2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写练习（男孩在露营地迷路最终成功获救）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习男孩在露营地迷路，最终成功获救1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Threedaysearlier,12-year-oldMichaelhaddisappearedfromhiscampsiteintheBlueRidgeMountainsinNorthCarolina.Hehadlovedandreadthebooksaboutyoungboyssurvivinginthewoodsalone.However,amassivesearchhadpassedandtherewashardlyanysignoftheboy.Peoplewereabouttolosehopewhenonedog,namedGandalf,steppedin.MishaandGandalf,hertwo-year-olddog,hadtrainedforayearwiththeSouthCarolinaSearchandRescueDogAssociation.Butthiswastheirfirstrealjob,andMishadecidedshehadtocooperatewellwithherdog.Afterleavinghomeintheearlymorning,Mishagatheredwithherteammembers,andtheyheadedtothemountains.Alltheyfoundinthewholemorningwassomethinslicesoffriedpotato.TheywerewestofMichael’scampsitealongafireroadthatrandeepinside.Thentheyfoundfootprintsleadingtoanotherpathandthentoastreamaboutaquartermilefromthecamp.Itwasafairlygoodpath,buttheylostthetracksatthestream.4续写原文Nowthesunwentdownandthetemperaturebegantodropbelowfreezing.Thankfully,Michaelhadbeenwearingaredcoatandgoodboots.Mishabreathedasighofreliefandhopedtheboyhadfoundshelter.Worriedasshewas,Misharemainedcalm.Shetookoutthebagcontainingtheshred(碎片)ofMichael’sshirtandletGandalfsniffit.Headupandnosehigh,thedogstartedupthepath.Mishaconcentratedonthesearchahead.Shedidn’twantanythingnegativetocloudherfocus.“Michaelisalive.We’regoingtofindhim,”shetoldGandalf.Nightwascominganditwastimefortheresearcherstoturnbackandgodownhill.ItseemedthatGandalfwouldn’tstop.Herantotheleft,outofsightbehindtheedgeofthecliff(悬崖).Mishaturnedthebend,tryingnottobeleftbehind.5段首句Para1：Suddenly50yardsuponthecliffsidelayaboyinaredcoat.

Para2：Asitturnedout,Michael’sexperiencewasnothinglikewhathereadinhisnovels.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了三天前，喜欢并读过关于独自在森林中生存的书的12岁的迈克尔在北卡罗来纳州蓝岭山脉的露营地失踪了。大规模的搜索已经过去，几乎没有任何男孩的迹象。就在人们快要失去希望的时候，一只搜救犬协会接受了一年的训练的名叫甘道夫的狗找到迈克尔，最后迈克尔被救援人员救助下来。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Suddenly50yardsuponthecliffsidelayaboyinaredcoat.由第一段首句内容“突然，在50码高的悬崖边躺着一个穿红色外套的男孩。”可知，第一段可描写在甘道夫的坚持搜索下，饥饿和疲劳的迈克尔被大家发现，他解释了他在森林里的冒险经历。10续写思路分析Para2：Asitturnedout,Michael’sexperiencewasnothinglikewhathereadinhisnovels.由第二段首句内容“事实证明，迈克尔的经历与他在小说中读到的完全不同。”可知，第二段可描写迈克尔如何在森林活下来，并表示对甘道夫的感激。11续写思路分析续写线索成功被发现——得到救助——解释经历——感激大家12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①喊道：yell/cry/scream/shout②联系：contact/connect③帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①自豪地：proudly/withpride②感激的：grateful/thankful/appreciative13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].“Itwashethatledustoyou,”shesaidtotheboy,pointingtothedogwhowasshakinghistailproudly.（运用强调句型、非谓语动词和定语从句）[高分句型2].Asitturnedout,Michael’sexperiencewasnothinglikewhathereadinhisnovels.（由关系代词as引导的非限制性定语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Suddenly50yardsuponthecliffsidelayaboyinaredcoat.Mishabeganyelling,“Michael,isthatyou?”Theboyturnedsilentlytowardsthem.Itwasclearthathewasdizzyfromhungerandtiredness.QuicklyMishaandothermembersclimbeduptohim.TheycarriedhimdownhilltosafetynexttoGandalf.“Well,thisisGandalf.Itwashethatledustoyou,”shesaidtotheboy,pointingtothedog（现在分词作状语）whowasshakinghistailproudly（定语从句）.Whiletherescuerscontactedthebasecamp,Michaelhadsomefoodandwaterthey’dgiventohim.Thenheexplainedhisadventureinthewoods.16范文呈现Asitturnedout,Michael’sexperiencewasnothinglikewhathereadinhisnovels.Unliketheircharacters,hehadnotbeenluckyenoughtofindacaveoranyothertoolthatwouldhavehelpedhim.Buthewentallouttosurvive.Heusedtreeleavestostaywarmandwildfruitstokeephimfromdyingofstarvation.Thebiggestmistakehemadewasthathedidn’tstayinoneplaceormakeenoughnoisetoattractattention.Hewasgratefultoeveryonewholookedforhim,especiallyGandalf.17范文译文突然，50码高处的悬崖边躺着一个穿着红色外套的男孩。米莎开始大喊：“迈克尔，是你吗？”男孩默默地转向他们。很明显，他因饥饿和疲劳而头晕。米莎和其他成员迅速爬到他面前。他们把他抬下山，送到甘道夫旁边的安全地带。“好吧，这是甘道夫。是他把我们带到了你身边，”她指着骄傲地摇着尾巴的狗对男孩说。当救援人员联系大本营时，迈克尔得到了他们给他的一些食物和水。然后他解释了他在树林里的冒险经历。18范文译文事实证明，迈克尔的经历与他在小说中读到的完全