商志考研英语写作范文

商志考研英语作文4/8大作文第一段Howenlighteningandcompellingtheabovedrawingis!Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelpthinking:_____.(这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词)Simpleasitlooks,itsintended(或者用implied)meaninggoesfardeeperwhatonearth（究竟）doesthedrawer（作者）reallyaimtoconvey.第二段Whattheimageabovevividlymirrors（名词用做动词）goesfarmorethanasimpleimage,instead,itcarries（有）athoughtprovokingsocialphenomenon:____.（本文的主旨）Thereareupsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除)parallelstodayinourcontemporarycommunity,andanacquaintanceofminemayserveasagoodexample.______.(用一两句话来举例)Anothertellingexampleismyformercolleague,who___.（另外一个例子，如果字数够就不用再举）第三段：Muchcanbedone.Tobeginwiththeschoolsandthemassmediashoulddevelopnobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeople,doingtheirutmosttoawakenpeopleofthegrowingthreatofthisworseningsituation.（ofthisworseningsituation自己可以换成主旨的句子，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）Whatismore,theauthorities（当局）shouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwideactionstocurb(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote)suchpractices.Inconclusion,allthesocietyshouldactivelymoresustained（持续）andconcerted（一致）offorts.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,apromisingstarthasbegun,andahappy,healthyandharmonious（和谐）societymaybenotbefarbehind.注意事项：1不要写题目2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副，单数还是复数3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画卡通cartoon也可以用以下几个pictureimagedrawingillustration图画Photo也可以用以下几个pictureimagephotograph以前学过的,重复下:

Dearsir\madam,

ThankyouinadvanceforyourattentiontothisletterandI'mwritingtopresentmycomplaint\inquiry\apologyconcerningsth.that……

There'sanarrayoffactorscontributingtothis.Foronething,……Foranother,……ThereareahostofaspectsI'llofferhere……

I'dbemostgratefulifyoucanreplymeatyourearliestconvenienceandanyfavorableconsiderationswillbegreatlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,LiMing2009商志作文模板大作文（单号版）（讽刺类型）

Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!Asisvividlypresentedintheinterestingandinstructivecartoonabove,……incontrast,…….Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyattempttoconvey?

Simpleastheimageis,theimplicationsmirroredareapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,suchaphenomenonasrevealedinthepicturehasarousedwide-spreadsocialconcern.Nowhereinthehistoryhastheissueof……beentalkedsomuchasinoursocietytoday.Inthesecondplace,thepaintingrevealsanupsettingstoryandsimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinnearlyallaspectsinourlife.Additionally,thepainterintendstoconvinceusthatapackagedealofprogramsshouldbeinitiatedtoreversethegrimsituationlaunchinganationwideeducationcampaign,settinguprelevantlawsandregulations,andthelistgoeson.

Toconclude,itishightimethatmuchimportancewereattachedtosuchcases.Anditisimperativeactionsbetakentocurbsuchpractices.Thereisreasontobelievethataslongasallthesociety,theauthoritiesandthemassmediaandindividualsinvolved,makeconcertedefforttostrivehard,suchupsettingstorieswillultimatelyterminatedoratleastreduced.

如果是多个漫画，要改成复数。

如果是非讽刺的，第2段里的Additionally,到后面都删除，改成Let'scometoanexampleconcerninganacquaintanceofmine,whichserveswellasagoodexampletothepoint……

第3段的curb改为ensure

最后一句suchupsetting……全删除，改为wecanmaintainahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietyasweallwish.漫画作文类

第一段:1、How/whatthought-provokingtheabovecartoon/pictureis!

2、Asisvividlypresentedinthedrawing.。。。。。。。。

Ascanbeseenfromthedrawing，。。。。。.

第二段:

1、whatisthesymbolicmeaningofthedrawing?

或者whatonearthcanwelearnfromthedrawing?

2、itisfarbeyondanyreasonableaboutthatwhatthedrawerreallyintendstoconveyisfarreaching/profound.

3、by

depictingthisimage,thedrawerattemptstoexpose/convinceus/advocatethat……

4、thepicturerevealsaseriousproblemin…(方面),andmoreandmoresimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinoursocietyaswellaslife.5、tomakethepointeventclear.let’scometoanexampleconcerning…….

第三段:1、judgingfromallevidenceofferedabove,wemaycometotheconclusion/concludethatitishightime+虚拟语气的从句(wetookeffectivemeasuresto……/weenhancedtheawarenessofthepeopletotreadthebetter/muchimportancewereattachedtothiskindofphenomenon)

2、whatweshoulddonowisto

3、onlyinthisway,Idobelieve,canwelive-inaharmonioussociety.

4、as/solongas……

5、thereiseveryreasontobelievethat…高联商志10考研作文班笔记第一种开头：Whoeverinfrontofthisimage(s)/cartoon/picturewillbegreatlyshocked/striked.Howamusingandinterestingitis!Whatisvividlyillustratedinthepaintingaboveisthat_____对漫画笼统地描述___。______从微观上再描述一下_____Oddandfunnyasitlooks.Suchhappeningsarefarfrombeingrareandwecannotaffordtoignorethem.Oddandfunnyasitseemstobe,suchstories(story)/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practicearesopervasivethatwecannotaffordtoignorethem.第二种开头：Whataninterestinganenlighteningpaintingitis!Itisindicativeofaseriousyetcommonsocialphenomenon:_____对漫画笼统地描述___。______从微观上再描述一下_____.Howeverridiculousandfarfetcheditlooks(seemstobe);thedrawerintendsfardeepermeaningsthanwhatisshownsuperficially.第三种开头：Howamusingandenlighteningtheaboveillustrationis!Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelplaughing:_____对漫画笼统地描述___。______从微观上再描述一下_____.Simpleasitlooks,itsintended(implied)meaninggoesmuchdeeper.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyaimtoconvey?__________._____________while(完全相反时用incontrary)______________。（描述两个方面）第二段：Obviouslywecaneasilydefinewhatthepaintersubtlyintendstoreflect(communicate)tous.Thestrongandclearmessagesuggestedisthat____主旨________。AccordingtorecentsurveyconductedbyCCTV(ChineseAcademyofsocialSciences/XinhuaNews/ChinaDaily/People’sDaily/FudanUniversity/PekingUniversity/TsinghuaUniversity)28.6%(自己随便写)people______主旨__________（或用一种笼统地切题方法如arefollowingthistide）Itisalarmingthatagrowingnumberofsimilareventsareoccurring.Nowhereinhistoryhastheissueof______主旨_____beenconcertedsomuchasinoursocietytoday(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情，此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来)“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____，SaysDr.SunDong,职务有：(用副职免得阅卷老师认识)Vice-presentofXiamenUniversityVice-directoroftheSociologicalResearchCenterattachedtoChineseAcademyofsocialSciencesVice-deanofSociologyDepartofFudanUniversity例句：NowheresaysDr.SunDong,__职务_,“Itisalarmingsuchstories/upsetting/parallelsareavailableinnearlyallwalksoflifeinourcontemporarycommunity.”Failuretorealizetheseverityofthegrimsituationmanysignificantlydecreaseourchancesofsuccess.Itishardtoimaginewhatoursocietywouldbelikeyearslaterprovidedsuchpracticesgounchallenged.Indeed,thewholesocietyshouldbemadeawarethatanypromptactionsofgreatbenefittoall第二段备用：的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者(1)Asissymbolicallyrevealedinthesetofdrawings,thefactthat(重复上面的图画信息)profoundlyindicatesthatteamworkismomentous(重要的)andfundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesgreatdeeds.(2)Undoubtedly,itisteamworkthatkeepsuscontinuallydoingsomethingvaluableandadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,thatmakesusstillfullofenergytofacethecomingchallengesandcompetitionandthatoffersusthefoundationforthecomingsuccess.(3)Ifwedonnotcooperatesincerely,wewillliveadullanddepressinglifeandfeelfrustratedandhumiliatedorfeellossofhopeaboutthefuture.(4)AsfarasIamconcerned,thereareseveraladvantagesthatcanbegivenasbelow.Tobeginwith,nothingismorebeneficialthanteamworktoovercomeourdefectsandimproveourefficiency.(5)Secondly,noissueisasgoodasteamworktomakeourlifemorecolorfulandenergetic.(6)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.(7)Apersonwhoisassignedvariousjobsalongtheproductionlineswillmakeamessjustbecausenoonecanbeproficientinallthethings.(8)Onlybycooperatingwithotherpeoplecanyouputyourcapacitiesintofullplayandcanyoubethewinnerinthesociety.第三个段子首句谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.(1)Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itadmitsofnodoubtthatindoingthingswhethergreatorsmalltherearemoreorlessdifficulties,itismuchbetterforonetoinvolveyourselfintoateamwork.(2)Itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentomakeyourteamworkmoreefficient.(3)Ontheonehand,weshouldbesensibletobereceptivetootherpeople’sopinionsandbenefits.(4)Ontheotherhand,itisdemandingforustobealwayshelpfulandhonesttootherpeople.(5)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.(6)Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyoumakeitbettersoonerorlater.符号的解释：“”代表可以替换为另一种说法大作文先审题审direction：有没有题目，题目在direction里，没有题目不写题目，好像只有02年的没有题目。有题目的不要跑题。另外，图画下的文字为图解，不是题目。规定的要点有哪些？描述解释评论、建议审图画和文字图画的数量（涉及到写作文的时候的单复数形式）图画的种类：是cartoon、photo、picture等，图画的表示方法还有photograph、image、illustration，还可以用it来表示。在图画及文字中找到对立的两个点（即文章所要评论的点），不用刻意描写细节，同样不能跑题，如2010年的火锅问题只需大体表述图画的内容，具体细节无需再写。另外，超纲词不要写。文章所表达的是正面的还是反面的问题，正面的有01、02、03、08、10年的考研题，反面的有04、05、06、07、09年的。下笔：总构思：第一段描述图画第二段解释含义（即普遍性+举例子）可正说说，再反说说。正说说的说法有：onlywith...，canwe...反说说的说法有：wecanhardly...without...第三段写严重性或重要性，再写举措措施等，适当的时候可以展望一下未来。具体写法第一段：Nootherthingscouldcaptureourattentionandimaginationlikethispicture.Indeed,whoeverinfrontofitmaybeverymuchenlightened.Whatcanbeclearlyseenfromitisthat描写图画，必须为完整的句子。Howinstructiveitis!Farfetchedasitappears,theillustratorundoubtedlyintendsfardeepermeaning.举一反三：NootherthingsfewthingsCouldcanattentionandimagination..ionand..ion可以去掉其中一个\interestingandinstructive\impressive\instructivethispicturetheabovepicture\thepictureaboveIndeed，whoeverinfrontofitmaybeverymuchenlightenedItissofascinatingandilluminatingthatanyoneinfrontofitcannothelpthinkingdeeply.Thinkingdeeplybeingfascinated(impressed\attracted\enlighted)Whatcanbeclearlyseenfromitisthat描写图画，必须为完整的句子。whatissubtly(vividly\apparently)featuredinitisthat描写图画，必须为完整的句子。Illutratedinitisthat描写图画，必须为完整的句子whatcanbeclearlyseenfromthecartoonaboveis不是句子，而是名词\名词词组+who\which第二段：本段中的首句或者首段的尾句，可以用“设问句”形式，如Whatonearthdoesitactuallyintendtomirror?onearthontheworldmirrorreflect\present第二段要包含的内容主要有：1、引出图画要表达的含义的句子；2、图画要表达的意思；3、介绍这种现象的普遍性；4、举例Thattheaboveimagedoescarryfairlysignificantintendedmeaningsgoesfarbeyondanyreasonabledispute.Indeed,itisindicativeofaprettyfamiliarsceneinnowadayssociety—图画要表达的意思。Nowhereinhistoryhastheissueof切题beenconcernedsomuchasinoursocietytoday.Lookingaround,wecanfindsimilareventstoonumeroustolist. Apersuasiveexamplegoestooneofmyacquaintances,who举例子，补充细节。Apersuasiveexampleatellingexample\atellingillustration\acaseinpointwho举例子，补充细节...anacquaintanceofmine\aformercolleagueofmine\oneofmyformercolleagues.其他介绍普遍性的句子还有：itshouldbenotedthatsuchasceneisfairlyfamiliartousall,occurringalltooofteninnearlyallwalksoflife.可以虚构一些统计的数据，如:AsurveyconductedbyChinaYouthDailyattheendoflastyearrevealsthat越来越多的人。。。。。。越来越多的人agrowingpercentageofthepopulation\anincreasingnumberofpeople第三段：介绍严重性、重要性以及举措*本段可能用的句型直接引语或间接引语“某位名人说的话”，notesDr.名人的名字，同位语。Asasongputsit,""Asaproverbputsit,""虚拟语气和被动语气通用句型,可用于最后一段的段首Muchcanbedone.WhatisneededisapackagedealTherehastobejointeffortsofthewholesociety.④Aslongasthewholesocietymakesubstantialefforts,oursocietywillsurelybebetter.⑤Howevermuchimportanceweattachtosuchaphenomenon,itis,ofcourse,farfrombeingenough.⑥Thegeneralpublic,fortunately,havebeenmadeawarethat从句第三段范文：Whattodo?"Effectiveandefficientmeasuresshouldbeencouragedtocurb（或者promote)切题的句子。,saysDr.Mimin,同位语.Therehastobejointeffortsofthewholesociety.Whattopstheagendaistoenhancepeople'sawarenessoftheseverity(或者significance)ofsuchaphenomenon.Thegovernment,massmediaandschoolsofalllevelsshouldserveasacounterbalance(或者drivingforce)tothistide,communicatingtheirpositivemessagestothepublic.Meanwhile,eachofusshouldmakesubstantialeffortstotakeplungeintothecampaigntocurb（或者promote).最后结尾可以展望一下未来：Iamconfidentthat\I'mstronglybelievedthat\Therearereasonstobeoptimistic.画的drawing，cartoon 拍的photo，photograph通用picture，image，illustrationHowinstructiveandimpressivetheimageaboveis!Indeed,fewthingscouldbemorephilosophicandsymbolicthanthispicture.Whatcanbeclearlyseeninitisthat句子（描述图画）.Simplyastheaboveillustrationappearsatfirstglance,itsintendedmeaninggoesundoubtedlyfar-reaching.（尽管这幅图乍一看显得很普通，但它的含义毋庸置疑是深刻的）Whatintheworlddoesthedrawingvirtuallyattempttomirror?Infact,thatthecartoondoescarryprettyimportant(orsignificant)goesfarbeyondanyreasonabledispute指出图画的含义.Itshouldbeobserved,ofcourse,that切题的名词、名词词组or雪花*hasplayedanindispensableroleinnowadayssociety.Ascanbestbeillustratedintermofoneofmyacquaintance,who能帮忙随便填上一个语法正确的句子吗？这个不会.Whattodo?Muchcanbedone.①Thegovernment,foreandmost,shouldserveasadrivingforce（好）/counterbalance（坏）doingitsutmosttopromotev.推动/curbv.抑制suchatrend(最好换成切题n、n词组or雪花*.②Moreover,itistheresponsibilityofthemassmediaandschoolofallleveltoawakenthegeneralpublictothesignificantn.重要性/severityn.严重性ofsuchpractices.③Aboveall,thegeneralpublicshouldbemadeawarethatthesoonerwetakeeffectiveandefficientactions,thebetterourlifewillbe.therearegoodreasonstohopethatsuchanupsettingphenomenonwillsoonbeendedoratleastsignificantreduced./thesocietywillsoonbepopulatedwithsuchencouraginghappenings.传说中的商志作文=24分1.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。2.Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。3.NoinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethanInternet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。4.Peopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。5.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。6.Whenitcomestoeducation,themajorityofpeoplebelievethateducationisalifetimestudy.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。7.Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercisecontributesdirectlytoapersonsphysicalfitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。8.Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthenumberofforeigntouristsandthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotectlocalenvironmentandhistoryfromtheharmfuleffectsofinternationaltourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。9.Anincreasingnumberofexpertsbelievethatmigrantswillexertpositiveeffectsonconstructionofcity.However,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。10.Manycityresidentscomplainthatitissofewbusesintheircitythattheyhavetospendmuchmoretimewaitingforabus,whichisusuallycrowdedwithalargenumberofpassengers.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。11.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousproblem:thecityauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。12.Aninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。13.Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime.Infact,itisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeontheirstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes:AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。14.Anygovernment,whichisblindtothispoint,maypayaheavyprice.任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。15.Nowadays,manystudentsalwaysgointorapturesatthemerementionofthecominglifeofhighschoolorcollegetheywillbegin.Unfortunately,formostyoungpeople,itisnotpleasantexperienceontheirfirstdayoncampus.当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是