2023年高考英语全国乙卷应用文写作讲义 高三英语一轮复习

2023年高考全国乙卷作文适用地区:河南、江西、甘肃、青海、内蒙古、宁夏、新疆、陕西。假期所学到的新技能1.学的新技能是什么；2.分享心得感悟。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。下水作文1:①ThenewskillIlearnedduringthevacationiscooking.WhenIencounteredanAPPupdatescookingskillsregularlyin

June,Ifellinlovewithitatonce.IfollowedthestepswhileIworkedinthekitchenforafewtimesandsoonbecameexperienced.（①作文开头快速入题，直接交代新技能是什么，在什么机缘下决定学习的）②Cookingshowedmeacompletelynewworld.③

NeverdidIknowthatthesecommoningredientsfromthemarketscouldbemadeintosuch

deliciousdishes.

Itseemedlikeamagic.

④Absorbedincooking,

⑤IfeltasifIwerecreatingamiraclelikeamagician.⑥NowonderthatIwasfascinatedbyit.

（②第二段就事论事，引出心得感悟，③倒装句的应用，增强语势④

过去分词做状语，高一下学期的语法点,

⑤尝试一下虚拟语气，丰富句式）⑥

直接套用nowonderthat

结构即可）⑥What'smore,cookinghelpedmereducemypressureindailylife.⑦

HoweverdepressedIwas,

asIenteredintothekitchenandgotmyselfinvolvedincooking,Iforgotallthetroubleinlife.⑧As

the

result,Igotrefreshedagain.（⑥第三段比第二段再往深挖一下，从物质上升到精神，深化主题

⑦此处的However=Nomatterhow结构

⑧再加个学生肯定能想出来的As

the

result凑热闹）⑨Itwassoblessedto

have

learned

anewskilllikecooking,⑩

whichmakesmehappy,healthyandrefreshedeveryday.（⑨结尾要短促有力

⑩这句也可以改成whichmakesmehappyandhealthy尝试一下押头韵的修辞手法，）下水作文2:①Ilearnedwritingfrommybrotherlastwinterholiday.

whenIcameback

home,Ifoundmybrotherwritingsomethingonthecomputer.Whenhepresstheenterbutton,

fanscrowdedinandgavehim

likes

belowhisarticle.

Itwassocool.

Iwanted

toexperiencethisimpressivemoment

aswell,soI

askedhimtoteachmetheskillofwriting.（①作文开头直接交代新技能是什么，为什么想学这项技能）②AtfirstIgotnoideaaboutwritingatall,whichleadtotheresultthatIwriteawfullinesandnobodyreadsit.Igotdiscouragedandalmostwantedtogiveup.Mybrotherencouragedmetokeepontryingandwriteafewlineseverydaytokeepsensitivetowriting.

Heshowedmesomereallyimpressiveexamplesfromclassicalwritingartworksandorderedmetoimitate.Ifollowedhisadviceandtrytoimitatetensentencesfromclassicalwritingartworkseachmorning.Meanwhile,Ireadtheexamplesagainandagaintoexplorethesecretofwriting.（②展示学习新技能过程中遇到的挫折，以及自己是如何应对，为后文主题不放弃做铺垫）③Itisamazingthatafterafewweeks,Iwritebetter,Icouldevenwritesomeimpressivelinesallbymyself.

④It

wasnotuntilthenthatIstartedtowriteshortarticles.⑤surprisingly,Igotmyownfansandfollowers,whichis

a

greatencouragementtome,likeamiracle.⑥ImaginehowhappyIwas.

⑦Timepermitting,Iwouldwriteafewlineseachdaytohelpothers.（③不断努力就会见到成效，给点正能量

④加一个notuntil结构的强调句型，丰富句式

⑤副词修饰整个句子，语法填空题中经常考的一个结构

⑥感叹句，抒发一下情感

⑦独立主格结构，来撑个场面）Frommywritingexperience,Ilearnedthatnobodyisbornperfect.⑧

Whenintrouble,weshouldtrytoaskforhelpandkeepontrying.⑨Anyway,Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.⑩Onlyifonenevergaveup,couldheachiev