人教版新目标英语七年级下册unit 11 写作公开课一等奖课件省赛课获奖课件

初中英语单元话题作文写作指导Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip?话题:学校组织游览活动（Schooltrips）

第1页一、写出下列短语。

1、给奶牛挤牛奶2、骑马3、许多4、在乡下5、总说来6、对……感爱好7、消防站【课前任务】

milkacow

rideahorse

quitealot(of…)

inthecountryside

allinall

beinterestedin

firestation

第2页二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

1、卡罗尔拍照了吗？

________Carol________________photos?2、那真是蛮好玩。

It________________________fun.3、总之，这是令人兴奋一天。

All________________it________anexcitingday.4、我一点都不喜欢这次行程。

I________________thetripat________.5、你在农村学习优秀东西吗？

Didyoulearn________________inthecountryside?Didtakeany

was

somuchinall

was

didn’t

likeall

anything

excellent

第3页三、写出与本话题有关词汇和句型。

常用词汇：

anything,feed,trip,learned,countryside,interestedfeed…to,quitealot,allinall,beinterestedin典型句型：Didyoulearnanything?Ifedthechickenwithmygrandpa.Howwasyourschooltrip?Theylearnedalotaboutfarming.Whatwasyourlastschooltriplike?第4页

读写结合：请阅读下面短文，按要求完成任务。

Oneday,Mr.Whitewentintoarestaurant.Heputhiscoatonachairnearthedoor.Therewasnothinginthepocketsofhiscoat.Afterhehadhismeat,hewenttotakehiscoatback.Hefoundtherewasmuchmoneyinoneofhispockets.“Whoseisthis?”hethought.Hesawawaiternearthedoor,soMr.Whitesaidtohim,“Somebodyputalotofmoneyinmycoat.Ihavenotimetowaitforhim.Ihavetogo.Takeit,please.Whenhecomesback,giveittohim.”Thewaitertookitandwentaway.Atthemoment,anothermancamewithacoatjustlikeMr.White’s.“I’msorry,”saidtheman.“Itookyourcoatandyougotmine.Pleasegivememycoatandthemoney.”Mr.Whiteanswered,“Igavethemoneytothewaiter.He’llgiveittoyou.”Mr.Whitecalledthemanager,butthemanagersaid,”Wehavenowaitershere.Weonlyhavewaitresses.Hemustbeathief!”【课中任务】第5页InformationCardMr.Whitewentout

Toeat

(1)__________

Afterhismeal,Mr.White

Found

(2)__________

Mr.Whitegavethemoneyto

(3)__________Thetwocoatslooked

(4)_________Whoisthethief

The

(5)__________something

somemoney

thewaiter

thesame

waiter第6页赏析：找出上面材料中好词好句：Usefulwords:

restaurant,nothing,pockets,thought,tookUsefulphrases:

wentinto,nearthedoor,oneof...,give...to...

Usefulsentences:

Mr.Whitewentintoarestaurant.Heputhiscoatonachairnearthedoor.Hefoundtherewasmuchmoneyinoneofhispockets.Thewaitertookitandwentaway.第7页【书面体现】假设你是张鹏，上周末你参与了一次郊游。请根据下面表格中提醒信息写一篇题为“Anexcitingtrip”英语短文。要求：1、不要逐条翻译表格中信息，可合适增加内容；

2、短文中不准出现真实地名、人名和校名；

3、词数：80词左右

Anexcitingtrip时间上周末参与者你和……地点南山公园（theSouthHillPark）活动骑自行车、爬山、照相、做游戏……感受……第8页

Canyou?

Let'sdiscusshowtowritethepassage!第9页

A.重点短语写出下列短语。1、上周末2、去郊游3、在路上4、在山顶5、直到……才……

6、玩得快乐

lastweekend

wentforatrip

ontheway

onthetop

not…until…

hadawonderfultime第10页B.重点句型根据汉语意思完成下列句。

1、上周末我跟我同窗一起去郊游。________________________,Iwent____________________________________withmyclassmates.2、我们在我们学校大门口集合。We____________atourschoolgate.3、在路上，我们非常快乐以至于我们大声地唱起来。____________________________________,weweresoexcitedthatwe________________________.4、达到那儿时我们就立即开始爬山。Whenwe____________there,we________________________climbthemountainatonce.5、我们在上顶上进行了野餐。We____________apicnic____________________________________ofthemountain.

Lastweekendfor

atrip

met

Onthe

way

sang

loudly

arrivedstaredto

had

onthe

top第11页C.写作技能指导本单元写作包括话题是“学校组织游览活动”，主要是描述过去发生事情。写好此类文章，最主要是要从时间、地点、人物、通过和成果五个方面去论述郊游，要利用好时态（一般过去时态）。第12页引入主题介绍事情体现感激

Whatanexcitingtripitwas!

WewenttotheSouthHillParkbybike....

Lastweekend,Iwentforatripwithmyclassmates.第13页Discussion!第14页Practisewriting第15页Sharegoodwriting第16页参照范文

Anexcitingtrip

Lastweekend,Iwentforatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatourschoolgate.WewenttotheSouthHillParkbybike.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedthatwesangloudly.Whenwearrivedthere,westaredtoclimbthemountainatonce.Wehadapicniconthetopofthemountain.Afterthat,wetooksomephotosandhadarest.Later,somegirlsdancedunderthetreesandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wedidn’tgobackuntil4:00p.m.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadawonderfultime!

Whatanexcitingtripitwas!点评：这篇文章作者从时间、地点、人物、事情通过、成果五个方面论述了郊游，全文