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板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/概要写作
一、满分写作不可不知的阅卷老师的秘密板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/一、满分1
阅卷老师的关注点1.阅卷老师首看卷面你必须明白,你的考卷是给阅卷老师看的,让老师看得舒服、方便、清楚,这是非常重要的。不可书写过小、过密或过稀,更不可字迹潦草,乱涂乱改,标点不清。在高强度阅卷中没有谁会辨认书写得乱七八糟的内容,所以你应该呈现一份美观清晰的答卷。阅卷老师的关注点22.阅卷老师次抓要点阅卷老师对语言内容描述全面与否要求严格,答题时应找准找全写作要点。同时,要注意文章需条理分明,逻辑结构合理。2.阅卷老师次抓要点33.阅卷老师紧盯错误①主谓不一致、动词形式(时态和语态)不对、词组搭配不当、句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错等都属于大错;②小错主要是指常用词的拼写错误,介词、冠词、标点等的错用;③3个小错等于1个大错。虽然有些错误被界定为小错误,但却影响得分档次。时间再紧也要认真复查,尽量减少词汇和句式错误。3.阅卷老师紧盯错误44.阅卷老师眼中的满分卷书写整洁漂亮;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;词汇丰富,文笔流畅,衔接连贯。同样的内容,卷面整齐至少多给3-5分;如果写得整齐美观而且条理清晰,再多给几分;如果开头和结尾句式高级就可以稳拿满分!4.阅卷老师眼中的满分卷5
阅卷老师的评分要求1.按5个档次给分。评分时,先根据文章内容和语言表达初步确定所属档次,然后以该档次的要求衡量文章,确定或调整档次。2.评分时注意的主要内容:内容要点、词汇应用、语法结构是否准确、上下文是否连贯以及语言是否得体。3.如书写较差,影响识读,其得分将降低一个档次。阅卷老师的评分要求64.拼写和标点符号是影响分数的一个方面。英式英语和美式英语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。4.拼写和标点符号是影响分数的一个方面。英式英语和美式英语拼7板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/概要写作二、提升作文档次的技巧——让作文靓起来板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/二、提升作8(一)要点呈现多样化,适当扩充要点1.追加成分在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出。(一)要点呈现多样化,适当扩充要点9住在中国十六年,一直学英语。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforsixteenyearsandhavinglearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialtointroducingChinesepaintings.住在中国十六年,一直学英语。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)102.补加语句根据行文走向,适当增加一些与主题相关的语句,或由要点衍生的句子,既能起到前引后联的作用,又能补充一些相关信息,帮助读者理解所写内容。2.补加语句11每一支参赛队伍都非常出色,为比赛做好了准备。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)Everyparticipatingteamisgreatandreadyforthegame.Itcanbepredictedthatthisisaclosematch(势均力敌的比赛).每一支参赛队伍都非常出色,为比赛做好了准备。(2019·高123.添加过渡根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语,甚至过渡句,可以使文章浑然一体,同时能充实文章。firstandmostimportant;what'smore;inaddition;lastbutnotleast3.添加过渡firstandmostimportant13话题:对西方绘画艺术感兴趣的原因(2019·高考天津卷)Personally,I'dwanttolearnaboutwesternpainting.Severalreasonsmayaccountformypreference.Foronething,I'minterestedtolearnhowwesternpaintinghasdevelopedintowhatitistodaythroughhistory,andthemostinfluentialartistsineachperiodofitsdevelopment.Additionally,I'mcrazytolearnhowtoappreciatewesternpaintings,anditcan'tbebetterifyoucantellussometricksabouthowtopaint.话题:对西方绘画艺术感兴趣的原因(2019·高考14话题:学生体育运动情况(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuilt,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Asforme,I'mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.话题:学生体育运动情况(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)154.不忘收尾书信中“适当的结尾”也是必需的,它不仅符合书信习惯,而且还可增加词数。缺失就会影响文章结构,从而影响得分。书信常用的结束语如下:I'mlookingforwardto.../Lookingforwardto.../Lookforwardto...I'mwaitingforyourearlyreply.Bestwishestoyou.Iwouldbegratefulifyou.../I'dappreciateitifyou...4.不忘收尾16(二)词句表达靓一靓何为高级词汇?众所周知,词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分,但某个词一旦得到使用,放在了具体语境中,使用得极为得当,体现了该词的美妙价值,为句子增色,让文章添彩,它就是高级词汇;相反,使用时体现的价值平平,没有创意,它就是低级词汇。巧用4招,以实现由低级向高级的转化。(二)词句表达靓一靓171.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇来表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
IlearnEnglishandChinesewell,whichisgoodforintroducingChinesepaintings.→IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialtointroducingChinesepaintings.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云182.更新换代,避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级用法。2.更新换代,避免重复19
Theteamwillholdmanyactivities,someofwhichwillappealtoyou,includingmanymatches.→Theteamwillholdarangeofactivities,someofwhichwillappealtoyou,includingmanymatches.(2017•高考全国卷Ⅲ)Theteamwillholdman203.单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先,应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,亦可“一词传神”。3.单词与短语巧妙互用21
However,weshouldstillprepare
forthematch,andtrytobethewinner.→However,weshouldstillmakepreparationsforthematch,andtakepainstobethewinner.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)短语高于单词,尽量用短语替代动词短语高于单词,尽量用短语替代动词22[注意]高级词汇的使用一定要遵循“准确、恰当”的原则,一定要注意词汇使用是否合适,并不一定难词就是高级词汇,例如:一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。EarlyinthemorningwepurchasedsomeChristmaspresents.(purchased太过于书面化,改为bought更地道)[注意]高级词汇的使用一定要遵循“准确、恰当”的原则,一23
(三)句式要“高”,句子要“鲜”一、利用复合句式,提升文章档次(一)增加亮点的定语从句1.定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次,在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个定语从句,就是从低级到高级的表达。(三)句式要“高”,句子要“鲜”24
Firstly,thefestivalwillstartat9:00a.m.onAugust15th,anditwilllast3hours.→Firstly,thefestivalwillstartat9:00a.m.onAugust15th,whichwilllast3hours.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅲ)Firstly,thefestival252.定语从句有多种形式,引导词也有若干,但最常用、最能增加亮点的是as和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及“介词+which”引导的定语从句。2.定语从句有多种形式,引导词也有若干,但最常用、最能增加亮26(1)在表达“正如……”这一含义时,我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句。常见的句式有:①Asweallknow.../Asisknowntoall...②Ashepointedout...③Aswecanseefrom...④Asthefamoussayinggoes...
Asweallknow,friendshipalwayscomesfirst.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)(1)在表达“正如……”这一含义时,我们常用as引导的非限制27(2)which引导定语从句时,可以指代某个词,也可以指代整个主句。
Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)(2)which引导定语从句时,可以指代某个词,也可以指代整28(3)“介词+which”
引导的定语从句。
Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.(3)“介词+which”引导的定语从句。29
(二)吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中,状语从句是经常被用到的,它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
WhenitcomestotheseasonIlikebest,springwillalwaysoccurtomeinnotime.
Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.(二)吸引眼球的状语从句30(三)提升档次的名词性从句1.名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。尤其what,that所引导的名词性从句是写作中常见的高级表达方式。(三)提升档次的名词性从句31
Ihavegoodnewstotellyouthatanoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.(同位语从句)(2018·高考全国卷Ⅱ)
Planningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.(宾语从句)
Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.(主语从句)Todayiswhatwecanholdandmakeuseof.(表语从句)Ihavegoodnewsto322.在写作中我们如果能够把两个简单句合并为一个含有名词性从句的复合句,或者把一个简单句扩展成为含有名词性从句的复合句,对写作都是一种质的升华。
Hesaidalotatthemeeting.Hiswordswereveryattractive.→Whathesaidatthemeetingwasveryattractive.
Oneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison.→Whatisoneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison.2.在写作中我们如果能够把两个简单句合并为一个含有名词性从句33二、常用8大句式,考场驾轻就熟1.强调句型强调句型的使用是为了强调句子的某一成分,其构成为:Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他。在写作中,我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的层次。二、常用8大句式,考场驾轻就熟强调句型的使用是为了强调句子的34
Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.[注意]被强调的是时间或地点状语时,不要用when或where,而应用that。Itwasintheparkthat(不用where)IcameacrossmypreviousEnglishteacher.Itwaswithsincerity352.倒装句在写作中倒装句应用比较广泛,涉及的句型也比较多,包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有:(1)“only+状语(从句)”置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。
Onlyinthiswaycanwestudentsstudyhappilyandeffectively.2.倒装句36(2)由none,neither,nor,not,never,hardly,little,seldom等否定词,以及no构成的否定短语如atnotime,bynomeans等置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。
Notonlydoesitaffectourdailylife,butitalsoputspeople'slivesatrisk.(2)由none,neither,nor,not37(3)在so/such...that...结构中,当so/such...位于句首时,其后的句子用部分倒装。
SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.(3)在so/such...that...结构中,当s38(4)由here,there,now,then,out,in,up,down,onthewall,intheroom等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首,且主语是名词而不是代词时,句子用全部倒装。
Inthatpicture,aroundthetablewiththreebooksonitsitthreestudents.在写作中,我们可以通过倒装让句子更高级。(4)由here,there,now,then,393.省略句省略句的应用可以使句子更简洁明快。写作中主要用到的有状语从句的省略和不定式to后成分的省略。
If(itis)not,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.
As(itis)scheduled,itwillbeheldontheplaygroundfrom5p.m.to8p.m.nextSunday.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅲ)3.省略句404.虚拟语气写作中虚拟语气的使用可以使表达更委婉,更具可读性。写作中常见的有以下几种:(1)wish型虚拟语气
Besides,Iwishtherewouldn'tbetoomanystudentsinaclass.(2)ifonly型虚拟语气
IfonlyIcouldgobackandresetmygoals.4.虚拟语气41
(3)It's(high/about)time(that)...型虚拟语气
Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstook/shouldtakeactiontomakesmallchanges.(3)It's(high/about)time(th425.非谓语动词写作中非谓语动词的应用标志着写作水平上升了一个档次,写作中常用到的是非谓语动词作状语和定语。5.非谓语动词43(1)非谓语动词作状语
Togetsomeworkingexperience,Iplantofindaparttimejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.
SoI'mwritingyoualetter,hopingtogetyourguideandsuggestions.
Facedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.(1)非谓语动词作状语44
(2)非谓语动词作定语
Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.(2)非谓语动词作定语456.with复合结构
with复合结构可以使文章简洁紧凑,一篇文章如果能恰当地使用一两个with复合结构,可以使文章增色不少。
Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)
WithEnglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem.6.with复合结构467.并列句型并列句型是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来,在这一句型中要注意连接并列主语时,有些句型采取“就近原则”。写作中常用到的有以下几种:7.并列句型47(1)while表示对比关系,意为“然而,可是”
Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.(2)notonly...but(also)...“不仅……而且……”
Itisbelievedthatthemoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.(2018·高考全国卷Ⅱ)(1)while表示对比关系,意为“然而,可是”48(3)not...but...“不是……,而是……”
Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.(3)not...but...“不是……,而是……”498.it句型
it的应用可以使句子更平衡,更符合英语习惯。常见的有以下几种:(1)it作形式主语
Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest(认真、热心).8.it句型50(2)it作形式宾语
Andyoualsoshouldkeepitinmindthatcomparingnoteswithyourclassmatesfrequentlyisagoodwaytoimproveyourstudy.(3)it在某些固定句式中的应用
Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldagreetomyrequest.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)(2)it作形式宾语51(四)衔接要“巧”,过渡要“妙”创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]
表示“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头,用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有:first/firstly,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。(四)衔接要“巧”,过渡要“妙”52Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobegin/startwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Firstofall,wemustmakeful53
Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes,“Timeismoney.”
WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople'slife.
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.
Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.
Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.[常用开头句式]Astheproverbsays/Asthesa54[满分作文选粹]
Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldinourschoolstadiumwillbeginat2p.m.andlastforroughly3hours.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)
I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.
Firstofall,I'dliketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentstherewillbeinaclass.
Asisknowntoall,shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.[满分作文选粹]Firstandforemost,t55顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]
表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有:second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what'smore,furthermore,moreover,what'sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。顺势承上启下56
Besides,developingagoodhabitoflearningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.
What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.
Inaddition,weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Besides,developingagoodha57
Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon'tcherishwildlife.
AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[常用顺承句式]Whatismoreseriousisthat58Tobeginwith,accordingtoourtradition,youaresupposedtoarriveearly,sothatyoucanhelpthefamilypreparethedinner,whichisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,you'dbetterbringsomegifts,suchasaspecialfoodordrinkfromyourcountry.What'smore,whenyouareenjoyingthemeal,youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.(2018·高考全国卷Ⅰ)[满分作文选粹]Tobeginwith,accordingtoou59
Worsestill,Idon'tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformat(格式)oftheenclosure(附件).
Inaddition,sittingonthegrassandenjoyingthetastyfoodanddrinksprovidedbysponsors,wewillbefullyabsorbedintheattractiveandfascinatingperformances.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅲ)Worsestill,Idon'tev60巧妙转折过渡[常用转折词汇]
表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。巧妙转折过渡61
Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.(2018·高考浙江卷)
Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.
Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.
ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.Finally,thehorsecalmeddow62
Whatever/Nomatterwhatyousay,hewon'tbelieveyou.
Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.[常用转折句式]Whatever/Nomatterwhatyous63[满分作文选粹]
However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.
Otherwisewe'llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.[满分作文选粹]64完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]
表示“合”的词汇常用于总结上文的内容,引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有:finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。完美结束全文65
Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)
Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.
Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.Allinall,Isincerelyinvit66
Inaword,successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.
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Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschool.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)
Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,especiallythefeelingsbathedintherainandsunshine.
Inshort,Internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifnotimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.
Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardsonlinevoting.[满分作文选粹]Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldl69Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.Finally,Iwouldliketoaska70Homework1.预习《优化探究》P67页--72页2.整理笔记,认真总结这节课所学知识3.自己选择性的写作一篇应用文Homework1.预习《优化探究》P67页--72页71板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/概要写作三、应用文高分写作攻略——让作文得满分板块三写作板块——应用文写作读后续写/三、应用文72
(一)普通书信/电子邮件[题型技法]
英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,其开头、结尾常常都会给出,正文可根据题目要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构为:(一)普通书信/电子邮件73[增分佳句]1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)ThanksforyourinvitationtotheChristmasparty.谢谢你邀请我参加圣诞晚会。(2)Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy?你近来学习进展怎样?(3)Iamveryglad/delighted/happytohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。[增分佳句]742.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)I'mverygladtotellyousomethingabout...我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。(2)AsfarasIknow/amconcerned/cansee...据我所知……2.吸引阅卷人篇中句753.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Pleasewritetomesoonandtellmeaboutyour...请马上写信给我,告诉我关于你的……(2)I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.我盼望着你的回复。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句76(二)建议信[题型技法]
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。具体写作结构为:(二)建议信77建议信文章结构六件套1.首段:背景介绍,写信目的2.主体:具体建议,建议理由3.尾段:总结语句,期待祝福建议信文章结构六件套1.首段:背景介绍,写信目的78[增分佳句]1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求意见,在此,我尽量提出一些有用的建议。(2)I'msorrytoknow/learnthatyouarehavingtroublewith/indoing...atthemoment.得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。[增分佳句]79(3)Ihavereceivedyourletterinwhich+完整句Ihavereceivedyourletterinwhich/whereyoumentionedyouhadtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife,(4)Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillbehelpful/beneficialtoyou.(3)Ihavereceivedyourlette802.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议……(3)You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...你最好……/最好是……2.吸引阅卷人篇中句813.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/帮助。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句82[试写满分作文]
假定你是Lynn。你的朋友李华来信告诉你他即将上大学,可是他妈妈担心他还不会独立生活,他不知该如何消除妈妈的顾虑。请给李华回一封信,内容包括:1.多与母亲沟通;2.证明自己已经长大。注意:1.词数80左右,信的格式已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[试写满分作文]83满分作文第一步:“三定”审题,“一列”谋篇建议信第二人称一般现在时和一般将来时多与母亲沟通,证明自己已经长大,共担家务满分作文第一步:“三定”审题,“一列”谋篇建议信第二人称一般84满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,设计亮点1.________________________toworryaboutyournewlifeincollege.(it作形式主语)你妈妈担心你在大学的新生活是正常的。2.Second,youshouldlearntotakecareofyourself,______________________________________________.(现在分词短语作伴随状语)其次,你应该学会照顾自己,向你妈妈证明你已经长大了。It'snormalforyourmomprovingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadygrownup满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,设计亮点It'snormalf852020高三英语作文精品课-含新冠疫情作文ppt课件86[参考范文]DearLiHua,
I'msorrytolearnaboutyourproblem.It'snormalforyourmomtoworryaboutyournewlifeincollege.Herearesomesuggestions.[参考范文]87First,whynottalkmorewithyourmom?Hearttohearttalkshelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Second,youshouldlearntotakecareofyourself,provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadygrownup.It'sevenbetterifyoucouldsharethehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.Ihopeyou'llfindmyideasuseful.Yours,LynnFirstandmostimportant/Atfirst......Lastbutnotleastwhat'smore/InadditionFirst,whynottalkmo88假如你是李华,给留在衡水过寒假的留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,请他注意防护。要点如下:1告知疫情现状;2注意防护,如减少外出,带口罩外出,勤洗手等。3表达战胜疫情的信心。假如你是李华,给留在衡水过寒假的留学生朋友Jack写一封电子89DearJack,KnowingthatyoustayinHengshuiforthewintervocation,IamwritingtoinformyouoftheoutbreakoftheCOVID-19.FirstdiscoveredinWuhan,thevirus,whichhasbeenconfirmedtobetransmittedfrompeopletopeople,hasalreadyinfectedmorethan1.4millionpeopleworldwide.DearJack,90Sominimizeourdooractivitiesasthegovernmenthasrequired.Avoidcrowedplaces,partiesandgroupactivites.Correctlywearamaskifyouhavetogoout.Pleaseincreasepreventionandself-protection.Keepgoodhygienebywashingyourhandsoften.Avoidclosecontactwithanyonewithcoldorflu-likesymptoms.Sominimizeourdooractivities91WechinesearefullyconfidentthattheCOVID-19canbecontrolledandfinallyrootedoutwiththejointeffortsofthegovernmentandherpeopletogetherwithsupportfromhomeandabroad.Pleasestayinarelaxedmoodandprotectyourself.Wishyouahealthyandsafenewyear.Your'sLiHuaWechinesearefullyconfident92(四)邀请信[题型技法]
邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约,一般分为正式和非正式两种,格式与其他信函相同。具体写作结构如下:(四)邀请信93邀请信六件套1.首段:背景介绍,写信目的2.主体:活动细节,补充理由3.尾段:再次邀请,期待回信邀请信六件套1.首段:背景介绍,写信目的94[增分佳句]1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)Iamwritingtoinviteyouto.../I'mwritingtotellyouthattherewillbea...我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你有一个(场)……(2)Iamverypleasedtoinviteyoutoparticipatein...tobeheldin...我很高兴邀请你参加在……举行的……[增分佳句]952.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)Herearesomedetailsaboutthisactivity./Somedetailsaboutthisactivityareasfollows.这次活动的细节如下。(2)Iwouldliketomeetyouthereandpleaseletmeknowyourdecisionassoonaspossible.我想在那里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。2.吸引阅卷人篇中句963.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Wouldyoupleasedropmealinetoletmeknowifyoucancometo...?如果你能来……请写信告诉我,好吗?(2)Ifyouareinterestedinit,pleaseletmeknowandI'llsendyoumoreinformation.如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我给你发送更多的信息。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句97必背亮眼句Isincerelyhopeyoucancomeandhaveagoodtimewithme.Ifyoucanmakeit,I'msureyou'llhavegreattimewithme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.必背亮眼句Isincerelyhopeyoucan98[试写满分作文]
假定你是学生会主席李华,想邀请你校的外教Henry一起参加学校近日即将举办的中国传统文化展。请你给他写一封邀请信,内容包括:1.展览的时间、地点;2.展览的目的;3.展览的内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[试写满分作文]99满分作文第一步:“三定”审题,“一列”谋篇邀请信第一人称一般将来时发出邀请(自我介绍、展览时间及地点)活动内容(展览目的、内容)表达愿望,并期待对方尽早回复满分作文第一步:“三定”审题,“一列”谋篇邀请信第一人称一般100满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,设计亮点1.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintheChineseTraditionalCultureShow______.(非谓语动词作定语)我写信邀请你参加我们学校艺术中心即将举办的中国传统文化展。2.Theaimoftheshowis________________________________.(不定式短语作表语)展览的目的旨在激发学生学习中国传统文化的兴趣。tobeheldattheArtCentreinourschooltoarousestudents'interestinlearningChinesetraditionalculture满分作文第二步:斟酌词句,设计亮点tobeheldat1012020高三英语作文精品课-含新冠疫情作文ppt课件102[参考范文]DearHenry,
I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents'Union.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintheChineseTraditionalCultureShowtobeheldattheArtCentreinourschool.Theshowwillstartat8a.m.andendat12a.m.thisSaturdaymorning.[参考范文]103
Theaimoftheshowistoarousestudents'interestinlearningChinesetraditionalculture.Therewillbeabundantmasterpieces,agreatmanycharmingpoemsandrelatedbooksattheshow.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaIfyoucanmakeit,I'msureyou'llhavegreattimewithus.Theaimoftheshowis104(三)推荐信[题型技法]
推荐信是一个人为推荐另一个人去接受某个职位或参与某项工作而写的邮件,是一种应用文体。具体写作结构为:(三)推荐信105(五)申请信[题型技法]
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为:(五)申请信106(六)祝贺信[题型技法]
祝贺信是一种向收信人表示祝贺的信件,一般用于对收信人有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩,如婚姻、节日、寿诞、毕业等的祝贺。具体写作结构为:(六)祝贺信107(七)倡议书[题型技法]
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构为:(七)倡议书108假定你是李华,当前新型冠状病毒肆虐,你受学生会委托,围绕“从小事做起,共战疫情”这一主题,为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议书。内容包括:1.倡议的原因和目的;2.倡议的具体内容;3.发出倡议。假定你是李华,当前新型冠状病毒肆虐,你受学生会委托,围绕“从109
ProposalDearfriends,Overthepastmonths,theCOVID-19hasmadeitswayaroundChina.Ithasastrongimpactonourlifeandstudy.Inordertoeasetheseriouscondition,allstudentshadbetter
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