22.英语-做法建议类书面表达

做法建议类书面表达（高频）写作思路：①首先阅读所给材料，或是汉语说明，或者是英文材料，找出问题所在——需要建议的方面。②然后根据分析给出合理化建议。③这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。范文背诵：（一）DearAllison,

I'mgladtoknowthatyouplantopayavisittoChinanextmonth.Inmyopinion,payingavisittoBeijingisyourbestchoice.Ontheonehand,BeijingisthecapitalcityofChina.Ontheotherhand,Beijingisaplacewherehasmanyfamoussites.

Firstly,IsuggestthatyoushouldvisittheGreatWallandtheTempleofHeavenforthefirst3days.Secondly,youcanvisittheSummerPlaceifyouareenergeticenough.Itisunnecessaryforyoutobringanythingexceptyourcamera.Inaddition,IsuggestthatyoushouldtasteChinesefoodiftimepermits.IamsureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.

SincerelyYours,

HuaYu点评增分点1：范文开门见山，用“inmyopinion”提出观点，直入主题。增分点2：给出建议,用“firstly”，“secondly”，“inaddition”作为连接词，使文章井然有序。增分点3：使用了if引导的条件性状语从句、

where引导的定语从句等复合句及“payavisitto”，“asfor”等高级短语，彰显作者扎实的语言功底。增分点4：“ononehand”，“ontheotherhand”使文章层层递进，浑然成篇。（二）HowtokeephealthyTherearemanywaystobehealthy.First,todosportsisnecessaryforus.Wecanexercisemoreandtakepartinoutdooractivitiesinfreetime.Exercisewillkeepusactiveandstrong.Second,weshouldeatmealsontime.Andweshouldeatmorehealthyfood,suchasfruitandvegetables.It'sbettertoeatlessjunkfood.Besides,keepingahappymoodisimportant.Wealsoneedenoughsleepandrest.What'smore,wemustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke.Theyarebadforourhealth.Ithinkhealthisthemostimportantthingtous.

Ihopethiswillbehelpfultoallofyou.

点评增分点1：开篇点题，说明保持健康有很多种方法。增分点2：“first”,“second”,“and”,“besides”,“also”，“what'smor