2023年广东六省联考-可爱“肉球”差点冻死讲义 高考英语读后续写专题

读后续写题目

Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhisfriends.Hewouldtellmethathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew(言禁).Hebelievedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillinhighschool.“Youdon'ttrustme!"heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthedoorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephimsafe?Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefrontdoorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatball.“Hi,Meatball,”Isaid.bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatballseemedhappyenoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogobackoutside.

“Whywon'tshejuststayinwithusallthetime?”Nathan,myyoungestsonasked.Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoasshepleased.“Thatmustbenice,”Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,nothim,couldcomeandgo.HeevenaskedmetogiveMeatballa

curfew.Meatballbecamearegular.Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatballstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.Ishookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.Ipattedherhead,“Iknowyou'renothappy,butit'sforyourowngood.”“Mom'snotbeingmeantoyou,”Nathantoldthecat.“She'sjusttryingtokeepyoufromturningintoafrozenmeatball.”

Webothlaughedathisjoke.Thenextmorning,Icouldn'tfindMeatball.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlast

night.”Paragraph2:

AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,

Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.话题：亲子关系主要内容：文章讲述了作者的儿子抱怨妈妈对作者管得太严，不让他晚上外出，为此和妈妈闹矛盾。但是在通过猫被夜里放出而差点被东死的事情后，他儿子终于明白作者不让他出去是为了他的安全着想。把握人物情感，根据线索，进行提问和回答（Q-A模式），理清续写方向。Jordannodded.“Ilethimoutlastnight.”问题1：妈妈的语言和情绪以及神态如何？问题2：Jordan的解释是什么？注意和原文的妈妈的解释“Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoasshepleased.”和Jordan的疑问“whythecat,nothimcouldcomeandgo？”问题3：怎么找到猫的？以后接下来找到猫的动作描写/心理描写等。问题4：如何做到合理衔接下文？AsIdrovetothevet’soffice,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoatforwarmth.问题1：Jordan面对这种情况的动作面和动作链？问题2：Jordan内心的冲突，猫的“

comeandgo”到现在的“damage”，Jordan如何面对？问题3：

Meatball的结局是怎样的给妈妈带来怎么样的感受？给Jordan带来怎样的教训？

对应主题句“Iknowyou’renothappy,butit’sforyourowngood.”（主题句2）”"lovingothersenoughtoprotectthem,whethertheywantustoornot."【语块积累】1.complainabout/ofsth./doingsth.

抱怨……2.pointoutthat...

指出，说道3.rollone’seyes

翻白眼，两眼一翻4.slamthedoor

摔门5.sigh

叹气，叹息着说6.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephimsafe?我该怎么让Jordan明白我只是想保障他的安全呢？7.clearone’shead

使（头脑）变清醒，变机敏8.assb.please

按某人意愿，按某人喜欢9.mutter

嘀咕，嘟囔10.

Ishookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.我冲她摇头，怕她在外面冻死。11.patone’shead

轻拍……的头12.forone’sowngood

为……好13.bemeanto

对……刻薄，苛刻14.Mymouthdroppedopen.我惊讶得张大了嘴巴。15.furious

愤怒，怒不可遏16.

Jordanchokedbackhiswords,stunned.他忍住没说话，看上去惊呆了。17.

Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside.我抓起衣服，向外面奔去。18.

Jordanfollowed,fearwellingupinhiseyes.Jordan跟随而来，眼里充满了担忧。19.thepoorthing

可怜的家伙（也可指人）20.apologizerepeatedly

不停地道歉21.

Seeinghereyesopen,Jordanstrokedherhead,alltears.Jordan看见她睁开了眼睛，轻抚着她的头，眼睛湿润了。22.turnto

转向；求助于23.murmur

轻声细语，轻声说24.

Ifeltalumpinmythroat.我喉咙哽咽。rubone’sback

抚摸……的后背下水文1：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

MyfaceimmediatelyturnedblackandIroared,“Howdareyou?Settingherfreeinthisfreezingcold!Youmighthaveherkilled!”Takenabackbymysuddenoutburstofanger,Jordantwistedhisfaceintoanappalling

（可怕的）expressionandinnotime,wealldashedoutandlookedforMeatballeverywhere.Finally,thepoorthingwastrackeddownataquietcornerinthebackyard,shakyandwetallover.Crunchingdown,Icheckedherconditionandyelleddesperately,“Sheneedsavest,now!”AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

Wesatinsolemnsilenceandoccasionally,thesoundofJordanblowinghisnosewouldpiercethrough

（划破）thesilentair.Fromtherear-viewmirror（后视镜）,IcouldseeJordan’seyesmoisturizing（湿润）withregretfultears.Obviously,

hewasfullyawokentotheseriousconsequencesofhisdefiance

（忤逆）.Fortunately,thevettriedeverymeanstopullMeatballfromtheborderlineofdeath.Assoonasshecamebacktolife,Jordanapologizedtomesincerelyandneveroncedidhecomplainaboutthecurfew,which,heknewthroughthisbloodylessonofMeatball,wasforhisowngood.下水文2：

Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

Iletoutakindofmuffledscreamandalmostroaredinatremblingvoice.“Shewillfreezetodeath.Gooutandfindher!”Werushedoutsidewithoutdelay,attemptingtolookupintothetraceforMeatball.“Hereshewas!”Nathanexclaimed,whosefacewascloudedbyaworriedandpainfulexpression.Meatballwasfoundlyingoutinthegarden,drenchedandhalf-frozen.“Weshoulddrivehertotheanimalhospital.Sheneedsmedicalhelp.Now!”Iscreamedaloudaftercheckinghercondition.

AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

JordanwasreducedtostunnedsilencewhileNathanstartedtosnivel.“Sorry,Ijustwanttosetherfree.Ididn'tmeanto…”Takingaquickglanceatmyglumface,Jordanloweredhishead.Itriedmybesttobottleupmyangerandboomed,“Learnfromyourmistakes.IgaveyouacurfewbecauseIonlywanttokeepyousafe.”Inthehospital,Meatballwasnursedbacktohealth,andJordanhadnevercomplainedaboutthecurfewagain.参考范文：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”Mymouthdroppedopen.“Shewasoutsideallnight?”

Iwas

so

furious,“Itwasfreezingandshecoulddie!”

Jordanchokedbackhiswords,stunned.Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside.Jordanfollowed,fearwellingupinhiseyes.Severalminutes