高考英语二轮复习情人节的惊喜（人与社会帮助）课件

情人节的意外金华十校续写《》whowhenwherewhatMainidea1.I:Roberta2.Otherpatients3.thenurseValentine’sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipOutsidethedoctor’sofficeMycaraswellasmyphonewasdead,aftermycheckup.Ineedhelp.1.主题语境：人与社会2.主题：社会服务与人际沟通-良好的人际关系与社会交往3.主题意义：在遇到紧急情况，即使看似形同陌路的陌生人也会伸手相助，体现互帮互助，人间关爱！4.话题：日常生活、社会互助。Whatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?

ReadforconflictWhatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?1.Mycarwasdead,likemyphone2.Ihadtousethephoneinside,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.3.Ihadtoturnbacktothepeopleforhelp.1.Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld,lackinginconnectionwitheachother.2.ItwasValentine'sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipWilltheyrespondtomyrequestandofferhelp?VSPara1:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.衔接句1：Whydotheyfollowme?情节推进（心理）：HowdoIfeel?情节推进（动作）：Howwillthenurseandotherpatientscooperatewitheachothertohelpmycarstart?衔接句2：Howtochecktheresult?Para2:Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.衔接句3：Whatistheresult?情节推进（心理\动作）：Whatispeople’sresponsetotheresult?结尾：Whatismyreflectionontheincident?主题升华：Howtoechowiththeformerpart?主题升华：Whatisthethemeofthestory?THREE优秀学生作文及下水作文伏笔：Icouldn'tjudgethembyit.

照应伏笔Actuallytheywerewarmandkind.照应伏笔：Theytriedtogetmycarstarted.照应伏笔：Theirhelpreallysavedmyday伏笔：adayofloveandfriendship照应伏笔：ThemeChatGPT作品：Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Thenursewalkedahead,leadingustomycar.Ifeltaknotinmystomach,embarrassedtohavesomanypeoplewatchingmeasItriedtostartmycar.Whatifitdidn'tstartatall?Whatifitmadealoudnoiseandeveryonelaughed?IfelttheircuriouseyesonmeasIreachedformykeys,feelingtheweightoftheirexpectation.Thenursebentdowntotakealookunderthehood,andItriedtokeepmyhandsfromshakingasIinsertedthekeyintotheignition.Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineroaredtolife,andIfeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.Thenursegavemeathumbsupandwalkedbackinside,leavingmealonewiththecarandtheotherpatientsstillwatching.Ibackedoutoftheparkingspaceslowly,feelingtheireyesonmeasIdroveaway.ButasIturnedontothestreet,Irealizedthattheirstaresdidn'tmatter.Ihadconqueredmyfearandfixedmycar,andthatwasallthatmattered.小情节构建及可读性细节描写3.

虚拟语气、非谓语与对比修辞Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo-ifIhadn’tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday.如果我没忘记在离家前给手机充电，我也可能会沉浸于其中。在这个日子里，和人聊聊天以消磨时间会很不错。Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.他从车里取出工具，开始转动。Itwasdead,likemycar.就像我的汽车一样，手机也不工作了。4.动作IbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHonda.

我轻松地走出办公室到我的小本田车旁。Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom.护士把头探进房间。Severalothersbentforward,mostprobablyleaningintochecktheengine.3.几个人向前弯腰，很可能是为了检查引擎。Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.他不久后挺直身子放松了一下，揉着背部Acheerwentup.欢呼声响起。5.心理

Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver’sseat.

感到有点困惑，我走向我的车，钻进驾驶座。FOUR相似“救助”类续写考题对比参考范文：IwasstandingbymycarwhenamanwithbrokenEnglishsuddenlyappeared.Hesaidifhecouldhewouldhelpme.IsaidIthoughttherewasagasleakbecauseIsmelledit.Hegotunderthecar,and2minuteslater,heslidoutandsaiditwasallfixed.Heaskedmetostartitupandseeifitworkedwell.Actually,atfirst,Iwasalittleskeptical.ButIdidashesaid.Tomydelightandrelief,mycardidindeedroartolifeandhadpower.IthankedmyrescuerandaskedhimifIcouldpayhimforhishelp.Heshookhisheadinstantlyandpolitelyrefusedmyoffer.Ithankedthenicemanagainandgavehimabighug.Myheartwasfullandsaidhewasablessinginmylife.Hisfacelitupandhadabeautifulsmile.MysisterandIwerebothtearyeyedandextremelygrateful.TherearesomanystoriesofrudenessandunkindnesstoothersbutIhavebeenblessedmanytimesbykindandhelpfulpeople.2021八省联考Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep.sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.参考范文：WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Shakingmyheadwithmyhandsstretchingintheair,Ihadnomoodtoeatanythingbeforemycarwasrepaired.Withsmilesheledmeintotheircar,treatingmetoavarietyoffoods.Ithankedthemamillionwith.Iwassohungryasifahungrytigerwereswallowinganelephant.IbetitwasthemostdeliciousfoodthatIhadhad.Watchingmywolfingthemdown,thefamilygrinnedfromeartoear,sodidI.Wechattedfreelyasifwewerefriendsformanyyears.Afterexchangingtelephonenumbers,expandingmythanksagain,Igotoffthecar,whenthegirlpassedapaperbagtome.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Atthesightofth