe"evil".IthinkwhenImeetadifficulty,IshouldworkhardsothatIcanmakemydreamcometrue.3.Howtocommunicatewithyourparentswell?IamaGrade9student.Ihaveaveryhappyfamily.Mymotherisadoctor,andmyfatherisanengineer.Theylovemeverymuch,andIlovethem,too.Butrecentlyweoftenquarrelledwitheachotherformystudy.TheywerenotsatisfiedwithmyEnglishandcomplainedaboutmyplayingcomputergames,soIfeltveryunhappy.Ithinktheydidn'tunderstandme.SoIdecidedtotalkwithmyparentsandtellthemmyfeelings.Ihopewecanunderstandeachother.AsaGrade9student,Iambusywithmystudyinourschool.Everydaywehavealotofhomeworktodo,sowehavenotimetorelax.Weshouldstoptorelaxwhenwefeeltired,otherwisewecan'tfocusonstudying.Aftertalkingwithmyparents,myparentsagreewithme,sonowIgetonwellwiththem.Infact,duringmygrowingup,myparentsnotonlyhelpmewithmystudybutalsobringmehappiness.Ithinkeverybodyneedsparentstotalkwithandgetconfidencefrom.相关主题How'stherelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren?Exam——Aviewfromjuniorhighstudents.EnglishhomeworkandIWhenImetadifficultyWhatdifficultydidyoumeet?Describehowyoufacedandovercameit.Howdidyoufeelafteryouovercameit?Howtocommunicatewithyourparents?Doyouusuallycommunicatewithyourparents?Why?(Givetworeasons.)Howtogetalongwiththemwell?Asuggestiontomy________teacherWhomareyougoingtogivethesuggestionto?Howdoyoulikethissubjectoryourteacher?Andyourreasons.Whatisyoursuggestion?Andtellyourreasons.(Wouldyoushowtworeasons?)Whatresult(s)willyouexpecttogetfromyoursuggestion?主题训练成长历程名师点拨：近年来，中考作文动向瞄准青少年素材的屡见不鲜。此类话题谈人生、谈理想、谈成功经验、也谈青少年在成长过程中遇到的种种问题，贴近学生现实生活，帮助学生健康成张，平稳度过青春期，是十分有意义的主题训练。=1\*ROMANI主题词汇成长经历： teenager,graduatefrom,allowsb.todo,askforadvice,one'sbestfriend,becuriousaboutsth.（对某事好奇），doone'sbest,makeeffortstodosth.（尽力做某事），littlebylittle校园生活： understand,getonwellwithsb．（与某人相处得好），raiseone'shand,takeanactivepartin业余爱好： beinterestedin,befondof,enjoydoing,spend...doing,inone'ssparetime学习生活： takecourses,putone'sheartinto,passanexam,failanexam,cheatintheexam(拄考试中作弊)，subject, handin（上交），payattentionto,fullofcompetition（充满竞争）人物偶像： genius,respect,thinkhighlyofsb．(高度评价某人），lookforwardtodoing学习策略： express,explain,confidence,makeasurvey,collectinformation,planaschedule=2\*ROMANII常用句型Toimprovethesituation,Isuggest...Asmiddleschoolstudents,weoughttoberesponsibleforourselves.It'salsoimportanttofindawaytobeinvolvedinsocialactivities.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First...Second...Yourlifetodayistheresultofyourattitudesandchoicesinthepast.Yourlifetomorrowwillbetheresultofyourattitudesandchoicestoday.Sometimesyourbiggestweaknesscanbecomeyourbiggeststrength.Someofthegreatestsuccessstorieshavefollowedawordofencouragement.Fromherconfidence,weknowthat...Weshouldbelieveinourselves.Justkeepontrying.Theprocessoftryingismuchmorevaluablethantheresults.Smileonfailureandsmileonlife.Actually,failureislikeanaughtyboywhoplayswithusonthewaytoourgoals.Ononehand,hewantstotestus.Ontheotherhand,hewantstohelpusbecomebraver.Themorewesmileonfailure,thebraverweshallbe.Growingolderandgrowingup.Growingupdoesn'tneedanytalentorability.Growingupisalwaysfindingtheopportunityforchange.Nevergiveupdreaming.Avolunteer'sworkisverygreatandhelpful.Ilearnresponsibilityandtobepatientfromit.Ihopemoreandmoreyoungpeoplewillbevolunteers.WhenIamfree,Ioftengotothenursinghometodosomethinggood,suchasreadingbooks,washingclothesanddoingsomecleaningfortheold.Everyoneisnotperfecttodoeverything.Weoftengethelpfromothersinourdailylife.Inreturntothehelpfromothers,wemusthelpotherpeopleasoftenaspossible.=3\*ROMANIII模拟试题________isthemostimportantthinginmylifea.Whatisthemostimportantthinginyourlife?(health,happiness,friendship,honesty...)b.Whydoyouthinkso?(Givetworeasons.)c.Whatisyoursuggestion?要点分析在审题时，学生要注意“我生命中最重要的东西”，不是单指某一样东西或某一件事，而是通过事例来突出某 一项品质（如：友谊、自信、助人、诚实、感恩等）。注意：提出的建议要围绕主题来写，而不能前后脱节。写作思路：围绕“友谊”，给出一些建议和保持友谊的秘诀Friendssharehappinesswithus.Inaddition,theykeepusfromsadness.Withoutfriends,wefeellonelyandbored.However,withthemourlifewillbemoreandmorecolourful.Inaword,friendsareourmostpreciouswealthandfriendshipisnecessarytoeveryone.Friendshipislikealeafonthetree.Thoughtheyaresmallandordinary,withoutthemthetreewillbeugly.Friendshipcanmakeourlifemorecolourfulandmeaningful.Friendshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Nobodycangetthroughlifewithoutfriendship.I'mluckyenoughtomakemanykindsofactivefriendsaroundme.WheneverIamblue,theycomfortmeandhelpmefindsolutionstomyproblems.Ilikemyfriendsbecausewecanbelieveineachotherandhelpeachother.Wedependonparentsathome,andwerelyonfriendswhenweareout.Iregardhimasmybestfriend.Wealwaysdiscusstogetherandhavemanyactivitiesinoursparetime.范文评讲FriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylifeIfIdon'thavefriendship,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldlonely.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Makingfriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What'smore,afriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwefindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.点评和分析作者在整篇文章中，紧紧围绕友谊是生命中最重要的部分来描写。从引出主题作者在整篇文章中，紧紧围绕友谊是生命中最重要的部分来描写。从引出主题——分析原因——分享方法，层层深入，最后点题。其中，运用了When...的排比句恰到好处。按中考作文20分计算，属于第二档的文章，可得16分左右。需改进之处。1．SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife．这句话应改为oneofthemostImportantthings，表明友谊 是生命中最重要的东西之一，但不是唯一的。要表达“单独居住”，应用词组liveintheworldalone。表示目的的语句，句首用动词不定式Tomakefriendswithpeople...。afriendneverhesitatesto...，在这句话中，写明“一个真正的（real）朋友”更好。5. Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithso manyfriendsaroundus．并列句中时态应用一般将来时。修改稿FriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylifeIfIdon'thavefriendship,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisoneofthemostimportantthingsinmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldalone.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Tomakefriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What'smore,arealfriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.范文选登HappinessisthemostimportantthinginmylifeHappinessisimportanttous.Whenwefeelhappy,theworldfeelslikeabetterplace.First,wearingasmilewillmakeusmorecharmingandhelpustowinlotsoffriends.Agoodmoodalwaysgivesushope.Second,rememberlifeisfullofupsanddowns.Wecan’tchangethewaylifeis,butwecandoourbesttobehappy.Third,weshouldalwaysbeconfident.Confidenceishalfsuccess.Whenwesmile,theworldsmileswithus.Let'smakeourworldfullofhappiness.ConfidenceisthemostimportantthinginmylifeTherearealotofimportantthingsinmylife,suchasfriendship,money,familyandtime.ButIthinkthemostimportantthingisconfidence.Confidenceisthefirststeptosuccess.Itmakesyounotafraidotdifficulties.WhenIwasinGradeFour,Imadeaspeechintheschoolhall,andallofthestudentslistenedcarefully.IfIdidn'thaveconfidence,Icouldn'tmakethatspeechsofluently.Confidencemakesmeshinebrightly.Itisthemostimportantthingtome.IndependenceisthemostimportantthinginmylifeAsweallknow,independenceisasymbolofgrowingup.I'mindependentonmystudyandIdon'tneedmyparentstoworryaboutmystudy.Inmyopinion,weshouldlearntodosomethingbyourselvesbecausewecanlearnaboutresponsibilityandgetreadyforbecominganadult.Torealizethisgoal/achievetheaim,weshouldtrytostudybyourselvesandlearntodosomehouseworkasoftenaspossible.Tosumup,wecanbebravetofaceourfuturelifeifwelearntobeindependent.范文链接：GrowingupGrowingupisnodoubthardbutunforgettable.Amongalltheseexperiencesthatmademegrowup,thePElessonisthemostunforgettableone.Iusedtobepooratphysicalactivities.Whentheteachertoldustojumphighinthelesson,Ifeltafraidandshyatfirst.ThoughIfixedmyeyesontheteacher'sperformanceandlistenedcarefully,Istillfailedinmyfirstjump.Ialmostwantedtogiveup,buttheteacherencouragedmealot.Withthehelpoftheteacherandmyhardwork,Isucceededatlast.ThisexperiencetaughtmenevertogiveupwhenImeetdifficulties.Igrewupafterthisunforgettablelesson."Nopains,nogains."That'swhatIlearnedfrommyprocessofgrowingup.Wherethereisawill,thereisawayWhenIwasonly5yearsold,myparentsoftentoldmethatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Atthattime,Icouldn'tunderstanditverywell.ButnowIthinkitisveryimportant.Forexample,IpassedthePEtestsuccessfullythoughIwasnotverygoodatsports.IcoulddoitbecauseIbelievedinmyselfandtookanactivepartinit.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First,whenyoumeetsomeseriousproblems,youcantellyourselfthatnoonecanachievetheirgoalwithouteffort.Second,youshouldworkharderandharder.Ibelievethateveryonecansucceedintheirownfieldiftheybelieveinthemselves.相关主题________isthewaytosuccessInmyleisure/sparetime3.Thetroubleofgrowingupa.Doyouhavegrowingpainsinyourlife?Whatarethey?b.Howdidyougothroughyourpains?(Giveoneortwoexamples.)c.Howhavethesepainshelpedyougrow?4.Ilearntobeindependenta.Haveyoueverlearnttodosomethingindependently?Ifyouhave,whatisit?b.Whatshouldyoudobyyourself?c.Whatkindofthingscanyoudoindependentlyinyourlifeorinyourstudy75.________makesmelearnalot6.Everyoneneedshelp.7.________isthemostimportantthinginmylife8.Weshouldlearnto________.9.I'meagerto________.10.WewillhaveaclassmeetingnextThursday.Thetopicisabout"Self-confidence".1．根据《中小学教育惩戒规则（试行）》第七条，学生有以下情形老师有权对其惩戒。1.不及时完成作业，不服从教育；2.扰乱课堂秩序、学校教学秩序；3.吸烟喝酒，言行不得体：4.打骂同学老师。请根据以上条款，结合自身，谈一谈作为中学生的我们应该如何去做来遵守学校的规章制度，并选择一条发表自己的看法和理由。要求：字数80词左右，语言准确、规范，书写工整。参考词汇：obey