山作文之钟南山英语作文

钟南山英语作文【篇一：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题1：家庭、朋友和周围的人part1:sometips概述：人物简介属于记叙文（narration）的写作范围，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、重要事件(what)等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清晰，并注意构造的完整性。技巧点拨：1.仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1)确定类型：人物简介2)确定体裁:记叙文3)确定主体时态:一般目前时4)确定主体人称:第三人称2．合理安排短文的构造层次，组织好所提醒内容体现的先后次序。3．句子时态要在上下文中有有关性、持续性，要与体现内容一致。4．审题后要先列出简要扼要的提纲，另一方面写出草稿，通过修改之后，再正式成文。一、人物简介的写作环节：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace2.familybackground3.educationbackground4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5.evaluation二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace1）age:theymighthaveneedsandproblemsoftheirown.2）birthdayandbirthplace:…was/werebornin…on…eg.shewasborninpolandonnov.7,1867.bornin1985,heisnowan24-year-oldstudent.3）sexmarriage1eg.heisamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.heis35,maleandunmarried.4）appearanceeg:sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongblackhair.heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.5）height:eg.heis1.76meterstall.heis176centimeterstall.heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.6）health:eg.welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.heisnotsostrong,but(he’s)ingoodhealth.2.familybackground…was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.abrahamlincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninkentuckyonfebruary12,1809.bornintoapoorclerk’sfamily,charlesdickenshadlittleschooling.3.educationbackgroundbeadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudieseg.hestartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.hewenttostudyinbeijinguniversityin1984and4yearslaterhegraduated(fromthatuniversity).welearnedmanycourses,suchasenglish,mathsandsoon.hegothisbachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinapril1998...4.bigeventsinone’slifebeinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance2bestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/winthenobelprizefor…begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…study/trainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etceg.hisfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.inhissparetime,helikesreadingandenjoyingtraveling.he’sgoodatspokenenglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.5.evaluationoneofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofchina.hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecitymakegreatcontributionsto…consistency/perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…championshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedleifenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader6.描写人物外貌和性格特性good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedblue-eyedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortbeautifulprettylovelynaughtysmartwisecleverbrightdiligentintelligenthardworkinglazyhealthy3humorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidentindependentpatientbeinconditionbeoutofconditionfinewell三、语法、句法高分tips1.a.概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语构造，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一b.外貌,性格：巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发c.教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼1）forfurtherstudies.2）degree.d.生平:尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）2）e．评估：注意运用某些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）2）四、样本写作姓名：刘翔出生年月：1983年7月13日性别；男出生地：上海身高：1.89米教练：孙海平偶像：jordon专题：110栏成就：7月12日在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信瑞士洛桑:lausanne,switzerland写作指导：1.组织材料，写出句子1)为人诚恳,随和,自信乐观的男孩刘翔,出生在1983年7月13日上海.liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.2)他的偶像是jordon,爱好是听音乐,看打游戏及看书.hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.3)拥有身高1.89米的他擅长110米栏.withtheheightof1.89metres,heisgoodat110metreshurdles.4)在他的教练孙海平的协助下他获得了诸多傲人的成绩.underthetrainingofsunhaiping,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.5)他２００６年７月１２日他在瑞士洛桑以１２秒８８破世界记录．hebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.2.扩句成文，构成篇章①liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.4②hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.③withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdles.④underthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.⑤hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievementsandoneofachievementsisthathebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.3.检查润色3)与否用5个句子1)时态与否对的4)与否遗漏必要信息2)人称与否一致5)与否语句连贯liuxiang,,anhonest,easy-goingconfidentandoptimisticman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdlesandunderthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.forexample,hebroketheasianrecordwiththetime13’12in,andtwoyearslater,hewonthechampionshipagainin12’91inathenwhichtiestheworldrecord.mostexcitingly,hebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.part2:haveatry一翻译下列句子1.姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年41岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。2.黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30数年的英语老师。3.达.芬奇(leonardodavinci)是16世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。4.他是一位天才，把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。5.《蒙娜丽莎》是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。它是达.芬奇的代表作。6.帕瓦罗蒂(pavarotti)被誉为“高音c(thehighc’s)之王”，为古典音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出奉献。7.赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。8.他24岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。9.安南（annan）先生出生于1938年4月8日，加纳（ghana）。他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理学的硕士学位。10.安南（annan）先生为建立一种更有组织、更和平的世界所做出的工作得到大家的承认。5【篇二：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题1：家庭、朋友和周围的人part1:sometips概述：人物简介属于记叙文（narration）的写作范围，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、重要事件(what)等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清晰，并注意构造的完整性。技巧点拨：1.仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1)确定类型：人物简介2)确定体裁:记叙文3)确定主体时态:一般目前时4)确定主体人称:第三人称2．合理安排短文的构造层次，组织好所提醒内容体现的先后次序。3．句子时态要在上下文中有有关性、持续性，要与体现内容一致。4．审题后要先列出简要扼要的提纲，另一方面写出草稿，通过修改之后，再正式成文。一、人物简介的写作环节：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace2.familybackground3.educationbackground4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5.evaluation二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace1）age:theymighthaveneedsandproblemsoftheirown.2）birthdayandbirthplace:…was/werebornin…on…eg.shewasborninpolandonnov.7,1867.bornin1985,heisnowan24-year-oldstudent.3）sexmarriage1eg.heisamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.heis35,maleandunmarried.4）appearanceeg:sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongblackhair.heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.5）height:eg.heis1.76meterstall.heis176centimeterstall.heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.6）health:eg.welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.heisnotsostrong,but(he’s)ingoodhealth.2.familybackground…was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.abrahamlincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninkentuckyonfebruary12,1809.bornintoapoorclerk’sfamily,charlesdickenshadlittleschooling.3.educationbackgroundbeadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudieseg.hestartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.hewenttostudyinbeijinguniversityin1984and4yearslaterhegraduated(fromthatuniversity).welearnedmanycourses,suchasenglish,mathsandsoon.hegothisbachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinapril1998...4.bigeventsinone’slifebeinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance2bestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/winthenobelprizefor…begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…study/trainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etceg.hisfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.inhissparetime,helikesreadingandenjoyingtraveling.he’sgoodatspokenenglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.5.evaluationoneofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofchina.hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecitymakegreatcontributionsto…consistency/perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…championshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedleifenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader6.描写人物外貌和性格特性good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedblue-eyedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortbeautifulprettylovelynaughtysmartwisecleverbrightdiligentintelligenthardworkinglazyhealthy3humorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidentindependentpatientbeinconditionbeoutofconditionfinewell三、语法、句法高分tips1.a.概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语构造，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一b.外貌,性格：巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发c.教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼1）forfurtherstudies.2）degree.d.生平:尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）2）e．评估：注意运用某些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）2）四、样本写作姓名：刘翔出生年月：1983年7月13日性别；男出生地：上海身高：1.89米教练：孙海平偶像：jordon专题：110栏成就：7月12日在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信瑞士洛桑:lausanne,switzerland写作指导：1.组织材料，写出句子1)为人诚恳,随和,自信乐观的男孩刘翔,出生在1983年7月13日上海.liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.2)他的偶像是jordon,爱好是听音乐,看打游戏及看书.hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.3)拥有身高1.89米的他擅长110米栏.withtheheightof1.89metres,heisgoodat110metreshurdles.4)在他的教练孙海平的协助下他获得了诸多傲人的成绩.underthetrainingofsunhaiping,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.5)他２００６年７月１２日他在瑞士洛桑以１２秒８８破世界记录．hebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.2.扩句成文，构成篇章①liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.4②hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.③withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdles.④underthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.⑤hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievementsandoneofachievementsisthathebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.3.检查润色3)与否用5个句子1)时态与否对的4)与否遗漏必要信息2)人称与否一致5)与否语句连贯liuxiang,,anhonest,easy-goingconfidentandoptimisticman,wasbornonjuly13th,1983inshanghai.hehasanidolofjordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdlesandunderthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.forexample,hebroketheasianrecordwiththetime13’12in,andtwoyearslater,hewonthechampionshipagainin12’91inathenwhichtiestheworldrecord.mostexcitingly,hebroketherecordby12’88onjuly12th,inlausanne,switzerland.part2:haveatry一翻译下列句子1.姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年41岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。2.黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30数年的英语老师。3.达.芬奇(leonardodavinci)是16世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。4.他是一位天才，把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。5.《蒙娜丽莎》是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。它是达.芬奇的代表作。6.帕瓦罗蒂(pavarotti)被誉为“高音c(thehighc’s)之王”，为古典音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出奉献。7.赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。8.他24岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。9.安南（annan）先生出生于1938年4月8日，加纳（ghana）。他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理学的硕士学位。10.安南（annan）先生为建立一种更有组织、更和平的世界所做出的工作得到大家的承认。5【篇三：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题1：家庭、朋友和周围的人part1:sometips概述：人物简介属于记叙文（narration）的写作范围，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、重要事件(what)等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清晰，并注意构造的完整性。技巧点拨：1.仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1)确定类型：人物简介2)确定体裁:记叙文3)确定主体时态:一般目前时4)确定主体人称:第三人称2．合理安排短文的构造层次，组织好所提醒内容体现的先后次序。3．句子时态要在上下文中有有关性、持续性，要与体现内容一致。4．审题后要先列出简要扼要的提纲，另一方面写出草稿，通过修改之后，再正式成文。一、人物简介的写作环节：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace2.familybackground3.educationbackground4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5.evaluation二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace1）age:theymighthaveneedsandproblemsoftheirown.2）birthdayandbirthplace:…was/werebornin…on…eg.shewasborninpolandonnov.7,1867.bornin1985,heisnowan24-year-oldstudent.3）sexmarriage1eg.heisamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.heis35,maleandunmarried.4）appearanceeg:sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongblackhair.heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.5）height:eg.heis1.76meterstall.heis176centimeterstall.heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.6）health:eg.welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.heisnotsostrong,but(he’s)ingoodhealth.2.familybackground…was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.abrahamlincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninkentuckyonfebruary12,1809.bornintoapoorclerk’sfamily,charlesdickenshadlittleschooling.3.educationbackgroundbeadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudieseg.hestartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.hewenttostudyinbeijinguniversityin1984and4yearslaterhegraduated(fromthatuniversity).welearnedmanycourses,suchasenglish,mathsandsoon.hegothisbachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinapril1998...4.bigeventsinone’slifebeinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance2bestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/winthenobelprizefor…begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…study/trainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etceg.hisfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.inhissparetime,helikesreadingandenjoyingtraveling.he’sgoodatspokenenglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.5.evaluationoneofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofchina.hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecitymakegreatcontributionsto…consistency/perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…championshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedleifenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader6.描写人物外貌和性格特性good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedblue-eyedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortbeautifulprettylovelynaughtysmartwisecleverbrightdiligentintelligenthardworkinglazyhealthy3humorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidentindependentpatientbeinconditionbeoutofconditionfinewell三、语法、句法高分tips1.a.概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语构造，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一b.外貌,性格：巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发c.教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼1）forfurtherstudies.2）degree.d.生平:尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）2）e．评估：注意运用某些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）2）四、样本写作姓名：刘翔出生年月：1983年7月13日性别；男出生地：上海身高：1.89米教练：孙海平偶像：jordon专题：110栏成就：7月12日在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信瑞士洛桑:lausanne,switzerland写作指导：1.组织材料，写出句子1)为人诚恳,随和,自信乐观的男孩刘翔,出生在1983年7月13日上海.liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonjuly