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PsychologicalDescription
TheComeback
InstructorChengXiuli
DongyingShengliNo2.middleschoolLearningobjectives
Bytheendofthisperiod,youareexpectedtobeableto:1.AnalyzethestoryandpsychologicaldescriptionofcharacterswithCBI(contentbasedInstruction)2.Mastertheskillsinpsychologicaldescription3.
Expressyourownideasonthegiventopicthroughcriticalthinking.4.Beanhonestperson.I:HowtoanalyzeastoryMaincharactersandrelationship(who)
Plot:
Psychologicalchanges
Personality
Theme
{WhatHowMainCharactersandtheirrelationshipQ1:Who:Q2:Relationship:
ColleagueSchoolmateRelativeCompetitorPlotDevelopmentRisingActionBeginningClimaxPsychologicalChangesLauriecamebacktotheice-skatingcompetitionandwastoldaboutJinny
?UnderlinetheexpressionsaboutthepsychologyofLaurie.LaurieandJinnymetbutJinnylosthertape.LaurieandJinny
[1]Luariesatquietlyintheemptydressingroomattheice-skatingrink(溜冰场).Shehadnotbeenskatinginanycompetitionsinceherleftkneewasbadlyinjuredinanaccidentsixmonthsago.Asshewaitedforherturntoskate,Lauriewasverynervous,withherlegstrembling.Sheknewthattodaywasaveryimportantdayinhercomeback.[2]“IfIcanwintoday,”shethought,“IcanskateintheworldCupnextyearandthenmaybeIcanmakeittotheOlympics.”[3]Lauriewasjusttoldthatshehadatoughcompetitionthisyear,agirlfromConnecticutnamedJinnyJordanwhowasreallystrongineverything.“Sheistheoneyouhavetobeatthisyear.”Thecoachsaid.TheComebackbodymovementbodymovementInnermonologue
[4]Minuteslater,thedooropenedandLauriesawayoungwomanwhowasaboutherownage.Theyoungwomanputsomeofbelongingsontoachair.However,thebagfelltothefloor.[5]LaurieglaredatJinny,“Sothisismycompetition,”thoughtLaurie.”Becauseofher,Imaylosetonight.”[6]“Thiscostumewasmymom’sidea,”Jinnystartedthecoversation,lookingdownatherred,whiteandblueskatingdress.“Ilooklikeaflag.”[7]Lauriecouldn’tkeepfromsmiling.ShepointedtoJinny’sSkatingbag.“Somestufffelloutofyourbag.”Lauriesaid.TheComebackFacialexpressionInnermonologueFacialexpressionnervous/eagerunfriendly/hostilefriendlyPsychologicalchanges:skillsinpsychologicaldescriptionfacialexpressioninnermonologuebodymovement
SituationalContextAnalysis
Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.Feeling
relieved,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.Q1.WhatexactlydidLauriesee?Q2DidLauriegivethemusictapetoJinny?Whydoyouthinkso?ThemusictapeofJinny
Fromthewordrelieved
GeneralOutlineforP11123Transition
Lauriefoundthemusictape.LauriereturnedthemusictapetoJinny?Tips:1.Inference2.CorrespondencePersonalityOfLaurie[1]Luariesatquietlyintheemptydressingroomattheice-skatingrink(溜冰场).Shehadnotbeenskatinginanycompetitionsinceherleftkneewasbadlyinjuredinanaccidentsixmonthsago.Asshewaitedforherturntoskate,Lauriewasverynervous,withherlegstrembling.Sheknewthattodaywasaveryimportantdayinhercomeback.
[2]“IfIcanwintoday,”shethought,“IcanskateintheworldCupnextyearandthenmaybeIcanmakeittotheOlympics.”[3]Lauriewasjusttoldthatshehadatoughcompetitionthisyear,agirlfromConnecticutnamedJinnyJordanwhowasreallystrongineverything.“Sheistheoneyouhavetobeatthisyear.”Thecoachsaid.[4]Minuteslater,thedooropenedandlauriesawayoungwomanwhowasaboutherwonage.Theyoungwomanputsomeofbelongingsontoachair.However,thebagfelltothefloor.
[5]LaurieglaredatJinny,“Sothisismycompetition,”thoughtLaurie.”Becauseofher,Imaylosetonight.”Warm-hearted?modest?Ambitious?sensitive??
GeneralOutlineforP11123Transition
Lauriefoundthemusictape.LauriereturnedthemusictapetoJinnyPsychologicalchangesofLaurieTip3:Psychologicaldescriptionshouldbeconsistentwiththepersonalityofthemaincharacter
GeneralOutlineforP21123Transition
Laurie'sperformanceinthecompetition.EndingOutcomeofthecompetition
Feeling
relieved,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.CriticalThinkingIfLaurielostthecompetition,wasshealoser?Whydoyouthinkso?
Yes
No
Tip4:keepaPositivethemeOutlineParagraph1Lauriefoundthemusic
PsychologicalchangesofLaurie.
LauriereturnedthemusictoJinny.Paragraph2Laurie'sperformanceinthecompetition
Theoutcomeofthecompetition
Ending(PositiveTheme)Wordstoexpressstrugglingmind:1.
Lauriestoodmotionlessforwhatmusthavebeenonlyseconds--yetitseemedlikeyears/acenturywhileshethoughtaboutwhattodo.2.Aninnervoiceaskedherto/Anevilideaflashedthroughhermind......,butanothervoicepoppedup/ranginhermind,whichmadehertorn.3.Torn(摇摆不定的)asto/Afterafiercebattle,...,shesuddenlydecidedto........
Wordstoexpressapplause1.Theaudienceapplaudedfromtimetotime,2.applausefilledthestadium.3.received/wonroundsof/aburstof/wavesoflongandwarmapplause.4.Cheersandapplausetookoverthewholeroom.Appreciation1.GradeandevaluatethecompositionaccordingtothestandardsforwritingInNCEE.2.Figureoutwhatyoucouldlearnfromthecomposition,payspecialattentiontothepsychologicaldescription.
Appreciation
Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.Shepulleditout,andsawthewhiteinitialsJ.Jinthetopright-handcorner.“It’sJinny’smusictape!”Sheexclaimed(大声说).Laurie’sheartstartedbeatingfast.(动作)“AllI’dtodoistoforgetthatIfoundthis.”Shethought.“IfJinnydoesn’thavehermusic,shemightaswellnotskate.AndthenIwouldwin.(独白)”Laurieshivered(颤抖)slightly(动作)asshethoughtaboutthis.Thenshewondered,”DoeswinningmeansomuchtomethatI’dbewillingtocheatforit(动作)?”ShewalkedtothedoorandcalledJinnyloudly.
Feelingrelieved,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallyhername.Themusicfilledthestadiumandsheskatedgracefullyandbeautifully.Herleftkneewasfineandshefeltherselfglidingontheice.Theaudienceapplaudedfromtimetotime,enthusiastically
supportingherinhercomeback.Whenshefinished,hercoachranuptoherandhuggedher.“Y
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