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1）“暴死2）不“猝死3）“小刀割死abovedepictsmanyyoungsters,whoaresittingintheroomsoftheirown.Someofthemarestaringattheircomputerscreens,whereastheothersareyinggamesorchattingwiththeirfriends.Obviously,allofthemseemgreatlyinterestedinthecyberworldaround.（那个蜘蛛网明明是障眼法，能写则写，不能写就换个角度。）如果人少，咱就动作、神态，加个心理分析，无非是悲观、乐观、（形容词别is/are/ eincreasingly…,fullof…/seemto/be…/appear…/look…）一些物体词汇能写则写，不写放弃。2008年那年的考题，不会写拐杖怎么办：Thepictureabovedepictstwoyoungsters,whoarestandingshouldertoshoulder.Handinhand,theyaremovingsteadilyforwardalongapath.However,neitherofthemseemstobedepressedandanxious.Rather,bothofthem eincreasinglyself-confidentandcheerful,even但是也不会给你低分。如果是物体动物为中心，那可能得写象征点：至少得留一个主动用法、一用法备用，如standfor,canberegardedasasymbolas，用这几个词点就行了。如果请看以下这篇文章：2008年考题“你我一起、走南闯北Thepicturehighlightafocalsocialpointthatis,friendshipandcommunicationisindispensable.（1）Tobeginwith,itisnotonlybeneficialforadvanceofanation,butalsoessentialfordevelopmentof（2）Whatismoreit（3）canteachpeopletreatotherswithsympathy,sincerityandloveStillitcanhelppeopleobtainmoreopportunitiesinthecompetitionandachievethemselvesintheprospectivecareer.Lastbutnottheleast,itwillcertainlyexertpositiveinfluenceonsustainabledevelopmentofsociety.essential,sympathy,sincerity,但是得分仍然不高。从语法单词的角度看，这篇文章的错误似乎并不多，但是文章将句写成了friendshipandcommunicationisindispensable，可是2008年文章是“合作”，考官阅读时肯定会有一种文不对题的感觉。这篇文章告诉我indispensable这样的“大词”，Theprimarypurposeofthispictureistoshow（套话要少写）thatagrowingnumberofpeoplehavecometorealizethatcooperationisnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensableforone’scareer.(首句用“重要性”的句子点题,)Asaresulttheyincreasinglystressthefundamentalroleofcooperationintheircareer(延伸句1)Byngso,theycanimproveworkingskillsnecessaryfortheirprospectivecareer,graduallyfittingintoacompetitivesocietyandcarvingtheircareer.(2)Still,cooperationenhancesmutualunderstandingbetweenpeople,thusprovidingthemwithmentalcomfortaswellasspiritualback-.3）Tosumupintoday’sworld,ismoreimportantthancooperation(尾句要和呼应，可以换写和“重要性”有关的句子，hasrapidlydeveloinrecentyears.Accordingtotheeconomicdatasbytheernment,ourcountryhaschangedstrongerthanbefore.Sowithitfollowedthereareaphenomenoncalled“hot”inmanyothercountries.thatis,foreignersarepopularwithtralveto,wearingtraditionalcostume,eatingdiet,evenlearningandBeijingOpera.However,isthatthepicturelus?Certainlynot.TheAmericangirlisnotonlywearingatraditionalcostumebutexpressingtraditionalculturalsign.furthermore,thispictureabovedoesconveyatruththatthenationalcultureisinternationalculture,andthatiseasilytounderstand.这个段落的首句为hasrapidlydeveloinrecentyears.可以说，当这位考生写了theotherhand,byngso,这样的连词形成中间段引申的粘结，尽量多写和文化交流有关的句子。然后用“这种做造成积极/消极影响”的写法结尾。Theprimarypurposeofpictureisthatculturalexchangesarenotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable,sowearesupposedtoemphasizetheirroleinacountry.Onetheonehand,theywillinvariablyenhancefriendlytiesbetweencountriesandimprovetheirmutualunderstandingbetweenpeoples.Ontheotherhand,theycanpromotecommunicationbetweenpeopleinthesecountriesandremovethebarrierbetweenthem.Inthelongrun,theculturalexcha