江苏省2021届高三上学期大市期中试题汇编：应用文写作(含解析)

江苏省2021届高三上学期大市期中试题汇编：应用文写作（含解析）江苏省南通市2020-2021学年高三上学期期中学情检测英语61.假定你是李华。上周日你校邀请本市志愿援助武汉抗击新冠病毒的刘医生为全校师生做了一场演讲，大家深受感动和鼓舞。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：1.活动时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.活动的意义。注意：词数80左右。新冠病毒Covid-19_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastSunday,ourschoolheldameaningfulactivityatourschoollecturehall.Mr.Liu,adoctorfromourlocalhospitalwhovolunteeredtoWuhanthisspringtofightagainstCovid-19,wasinvitedtodeliveraspeechforus.Alltheteachersandstudentsweredeeplymovedandinspiredbyhisheroicdeeds.Attheendofhisspeech,weshowedourrespectforMr.Liuwithapplause.Welearnedalotfromhimandmanystudentssaidthattheywantedtobeadoctorinthefuture.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇报道。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华。上周日你校邀请本市志愿援助武汉抗击新冠病毒的刘医生为全校师生做了一场演讲，大家深受感动和鼓舞。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：1.活动时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.活动的意义。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：holdameaningfulactivity(举办一次有意义的活动)；schoollecturehall(学校演讲厅)；volunteertodo(志愿做某事)；fightagainst(抗击)；deliveraspeech(发表演讲)；deeplymoved(深受感动)；heroicdeeds(英雄事迹)；attheendof(在……结束时)；applause(掌声)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Mr.Liu,adoctorfromourlocalhospitalwhovolunteeredtoWuhanthisspringtofightagainstCovid-19,wasinvitedtodeliveraspeechforus.运用了定语从句；Welearnedalotfromhimandmanystudentssaidthattheywantedtobeadoctorinthefuture.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。江苏省苏州市2021届高三上学期期中考试英语试题第一节(满分15分)46.假定你是李华，你的朋友Frank询问你最近的情况。你校在教育部提倡的劳动教育中，开展了“Let'sdohousework”活动，请你给他回一份邮件，告诉他相关信息，邮件内容包括:1.活动的目的;2.活动的内容;3.你的感想。注意:1.词数80左右;2.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。参考词汇:劳动教育:educationonthehard-workingspiritDearFrank,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua,【答案】Possibleversion：DearFrank,IamsogladtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyouaboutmylife.Tostrengtheneducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudents,ourschoolhaslaunchedacampaigncalled“Let’sdohousework”.Studentsaresupposedtoacquirebasicworkingcapabilityandformgoodworkinghabitsthroughit.Wedowhateverwecanafterstudylikewashingthedishes,tidyingtheroomanddoingthelaundry.Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Frank写封邮件，告诉他你校在教育部提倡的劳动教育中开展的“Let'sdohousework”活动相关信息。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍活动的目的；2.介绍活动的内容;3.说出你的感想。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）strengtheneducation;launchacampaign;acquirebasicworkingcapability;formgoodworkinghabits;reduceparents’burden;developasenseofresponsibility第三步：连词成句1.Tostrengtheneducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudents,ourschoolhaslaunchedacampaigncalled“Let’sdohousework”.2.Studentsaresupposedtoacquirebasicworkingcapabilityandformgoodworkinghabitsthroughit.3.Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：notonly…but(also)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1].Wedowhateverwecanafterstudylikewashingthedishes,tidyingtheroomanddoingthelaundry.(whatever引导的宾语从句和动名词作介词like的宾语。)[高分句型2].Doinghouseworknotonlyhelpsreduceparents’burdenbutalsohelpsustodevelopasenseofresponsibility.（动名词作主语。）江苏省常州市2021届高三上学期期中检测英语试题第一节(满分15分)46.假定你是班级英语课代表李华，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡全班同学学会用英语传播中国文化。要点提示：1.提出倡议：2.用英语传播中国文化的意义：3.用英语传播中国文化的方法。注意：1.写作字数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，答题卡中不用再写已给开头和结尾。Dearfellowstudents______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,IamcallinguponallofyoutospreadChinesecultureviaEnglish.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstofall,Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.Secondly,spreadingourgloriousculturebyEnglishwillgetacrosstoforeignersourprofoundwisdomandspectacularcivilization.Finally,tellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.Whatismore,organizingcultureexchangeactivitiesamongstudentsalsohelps.Hopetheabovesuggestionsareofpracticaluse.LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一份倡议书，倡导全班同学学会用英语传播中国文化。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.提出倡议：2.用英语传播中国文化的意义：3.用英语传播中国文化的方法。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）callupon;alonghistory;highlight;consolidate;getacrossto;profound;tellstories;promote;drawlessons;organize;practicaluse第三步：连词成句1.IamcallinguponallofyoutospreadChinesecultureviaEnglish.2.Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.3.SpreadingourgloriousculturebyEnglishwillgetacrosstoforeignersourprofoundwisdomandspectacularcivilization.4.TellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.5.Organizingcultureexchangeactivitiesamongstudentsalsohelps.6.Hopetheabovesuggestionsareofpracticaluse.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Secondly,Finally2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore3.表因果关系：since连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstofall,Chineseculture,whichboastsofalonghistoryandcoversawiderangeofthings,whethermateriallyorideologically,willhighlightouridentityasChinesepeopleandconsolidatenationalcohesion.(首先，中华文化源远流长，内容广泛，无论是物质上还是思想上，都将突现我们的中华民族的身份，巩固民族凝聚力)，这句话运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是Chineseculture。[高分句型2]Finally,tellingChinesestoriesinEnglishisagoodwaytopromoteourcultureabroadsinceitishumannaturetolistentostoriesanddrawfromthemvaluablelessons.(最后，用英语讲中国故事是一种很好的来推广我们的文化的方式，因为听故事并从中吸取宝贵教训是人类的天性)，这句话运用了since引导原因状语从句。江苏省连云港市2021届高三上学期期中调研英语试题第一节（满分15分）46.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Owen对中国古典名著很感兴趣。请你用英文写一封邮件，推荐他阅读《西游记》。内容包括：1.作品简介；2.推荐理由。注意：1词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：取经fetchsutrasDearOwen,SogladtoknowyouarefondofChineseclassics.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethatyouwillloveit.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearOwen,SogladtoknowyouarefondofChineseclassics.JourneytotheWestwrittenbyWuCheng’enisamust-readforyou.SetintheTangDynasty,itdescribesthetoughjourneyofamonkXuanzangtofetchsutrasfromIndiawithsomeanimalspirits,includingtheMonkeyKing.Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.Honestly,itsmixtureoffantasyandrealityismyfavourite.Hopethatyouwillloveit.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对中国古典名著很感兴趣的英国笔友Owen写一封邮件，推荐他阅读《西游记》。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。结构：总分法要求：

1.作品简介；2.推荐理由。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）JourneytotheWest;fetchsutras;notonly…but(also)…;beexposedto;fantasyandreality第三步：连词成句1.JourneytotheWestwrittenbyWuCheng’enisamust-readforyou.2.SetintheTangDynasty,itdescribesthetoughjourneyofamonkXuanzangtofetchsutrasfromIndiawithsomeanimalspirits,includingtheMonkeyKing.3.Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.4.Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.5.Honestly,itsmixtureoffantasyandrealityismyfavourite.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）文章可运用的表并列补充关系的词有：Additionally,notonly…but(also),including连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Thestoryisnotonlyentertainingwithmagicaltricks,butinspiringintermsofcourageandpersistence.运用“notonly…but(also)…”结构。[高分句型2]Additionally,youwillenjoybeingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories.运用动名词作宾语。江苏省泰州市2021届高三上学期期中英语试题第一节（满分15分）46.某英文网站正在征集保护泰州梅兰芳纪念馆（MeiLanfangMemorial)的建议，假定你是李华，请你写一封信，内容包括：1.保护意义；2.保护措施（至少两点）注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearSir/Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,I'dliketomakesomesuggestionsontheprotectionofMeiLanfangMemorial.Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialis

thesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.Inagesturetopreservethememorialbetter,aspecialcommitteeshouldbeestablishedtostrengthenregulations.Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。某英文网站正在征集保护泰州梅兰芳纪念馆（MeiLanfangMemorial)的建议，要求考生根据其要求写一封建议信投稿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.保护意义；2.保护措施（至少两点）第二步:列提纲（重点词组）wouldliketodo;makesomesuggestionson;protection;situatedin;downtown;memorial;symbol;fundamental;undertake;gesture;preserve;committee;establish;strengthen;regulations.;Additionally;urgent;toraisepublicawarenessof;importance;value;thehistoricsite;appreciate;considered.第三步：连词成句1.I'dliketomakesomesuggestionsontheprotectionofMeiLanfangMemorial.2.Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialisthesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.3.Inagesturetopreservethememorialbetter,aspecialcommitteeshouldbeestablishedtostrengthensregulations.4.Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.5.Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Additionally,moreover(供参考)3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Some…,whileothers…,so…that…(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Situatedinthedowntown,thememorialisthesymbolofTaizhou,soitisfundamentaltoundertakingacompleteprotection.(使用了过去分词作状语，由so引导结果状语从句。)[高分句型2]Additionally,itisurgenttoraisepublicawarenessoftheimportanceandvalueofprotectingthehistoricsite.(使用了由it作形式主语的固定句型It’s+形容词+todosth.)[高分句型3]Iwouldappreciateitifmyadvicecouldbeconsidered.(由if引导条件状语从句。)江苏省无锡市2021届高三上学期期中考试英语第一节（满分15分）46.假定你是李华，你英国朋友Jack在“汉语桥”（ChineseBridgeCompetition)中文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.肯定Jack付出的努力；3.赠送中国四大名著小说。注意：1.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,KnowingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseBridgeCompetition,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,KnowingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseBridgeCompetition,Ifeelverydelighted.Congratulationstoyou.Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.It’sreallyamazingforaforeignertolearnandspeakChinesesowell.Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit.Howgreatyouare.IhavealreadydeliveredasetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovelstoyou.IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese.I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给英国朋友Jack，祝贺他在“汉语桥”（ChineseBridgeCompetition)中文比赛中获得一等奖。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表示祝贺；2.肯定Jack付出的努力；3.赠送中国四大名著小说；4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）wonthefirstprizein;theChineseBridgeCompetition;feeldelighted;congratulationstosb.;asisknowntoall;it’sreallyamazingforaforeignerto;skillcomesonlywithpractice;patience,andpersistence;makegreateffortstomakeit;deliver…to...;asetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovels;beofsomehelpto;lookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture第三步：连词成句1.Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.2.It’sreallyamazingforaforeignertolearnandspeakChinesesowell.3.Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit.4.IhavealreadydeliveredasetofChina’sfourgreatclassicnovelstoyou.5IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese.6.I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表因果关系：since。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Asisknowntoall,Chineseisoneofthemostdifficultlanguagestolearn.句中使用了as引导非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2]Sinceskillcomesonlywithpractice,patience,andpersistence,youmusthavemadegreateffortstomakeit。句中使用了musthavedone表对过去的肯定猜测。[高分句型3]IhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyouinlearningChinese。句中使用了“beof+名词”结构，此处beofsomehelptoyou，它与比普通表达behelpfultoyou相比，句型更高级，体现了作者很高的英语驾驭能力。江苏省徐州市2021届高三上学期期中英语试题第一节（满分15分）46.假定你校新校区刚落成，你作为学生代表参观了新校区。请用英语向全班同学做简单介绍。内容包括：1.新校区概况（面积翻倍；绿树成荫，设施先进······);2.你参观后的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2.题目、开头和结尾已为你写好。OurNewCampusHello.boysandgirls.AseveryoneiseagertolearnaboutournewschoolcampusIwouldliketogiveyouabriefintroduction.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforlistening.【答案】OurnewcampusHello,boysandgirls.Aseveryoneiseagertolearnaboutournewschoolcampus，Iwouldliketogiveyouabriefintroduction.Ournewcampusistwicetheareaofthepreviousone.Treeslininguponbothsides,youcanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.Myfeelingafterthisvisitissheerblissandpride.Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycare-freelyinsuchcomfort.Iamproudbecauseourschoolistheonlyoneinthecityboastingoffrontierteachingtechnologyandequipment.Thankyouforyourlistening.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，用英语向全班同学对新校区做个介绍。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，可兼用少量其他时态。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.新校区概况面积翻倍；绿树成荫；设施先进……2.参观后的感受。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）twicetheareaofthepreviousone;treeslininguponbothsides;equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities;blissandpride第三步：连词成句1.Ournewcampusistwicetheareaofthepreviousone.2.Treeslininguponbothsidesyoucanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.3.Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.4.Myfeelingafterthisvisitissheerblissandpride.5.Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycarefreelyinsuchcomfort.6.Iamproudbecauseourschoolistheonlyoneinthecityboastingoffrontierteachingtechnologyandequipment.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如果没必要运用衔接与过渡词语，心中也要有文章纽带贯穿的逻辑，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Treeslininguponbothsides,youcanfeelthefreshnessofspring,coolnessofsummer,fruitfulnessofautumnandsolemnnessofwinter.（独立主格结构作状语）[高分句型2]Equippedwiththemostadvancedteachingfacilities,everyclassroomisspacious,modernanduser-friendly.（非谓语动词过去分词作状语）[高分句型3]Iamblissfulbecausewemodernstudentsareabletopursueourstudycarefreelyinsuchcomfort.（原因状语从句）江苏省盐城市2021届高三上学期期中英语试题第一节（满分15分）46.假定你是李华，下周你将代表班级参加学校以“SustainableDevelopment”为题的演讲比赛，请写一份英文演讲稿，内容包括：1.自然资源的劣势；2.替代能源的优势。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右，文章标题和首尾句已给出，不计入总词数；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SustainableDevelopmentHello,everyone!I'mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakhereonbehalfofmyclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou.【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakonbehalfofmyclasshere.Aspeoplearebecomingmoreawareoftheneedtoprotecttheenvironment,sustainabledevelopmenthasbecomeanirreversibletrend.WhilenearlyeverythingwedoinmodernlivesrequiresuseoftheEarth’snaturalresources,theydohavemanydisadvantages.Theyarenon-renewableandburningfuelscanbeharmfultotheenvironment.That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.Alternativeenergysources,includingsolarenergy,windenergyandhydroelectricity,canbeusedwithoutrunningout.Ontopofthis,theyareenvironment-friendlyandbeneficialtothelivesofourchildrenandgrandchildren.That’sall.Thankyou.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“SustainableDevelopment”为题，写一篇演讲稿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：演讲稿内容应该包括：1.自然资源的劣势；2.替代能源的优势。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）onbehalfof;beawareof;beharmfulto;runout;bebeneficialto第三步：连词成句1.I’mprivilegedtohavethechancetospeakonbehalfofmyclasshere.2.Aspeoplearebecomingmoreawareoftheneedtoprotecttheenvironment,sustainabledevelopmenthasbecomeanirreversibletrend.3.WhilenearlyeverythingwedoinmodernlivesrequiresuseoftheEarth’snaturalresources,theydohavemanydisadvantages.4.Theyarenon-renewableandburningfuelscanbeharmfultotheenvironment.5.That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.6.Alternativeenergysources,includingsolarenergy,windenergyandhydroelectricity,canbeusedwithoutrunningout.7.Ontopofthis,theyareenvironment-friendlyandbeneficialtothelivesofourchildrenandgrandchildren.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：That’swhypeoplearepushingfortheuseofalternativeenergysources.这句话运用了why引导的表语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如beawareof;beharmfulto;runout;bebeneficialto等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。江苏省扬州市2020-2021学年高三