读后续写个人成长类+谁动了Carter的小汽车？+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

读后续写原题：Carterenjoyedridingtheschoolbushome.Theridehomegavehimsometimetorelaxafterabusydayoffifthgrade.Heusuallysataloneandenjoyedthattoo.Withfoursiblings(兄妹)hedidn’tgetmuchtimealone.Sometimeshesatwithhisyoungerbrother,Jackson,butJacksonwassickathometoday.

Thebusstoppedandthetallestboyinhisclass,Dexter,steppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother,Billy.Asthebuspulledaway,Carterlookedbackoverhisshouldertowatchtheboys.Dexterwasyellingandwavinghishandsathislittlebrother.BillysaidsomethingCartercouldnothear.Dexteryelled,gavehisyoungerbrotherahardshoveandknockedhimtotheground.Billywasonthegroundwipingathiseyes,butDexterwalkedaway.

Carterturnedinhisseat,feelingdisgusted.Hehatedseeinglittlekidsgetpickedon(欺负).ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.Hetriedtothinkofsomethingelse.

Hethoughtofthemodelcarhewasworkingonathome,a1967Corvette.Hestartedbuildingitoveraweekagoandjustfinishedputtingittogetherlastnight.Tonight,assoonashefinishedhishomework,hecouldstartpaintingthecar.Thatwashisfavoritepart.Healreadyhadtheperfectcolorofbluepickedout.

Hehurriedoffthebus,ranthroughhisyard,andbreezedthroughthekitchenwithaquickhellotohismom.Shewasmakingspaghetti,whichsmelleddelicious.Heranupthestairstwoatatimeandrushedintohisroom.“Surprise!”hisbrotherJacksonsaid,throwinghisarmsintotheair.“Whatareyoudoinginmyroom?Ithoughtyouweresick!”“Ifeelbetter!”“What’sonyourface?Areyoubleeding?”“No!I’mnotbleeding.”Jacksonwipedathisface.“It’sprobablyjustpaint.Look!LookwhatIdid!”HepointedatthedeskinthecornerofCarter’sroom.

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Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror._____________________

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Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.

____________主题语境：人与社会

语篇类型：记叙文

语篇背景介绍：本文讲述的兄弟之间冲突如何处理的故事。放学路上，Carter看到他的同学Dexter欺负他的弟弟Billy。Carter对这种兄弟之间欺凌现象比较反感。这时候他想起他的模型车，一周前他已经拼好了，今天晚上回去就可以完成他最喜欢的部分－上色。当他匆忙到家后，发现他生病的弟弟Jackson在他的房间里，脸上都是像血一样的东西。弟弟指着桌子上的作品，得意地和哥哥炫耀自己的成果。心理动态剖析：本文需要读出故事的几个心理情绪：A.作者从放学到回家的一系列心理情绪变化：

enjoyed,relaxed,disgusted,hated。

放学回家愉快的心情→见到Cater被欺负的厌恶心情。B.

想回家完成模型车的期盼和着急心情：hurriedoff,ranthrough,breezedthrough,aquickhello,ranupthestairs,rushedintohisroom。C.

作者见到弟弟糟蹋了他的模型车后的恼火、生气，甚至有想揍他的冲动。但是一想到Billy被哥哥Dexter揍以后那无助、伤心的场景，作者的犹豫后的表现。写作难点：如何描写作者看到模型车被糟蹋的复杂心理变化；如何写出一个自然而又能提升立意的结尾。情绪发展线：情绪变化过程：愤怒－反思－原谅－安慰。第一段需要回答的问题：>Whatdidhesee?>Whatmadehisroomhorrible?>Howdidhefeel?>Whatwouldhedo?Wouldheknockhisbrotherdowntotheground?第二段需要回答的问题：>Whydidheunfoldhisfist?Didheforgivehisbrother?Whatdidhelearnfromtheconflict?参考范文1

Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Whatcameintohissightwasanuglyredcar,whichreallyannoyedhim.Eyesnarrowedandfistsclenched,Cartercouldfeelablazeofflamefuelinginsidehim.“Whathaveyoudonetomycar?”heyelledloudly.Frightenedbytheloudvoiceofhisbrother,Jacksondroopedhishead,murmured,“I…Ijustwantedtogiveyouasurprise!”ItsuddenlydawnedonCarterthatwhathedidjustnowwasjustlikeDexter’sactiononthebus.

Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.

Lettingoutasignofregret,heapologizedtohisbrothersincerely,“I’msorryfordoingthat,butIhadplannedtopaintitblue.”Hearingthis,JacksonbeamedandembracedCartertightly,“let’spaintittogether!”NosoonerhadtheypaintedtheuniquecarthantheirMumcalledthemtohavedinner.Thebreezewaftedtheirfacewithdelicioussmellofthespaghettiandwarmedthebrothers’hearts.Therewasnodenyingthatsiblingsshouldgetonwellbybeingmoretolerantofeachother.

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卡特惊恐地低头看着他的办公桌。映入眼帘的是一辆丑陋的红色轿车，着实惹恼了他。眼睛眯了起来，拳头紧握，卡特能感觉到他体内有一股火焰在燃烧。“你对我的车做了什么？”他大声喊道。杰克逊被弟弟的巨响吓到，低下头，喃喃道：“我……我只是想给你一个惊喜！”卡特忽然明白，自己刚才的所作所为，就像德克斯特在公交车上的动作一样。

卡特深吸一口气，然后松开了拳头。他带着一丝遗憾，诚恳地向弟弟道歉：“对不起，我本来打算把它漆成蓝色的。”杰克逊闻言，笑了笑，紧紧的抱住了卡特，“一起来画吧！”他们刚给这辆独特的汽车涂漆，他们的妈妈就叫他们吃晚饭。微风拂过他们的脸庞，带着意大利面的香味，温暖了兄弟俩的心。无可否认，兄弟姐妹之间应该多一些宽容，才能相处得很好。参考范文2Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.

HisCorvette!Jacksonhadpainteditred.Anawfuldullshadeofred!“Whywouldyoudothat?”Cartershouted.“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”Jacksongrinned,withhiseyesgleaming.Cartercouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsidehim,hishandscurlingintofists.Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn’tevenhearaword.“Doyoulikeit?Itriedsohard.Look!”askedJackson.Redpaintwassmearedacrosshisface,forehead,evenhair.LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn’thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.卡特惊恐地低头看了看他的桌子。他的克尔维特！杰克逊把它涂成了红色。一种可怕的暗淡的红色！“你为什么要那样做？”卡特喊道。“我想给你一个惊喜！”杰克逊咧嘴笑着，眼睛闪闪发光。卡特能感觉到愤怒在他体内滋长，他的双手蜷缩成拳头。杰克逊一直在说些什么，但卡特非常生气，甚至一句话也听不见。“你喜欢吗？我太努力了。看！”杰克逊问道。他的脸、前额甚至头发上都涂满了红漆。看着杰克逊，卡特忍不住想象他的弟弟花了一整天的时间仔细地给汽车喷漆。Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.

PicturingthescenethatBillysitonthegroundwipingathiseyesashisbigbrotherDexterwalkedaway,Cartersteppedtowardthetablewherethecarwasstilldrying.Carterwasn’tsurewhattosay.Hedidn’twanttolie,buthedidn’twanttohurthisbrother’sfeelingseither.Jacksonwasonlytryingtosurprisehim.Hecouldseethatnow.“Doyou?Doyoulikeit?”Jacksoninsisted.“EverytimeIlookatthiscar,I’mgoingtothinkofyou,”Carterresponded,asmile