作文04 2005年考研英语一大范文

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshouldfirstdescribethedrawing,theninterpretitsmeaning,andgiveyourcommentonit.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure,onthegroundrollsanoldfatherwhoisbeingguardedagainstbyhisfourchildreninfrontoftheirgates,threesonsandonedaughterwhoarenowgrown-ups.Whatmakesmeastonishedisthatthereareseveralwordssaying“thefootballgameoftakingcareoftheoldparents”.Theimplicationconveyedbythepicturetousisthatthereareanincreasingnumberofyoungcoupleswhoarenotwillingtotakecareoftheiroldparents.Then,whataretheinvisiblereasonsbehindthephenomenonreflectedbythispicture?Firstandforemost,withtoomuchemphasisonthegrades,oureducationsystemneglectstheimportanceofnurturingthegoodqualitiesofthestudents,includingrespectingtheold.What’smore,theeagernessforlivingindependently,directlyorindirectly,ysanimportantroleincausingthephenomenonbecausetheoldparentsalwayscan’thelpinterveningtheprivaifeoftheyoung.Lastbutnotleast,thedecliningeconomyisanotherpushbehindthescene,whiakesitmoredifficultfortheyoungcouplestoshouldertheresponsibilityoftakingcareoftheiroldparents.Fromwhathasbeenyzedabove,wecaneasilycometotheconclusionthatnotonlyisoureducationsystemsupposedtoemphasizemoraleducationmore,butalsotheoldparentsshouldrespectthelifestyleoftheyoung.Onlyinthiswaywilltheyoungcouples emorewillingtotakecareoftheiroldparents.Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure,onthegroundrollsanoldfatherwhoisbeingguardedagainstbyhisfourchildreninfrontoftheirgates,threesonsandonedaughterwhoarenow【解析】Asisvividlydepictedinthefigure……正如图中生动地描绘的那样……，常用于写作开头，之后跟上对图画的简单描述；onthegroundrollsanoldfather为介词短语ontheground位于句首，引起的全部倒装句；whoisbeingguardedagainstbyhisfourchildreninfrontoftheirgatesfather；threesonsandonedaughter是前面fourchildren的同位语；whoarenowgrown-ups为定语从句，修饰之前的threesonsandonedaughter。Whatmakesmeastonishedisthatthereareseveralwordssaying“thefootballgameoftakingcareoftheoldparents”.【解析】Whatmakesmeisthat使得我……的是……，进一步对图画内容描述，以saying“thefootballgameoftakingcareoftheoldparents”之前的words；takecareof照顾。Theimplicationconveyedbythepicturetousisthatthereareanincreasingnumberofyoungcoupleswhoarenotwillingtotakecareoftheiroldparents.【解析】Theimplicationconveyedbythepicturetousisthat……常用于第二段开头，揭示图画内涵；thereareanincreasingnumberofyoungcoupleswhoarenotwillingtotakecareoftheiroldparents.therebe结构，其本质是一个倒装句；whoarenotwillingtotakecareoftheiroldparents为定语从句，修饰之前的youngcouples；bewillingtodo愿意做某事。Then,whataretheinvisiblereasonsbehindthephenomenonreflectedbythisFirstandforemost,withtoomuchemphasisonthegrades,oureducationsystemneglectstheimportanceofnurturingthegoodqualitiesofthestudents,includingrespectingtheold.What’smore,theeagernessforlivingindependently,directlyorindirectly,ysanimportantroleincausingthephenomenonbecausetheoldparentsalwayscan’thelpinterveningtheprivatelifeoftheyoung.【解析】What’smore，表示递进；theeagernessfor对……的渴望；ysanimportantrolein扮演重要角色，发挥重要作用；because引导原因状语从句；can’thelpng（intervening）Lastbutnotleast,thedecliningeconomyisanotherpushbehindthescene,whiakesitmoredifficultfortheyoungcouplestoshouldertheresponsibilityoftakingcareoftheiroldparents.【解析】Lastbutnotleast“最后”；whichmakesitmoredifficultfortheyoungcouplestoshouldertheresponsibilityoftakingcareoftheiroldparents.为定语从句修饰之前的thedecliningeconomy；shouldertheresponsibilityof承担……的责任。Fromwhathasbeenyzedabove,wecaneasilycometotheconclusionthatnotonlyisoureducationsystemsupposedtoemphasizemoraleducationmore,butalsotheoldparentsshouldrespectthelifestyleoftheyoung.【解析】Fromwhathasbeenyzedabovewecaneasilycometotheconcl