戏曲展览评论+应用文写作讲义 高三英语一轮复习

1题目假定你是李华，你在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办的一次“遇见中国戏曲(MeettheChineseOpera)”的展览，请你为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：1.展览概况；2.观展感受；3.提出建议。——————————————————————————————————————2审题1.文体：评论2.话题：中国戏曲3.对象：全校师生4.人称：第一、三人称5.时态：一般过去时为主谋篇布局：首段:开门见山，点明背景信息，在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办“遇见中国戏曲”的展览。Duringthesummerholiday/break,Ihadthepleasureofpayingavisitto/visitingthe“MeettheChineseOperaexhibitionatourcity'smuseum,whichwaswellworthit.2.Thissummervacation,Ivisitedthe“MeettheChineseOperaheldbythecitymuseum.Andsuchanexperienceleftmewithadeepimpression.3.Thissummervacationwitnessedmyinvolvementinvisitingthe“MeettheChineseOperaexhibitionhostedbythecitymuseum.中段:简要概述戏曲展览的概况，并由此引到自身的一个观展感受和评价展览概况:l.DisplayingagreatvarietyoftraditionalChineseoperasviaimages,theexhibitionofferedusanin-depthlookatthediversityoftheoperas.Inaddition,basedondifferenthistoricalscripts,wecanenjoysomefabulousoperasperformedbyprofessionaldramaactors.2.Theexhibitsondisplayincludedcostumes,makeupdesigns,andmusicalinstrumentsusedintraditionalChineseoperas.DetailedinformationaboutthedifferenttypesofChineseoperawasalsoprovided.观展感受:1.Theexhibitprovidedafascinatingglimpseintothehistoryandcultureofabygoneera,leavingmeanewfoundappreciationforthepast.AndIwasspellboundbytheemotionaldepthoftheChineseOpera,whichconveyedarangeofthoughts.2.AsIwalkedthroughthedisplays,Iwasstruckbytheefforttoexplainthehistoricalandculturalcontextsbehindeachoperaform.ThisnotonlyenhancedmyunderstandingbutalsodeepenedmyappreciationfortheartistryandstorytellinginherentinChineseopera.尾段:委婉语气给出哪些方面可提升的建议，注意措辞和对象。1Hopefully,Ifelttheexhibitioncouldhavebeenmoreengagingifinteractiveelementshadbeenincluded.Lastbutnotleast,IhopethatmoreEnglishtranslationsandexplanationscouldbeoffered,whichwouldbemoreusefulforforeignvisitorstobeexposedtoChineseculture.3.AnditwouldbewonderfultohavelivedemonstrationsorshortperformancestogivevisitorsatasteofthedynamicenergythatcharacterizesChineseopera本篇文章难点：1.注意首段对题干的信息要写作完整【暑期里、市博物馆、遇见中国戏剧展览】是不能遗漏的三个要点。2.本篇文章的话题“戏曲”平时练习较少，大家可以趁机多积累起来。3下水文：Thesuccessfulexhibitionthemed“MeettheChineseOperaheldthissummerholidayinthecitymuseumattractedlargecrowdsofpeople活动背景Toarousecitizens’interestinthetraditionalintangibleculturalheritage活动目的itcontainedseveralelaboratelyarrangedsections,rangingfromanintroductiontohistory,acostumedisplaytoaliveperformance展览概况.Whatimpressedmemostwastheliveshow,especiallythehouseholdKunquOpera-PeonyPavilion,whereeveryaudiencewastouchedbysuchabeautifulyetheartbrokenclassicstoryandtheactors’exquisiteacting展览感受Idohopetoseemoresplendidexhibitionsbroughttousinthenearfuture建议话题表达积累：largecrowds

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牡丹亭abeautifulyetheartbrokenclassicstory一个美丽但令人心碎的经典故事theactors'exquisiteacting演员精湛的演技下水文：Asoneoftheoldestdramaticartformsintheworld,Chineseoperaenjoyedgreatfamebothathomeandabroad.Thus,ahostoftouristspaidavisittoanexhibitionnamed“MeettheChineseOperaheldthissummerholidayinthecitymuseum活动背景Itpresentedacontent-richworldofChineseopera,fromthehistoryofeachgenre.suchasBeijingOpera,KunquOperaandYujuOpera,toessentialitemslikeconventionalmusicianinstrumentsandcostumes展览概况.Apartfromallthefascinatingshowpieces衔接,whatleftmealastingimpressionwastheliveshow,afeastforeveryone'seyesandears,whereactorsperformeduniquemelodiesaswellasbeautifullywrittendialoguesofhighliteraryvaluetous展览感受ThedisplaywasfabulousandIsupposethatitwouldbebetterifthereweremoreinteractions建议.话题表达积累：

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highliteraryvalue很高的文学价值参考范文：Thissummerholidaywitnessednumerousvisitorstothe"MeettheChineseOperaexhibitioninthecitymuseum.Tocultivatecitizen'sartisticaccomplishment,themuseumexhibitedmanyfantasticpictures.rangingfromPekingOpera,ShaoxingOperatoKunguOpera,bringinganaudio-visualfeastfortheartlovers.IenjoyedeverysecondofthedisplayandwasparticularlyattractedbyPekingOperaLegendoftheWhiteSnake.Exposedtotheplots,colorsandaffection,Iseemedtobepersonallyonthescene.Sincerely,Ihopeinthefutureshowscanlastlongerandmoredistinguishedworkscanbedisplayed.要点讲解Thissummerholidaywitnessednumerousvisitorstothe"MeettheChineseOperaexhibitioninthecitymuseum.开头用了无灵主语，witness见证，也可以用see，不过要注意的是无灵主语强调的对