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Iheardthatyouhadaquarrelwithyourparentsbecauseyouareaddictedtomobilephonegames.Soyoumustbeupsetnow.

Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnottherightthing.Firstly,youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.What'smore,youshouldn'tquarrelwithyourparents.Theywereconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy,butyoudidn'tshowrespect,whichmadethemheartbroken.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerelyandbreakthisbadhabitnow.

Iamexpectingyourgoodnews!

Yourssincerely,

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1Iheardthatyouhadaquarrelwithyourparentsbecauseyouareaddictedtomobilephonegames.2Soyoumustbeupsetnow.

3Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnottherightthing.4Firstly,youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.5What'smore,youshouldn'tquarrelwithyourparents.6Theywereconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy,butyoudidn'tshowrespect,whichmadethemheartbroken.7Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerelyandbreakthisbadhabitnow.

8Iamexpectingyourgoodnews!

Yourssincerely,

LiXiaDearJack,

Iheardthatyouhadaquarrelwithyourparentsbecauseyouareaddictedtomobilephonegames.Soyoumustbeupsetnow.

Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnottherightthing.Firstly,youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.What'smore,youshouldn'tquarrelwithyourparents.Theywereconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy,butyoudidn'tshowrespect,whichmadethemheartbroken.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerelyandbreakthisbadhabitnow.

Iamexpectingyourgoodnews!

Yourssincerely,

LiXiaDearJack,

Iheardthatyouhadaquarrelwithyourparentsbecauseyouareaddictedtomobilephonegames.Soyoumustbeupsetnow.

Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnottherightthing.Firstly,youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.What'smore,youshouldn'tquarrelwithyourparents.Theywereconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy,butyoudidn'tshowrespect,whichmadethemheartbroken.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerelyandbreakthisbadhabitnow.

Iamexpectingyourgoodnews!

Yourssincerely,

LiXiaDearJack,

Iheardthatyouhadaquarrelwithyourparentsbecauseyouareaddictedtomobilephonegames.Soyoumustbeupsetnow.

Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnottherightthing.Firstly,youaresupposedto

focusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.What'smore,youshouldn'tquarrelwithyourparents.Theywereconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy,butyoudidn'tshowrespect,whichmadethemheartbroken.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerelyandbreakthisbadhabitnow.

Iamexpectingyourgoodnews!

Yourssincerely,

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（用含express或convey短语）

Iamwritingto___________________youforyourgeneroushelp.

conveymygratitudetointhank-youletters(感谢信)expressmythanks

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whosethemeis

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地点：501教室被动语态willbeheldInnoticesorinvitationletters3.TryyourbesttovarythesentencepatternsVarythesentencepatterns5.带着最深的感激之情，我给你写这封信。（with）Withdeepestgratitude,Iamwritingyouthisletter.Itis

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Iamwritingyouthisletter.IamwritingtotellyouIgreatlyappreciate_________________________（你为我所做的一切）

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③定语从句inthank-youletters(感谢信)6.我写信是想咨询你关于夏令营的信息。

I’mwritingtoaskfortheinformationaboutthesummercamp.

（改为宾语从句）inconsultationletters（咨询信）

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Ican’tattendyourpartybecauseatthattimeIwillbepreparingforanEnglishSpeech.

ItisbecauseatthattimeIwillbepreparingforanEnglishSpeechthatIcan’tattendyourparty.beoccupiedwithThereasonwhyIcan’tattendyourpartyisthatatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedbyanEnglishSpeech.ThereasonwhyIcan’tattendyourpartyisthatatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedbyanEnglishSpeech,________________________________（这完全在意料之外）①强调句③定语从句②用thereasonwhy…