2022届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图表式作文）练习讲评三

2012届高考英语书面表达（图表式作文）练习讲评三试题来源：江苏省泗阳中学2012届高三上学期第一次调研考试2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图(piechart)所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

注意：1.对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。2.词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.植入广告：productplacementThe2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercial.…讲评本篇书面题目中只有饼状图，在描述饼状图表所反映的内容时，要注意将正反两个方面的意见合并起来叙述。整个表达需要包括下列内容：对饼状图的描述；你对此事的看法：（支持或反对均可）。第一步审题正面的意见1.20%的被调查者认为今年春晚广告的植入方式自然。2.15%的被调查者认为春晚植入广告是央视发展的需要。负面的意见3.10%的被调查者认为今年春晚植入广告损害了央视形象。4.25%的被调查者认为今年春晚广告植入太多。5.30%的被调查者认为今年春晚植入的广告与节目无关。我的观点（自拟）第二步谋篇Para1话题讨论的背景：题目中已经给出。The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Para2对饼状图的描述。。Para3你对此事的看法：（支持或反对均可）。第三步表达变点为句注意多重表达1.20%的被调查者认为今年春晚广告的植入方式自然。①20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkthattheproductplacementappearsintheprogramsinanaturalway.②One-fifthofthepeoplesurveyeddon’tfeelannoyedattheproductplacementandevenregarditasannaturalpartoftheprograms.③One-fifthofthepeoplesurveyedfeelcomfortablewiththeproductplacement.④20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammesnaturally.2.15%的被调查者认为春晚植入广告是央视发展的需要。①15%ofthemthinkitisacceptableforCCTVtomakeprofitsfromtheproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentoftheTVstation.②15%ofthemholdtheviewthatthepracticesatisfiestheneedsofCCTV’sdevelopmentandcanenableittoholdabettergalanextyear.③13%ofthemarguethattheprofitmadefromtheproductplacementcanbenefitCCTV’sfuturedevelopment.④15%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkthepracticeisreasonablebecauseholdingsuchbigeventscostsalot.CCTVneedstomakegooduseoftheopportunitytoearnenoughmoneytofinanceitsoperationanddevelopment.⑤15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.3.10%的被调查者认为今年春晚植入广告损害了央视形象。①10%ofthemthinkthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.②10%ofthembelievethatthegoodimageofCCTVwillbegreatlyaffected③Therest10%arguesthatthepracticehasgreatlydamagedCCTV’simageasthemostimportantmediainChinabecauseit’sthemainchannelforthegeneralpublictogetinformationandentertainment.④Therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.4.25%的被调查者认为今年春晚广告植入太多。①25%ofthemfeelannoyedattoomanycommercialsintheprogram.②25%ofthemthinkproductplacementappearssofrequentlyintheprogramthataquarterofthepeoplesurveyedfeelratherdisturbed.③25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.5.30%的被调查者认为今年春晚植入的广告与节目无关。①30%ofthemthinkthattheproductplacementhavenothingtodowiththeprogrammes.②30%ofthemdon’tthinkthattheproductplacementisrelatedto/islinkedwiththeprogrammes.③Almostonethirdoftherespondentscomplainthattheirrelevantproductplacementmakestheprogramsstrangeandridiculous.④Amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.我的观点（自拟）①适量的、巧妙的广告植入可以接受。Personally,productplacementinrightamountsareacceptableifitdoesn’tspoilthefunandartoftheprograms.WhateverCCTVdoes,itshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoconsiderationandputtheirneedsinthefirstplace.②可以有插入式广告，但是不要不应该损害艺术，还应该考虑观众的感受。Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoaccount.连句成篇连句成篇的关键是将相关要点的叙述进行合并，还要注意加过渡句，使文章流畅。如在谈“我的观点”时要加上对图中反对意见的总结：如图所示：65%的被调查者持反感态度，只有35%的人表达赞成。Asthepiechartshows,themajorityoftherespondentsareagainsttheproductplacementwhileonly35%aresupporters.①如图所示：Accordingtothepiechart;Asisseenfromthechart;Itisillustratedinthechartthat…;Asissuggestedfromthechart.②被调查者：thepeoplesurveyed;therespondents;thepeopleinvolvedinthesurvey;thosewhorespondedtothesurvey.③反对：disapproveof;disagreewith;beagainst;beopposedto;oppose;holdnegativeattitudestowards;thinklittleof.④赞成：support;befor;beinfavorof;approveof;agree;thinkmuchof最后加上适当的过渡句就能成文The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkthattheproductplacementappearsintheprogramsinanaturalway.And15%ofthemthinkitisacceptableforCCTVtomakeprofitsfromtheproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentoftheTVstation.However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,30%ofthemthinkthattheproductplacementhavenothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemthinkproductplacementappearssofrequentlyintheprogramthataquarterofthepeoplesurveyedfeelratherdisturbed.Furthermore,10%ofthemthinkthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.Asthepiechartshows,themajorityoftherespondentsareagainsttheproductplacementwhileonly35%aresupporters.Personally,productplacementinrightamountsareacceptableifitdoesn’tspoilthefunandartoftheprograms.WhateverCCTVdoes,itshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoconsiderationandputtheirneedsinthefirstplace.参考范文

The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammesnaturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprogrammes.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoaccount.

同步练习（江西省上高二中2011届高三第二次月考）最近，你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查，调查结果见下表。请根据图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的不同意见和看法，并表达你自己的观点。注意：1.字数：150左右（开头句已经给出，不计入总字数）；2.参考词汇：饼状图piechart。Recentlythestudentunionaccomplishedasurveyonwhetherrecyclingdustbinsshouldbesetinclassrooms.______学生对分类垃圾箱进教室的不同看法及所占比例参考范文Recentlythestudentunionaccomplishedasurveyonwhetherrecyclingdustbinsshouldbesetinclassrooms.Seeingfromthepiechart,wegotanideathatdifferentstudentsholddi