26.现象分析英语作文名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件

26.现象分析第1页文体概述现象分析文章属于说明文，普通先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生原因，最终提出提议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通惯用普通现在时态。第2页惯用语块引发某人注意______________________________________________________________2.采取办法(做……)______________________3.日益严重问题______________________4.普遍现象______________________5.改进这种情况______________________improvethesituationdraw/arouseone’sattention/bebroughttoone’sattentiontakemeasures(todo…)anincreasinglyseriousproblemacommonphenomenon第3页6.全社会_______________________7.安全意识_______________________8.有效方法/路径_______________________9.越来越多……_______________________10.共同关注_______________________acommonconcernthewholesocietysafetyawarenessaneffectiveapproachanincreasingnumberof…第4页11.热点话题_____________________12.人们普遍认为_____________________13.社会发展必定结果____________________________14.伴随经济快速发展____________________________15.面临新机遇和挑战____________________________befacedwithnewopportunitiesandchallenges

ahottopicItiscommonlybelieved/recognizedthat…theinevitableresultofsocialdevelopmentwiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomy第5页套用句式伴随工业发展，城市空气质量变得越来越差。2.近期校车安全问题成为了一个日益严重问题。1.Withtherapiddevelopmentofindustry,theairqualityincitiesisbecomingworseandworse.2.Recentlythesafetyofschoolbuseshasbecomeanincreasinglyseriousproblem.第6页3.如今高中生在网上开通博客成为了一个普遍现象。4.结果，这种现象引发了社会关注。5.有三方面主要原因应该引发我们关注。3.ItisacommonphenomenonthathighschoolstudentsopentheirblogsontheInternet.5.Therearethreemainfactorsthatshouldcallourconcern.4.Asaresult,thephenomenonhasarousedsocialattention.第7页习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)Recentlythesafetyofschoolbuseshasbecomeaseriouslyproblem,thathasattractedmoreandmorepublicattention.Soinourclasswehaveheldanheateddiscussiononthecausesandsolution.Afterthediscuss,wefindthattheproblemcausedbythreekindsofreasonswhichincludeoverloading,speedingaswellasweaksafetyawareness.seriouswhichasolutionsdiscussion∧is第8页Asbythesolutions,firstofall,weallthinkthatitnecessarytoexaminethesafetyoftheschoolbuses.Beside,weshouldstopriskybusesfrombeingoperated.Onlyifallpeopleattachimportancetosafetyeducationtoraisesafetyawarenesscantrafficaccidentsdecreased.forBesidesdecrease第9页1.seriously→serious修饰名词要用形容词形式。2.that→which非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。3.an→a冠词后面heated并非以元音音素开头。4.solution→solutionssolution是可数名词，要和causes保持一致。5.discuss→discussion定冠词the后面接名词。第10页6.在problem后加is分析句子成份可知，此处caused作谓语，故要考虑时态和语态。时态准确，但语态应该用被动才符合逻辑。7.by→for固定搭配asfor意为“至于/关于”。8.去掉think后that此处并非引导宾语从句，而是it作形式宾语，后面不定式短语才是真正宾语。9.Beside→Besidesbeside意为“在……旁边”，不符合文意。besides意为“另外”，符合文意。10.decreased→decrease情态动词后接动词原形。第11页课堂练习伴随经济发展，人们生活水平日益提升，一些中学生消费问题成了一个热门话题。他们花钱大手大脚，令学校难以管理。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。关键点以下：1.存在现象。2.引发此现象原因。3.你呼吁。注意：1.词数100左右。2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第12页Today,it’sacommonphenomenonthatsomemiddleschoolstudentsareextremelylavishinspendingmoney,whichhasarousedwideconcern.Generally,there’reseveralfactorscontributingtothephenomenon.First,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,middleschoolstudents,thetreasureoftheirparents,cangetlotsofpocketmoneyfromtheirparents.Second,somestudentsspendlessontheirregularmealsandnecessitiestosavetheirpocketmoney,withwhichtheybuysnacks,cellphones,fashionableclothes,etc.第13页Third,youngastheyare,theylearntoblindlyworshipthosewithmuchpocketmoney,whichcausesthemtocomparewitheachotheronsomethingunrealistic.Tohelpthestudents,Icallonschoolsandparentstotakemeasurestocultivatethestudents’correctvalueofconsuming.第14页课外作业每年高考后，高考状元被“热炒”。他们被各种采访和社会活动所包围，甚至能够得到大笔奖金。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。关键点以下：1.存在现象。2.引发此现象原因。3.你提议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第15页EveryyearaftertheCollegeEntranceExam,thetopscorerswillattractwideattentionfromacrossthecountry.Theyacceptvariousinterviews,participateindifferentsocialactivitiesandevengainlotsofprizemoney.Generally,there’reseveralreasonswhytopscorersareworshipedandpopular.First,manypeopleareaffectedbytheChinesetraditionalthoughts,thinkingthattopscorerswilloftenhaveabrightfuture.第16页Second,averagestudentsthinkthattopscorersaregoodlearners,fromwhomtheycanabsolutelylearnalot