高考英语漫画作文

《2011江苏高考说明》高考英语书面表达示例2---看图作文：看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观点。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。1教学上重视对学生读图能力的培养2011年第一次使用看图作文，开放性比例占80%，对考生的思维运用及语言技能的考查加大，避免了传统考试中押题，背范文或根据文字做篇章翻译的弊端。22012年书面表达的考查方向漫画是西方典型的一种文化形式；商业和公益广告，新闻图片图文并茂，运用夸张，比喻象征等手法很有可能成为2012年的考题。————汪少华32011年考生存在的主要问题1）审题不清，看不懂图片内容2）自主发挥部分表现不佳，开放性的考查不到位高考书面表达专题写作指导漫画作文WritingbasedoncartoonsTasks:1.Todealwithdifficultyinwritingaboutcartoons2.Tolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwriting3.TolearnsomeusefulexpressionsofcartoonwritingTopicsofcartoonsEnvironmental/NaturalproblemsSocialphenomenonAttitudestowardslifeWhatabilitiesshouldwehave?1.读图3.谋篇2.解意

1.漫画的题目眼睛2.漫画的画面细节3.漫画的文字观点4.漫画的夸张寓意1.读图

Describethepicture（theme)Peoplelackcommunication.Picture1Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.Picture2Appearancedoesn’talwaysagreewiththefact.Picture3Picture4Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.Moneycan’tbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.Picture5Ⅱ.解意-----analysis(Interpretation&Implication)注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！1.辨明褒贬，找准角度(angle)２.联系生活，明晰主旨(theme)下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？——————ifunexpectedcan’tforeseeprotectourselvesbuyinsurancePicture6Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected“if”sinourlife,butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly.Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly“if”.角度criticize主旨Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Example7Areyoufamiliarwiththiscartoon?Example8warningSmokingcanshortenone’slife.Itdoesgreatharmtoourhealth，

notonlytothesmokerhimself，

butalsotoothers.

Ifyouarenotasmoker，

don'tstart

.Thepicturetellsusthatweshouldtreasureourlifeandgiveupsmoking.Ⅲ.谋篇---organizationStep1.Descriptionstep2.AnalysisStep3.Solutions发现问题解决问题分析问题DescribeapictureInterpretitsimpliedmeaning

PointoutitsimplicationsinourlifeGiveyourowncomment/suggestion/solutionStructureAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.Inthepicture,thereare…/…is(are)doing…Sentencestructures:Step1Howtodescribethepicture?Part1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/shows…Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.

Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.Inthepicture,thereare…/…is(are)doing…Thepictureaboveisabout……Let’slookatthepictureabove/first.Step2Analysis(联系实际分析)(facts/reasons/results…)Step2Sentencestructures1.Whatarethereasonsforthisphenomenon?2.Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.3.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…4.Thepictureindicatesthatwe…/Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…5.Thisisanironic(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong……●AsfarasI’mconcerned/Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,…Onlyinthiswaycan…./Onlyif…,canwe…Step3Solutions(opinions/suggestions)Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon./Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…●Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto…●Themediashouldcallon…●Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof…●Everyoneshouldmakegreateffortsto…从大到小从意识到行动下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象，请你根据对这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。Example1._______Exampleacountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofeducation角度comparison主旨educationinequalityIndicate:educationinequalityFacts:dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsof…comparativelybetteropportunitiesResults:lowerenrollmentratesworsentheproblemExampleThegovernmentThemediabeawareofOnlyif…socialjusticeharmonioussocietysolutions_______________________________,acountryboyiscryinghelplesslyinthedarkness,longingeagerlyforschooleducation.Incontrast,thecityboyontherightisenjoyingallthebenefits.Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Thecomparisonindicatesthephenomenon

ofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.(facts)School-agecountrychildrenareoftendroppingoutofschoolduetopoverty.Eventhosewhomanagedtostayinschoolarestillsufferingfromthelowstandardsofeducationalfacilitiesandacademicqualities.

Comparatively,citychildrenhavemuchbetteropportunitiestoreceivegoodeducation.(results)Thus,schoolinthecountrysidegenerallyhavemuchlowerenrollmentratesthanthoseinthecity,whichinturnworsenstheproblemofeducationalinequality.Tosolvethisproblem,thegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyontheimprovementofeducationinruralareas.Meanwhile,themediacanappealforthepublicdonationsforruraleducation.Moreover,allpeopleinthecommunityshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessoftheproblemanddowhatevertohelp.Onlyifwedothesecanwehavemoresocialjusticeandthusmakeoursocietymoreharmonious.

Practice

目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。

__________________________________Clues:简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。StepsContentsDescriptionAnalysisSolutionsanoldmansufferfromgotohospitalmedicalbillcan’taffordanotherattack…Results:1.indebt2.bearthepain3.waitfordeath…1.reducemedicalexpenses2.buildupmedicalinsurance/caresystem…HealthCare

(Description)Fromthepicture,wecanseethattheoldmanwassufferingfromhearttrouble/attack.Hehadtogotohospitalformedicalcare.Whenhesawthemedicalbillwith$5,0000fromthehospital,hewassoshockedthathecouldn’tstandonhisfeet.Itwasbeyondwhathecouldafford．It’sreallyanotherheartattackforhim.SampleAnalysis

Atpresent,manypeoplecan’taffordheavymedicalfees.(Results)Becauseofthis,theymaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcare.Worsestill,somecannotborrowanymoneysotheyhavetobearthepainofdiseasesorwaitforthelastdayoftheirlife.Whatapity!

SolutionsTosolvetheproblem,westronglycallforthemedicalexpensestobereduced．Thegovernmentshouldbuildupmedicalinsurancesystem,andtryitsbesttoexploreanddevelopanewhealthcaresothateveryonewillbeabletoenjoytheirlifeaslongaspossible./Onlyinthisway,canweenjoyourlifeaslongaspossible.

Whateverthepictureis,justremember:ProperdescriptionAccurateanalysisReasonablesolutionsOnlyifyoukeeptheserulesinmind,canyoumakeit.Let’sdrawconclusion再叮嘱几句：1.保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称HomeworkThankyou!

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