读后续写-学会独立生活的男孩讲义 高考英语作文复习专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thoughhisfather,grandmothers,uncles,auntsandcousinswereallgoingtobethere,itwouldbethefirsttimeforHasan,athoroughlypampered(娇生惯养的)child,tobewithouttheconstantmotheringofhishelicoptermother.AtfirstHasantriedtoemotionallyblackmail(要挟)hismotherintonotgoing,butaftershepromisedtobringbackhisfavoritetoysandcandies,heunwillinglylethergo.Whenhewenttodropoffhismotherattheairport,hehadtearyeyesashewonderedhowhewasgoingtosurvivewithoutherforthenexttwoweeks.Althoughhefeltlikecryinglikeababy,hewastooembarrassedtocryoutloud.Butwhenhisfatherhuggedhim,Hasancouldn'tstopcryinginhisarms.Whentheyreturnedhome.Hasan,whohadalwaysbeentoldbyhismotherwhattodo,nowhadnoonetotellhimtowashhishandsorfinishhisdinner.Thoughhewasveryupsetabouthismother'sleaving.suddenlyhealsorealizedthepotentialforpartyingawayfromhismother'sdiscipline(管教).Therewouldbenochecksorbalances.Hecouldstayuplate,eatjunkfoodandusetheInternettohisheart'scontent.Backfromschool,hewouldthink,“Homework?I'llmakethemostofmyfreedomandhavesomefuninstead!Hasanstartedtostayuptillhecouldnolongerstayawakeandthenwokeupwithalotofdifficultyatseveninthemorning,barelymakingittoschoolontime.Butafterafewdays,hispartyingstartedcatchingupwithhim.Inschool,hewasbarelymanagingtostayawake.Thingsstartedgettingoutofcontrol.Hishomeworkremainedundone.Hefailedhistests.Hefeltweakfromeatingonlyjunkfood.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.Theteacher'wordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.MainideaHanson,

athoroughly

pamperedchild

experiencedforthefirsttimetobewithout

hismotherattendingtohiminallaspects.

Though

abitsadand

upset,he

foundsomething

"nice",forexample,

hecouldstayuplate,eatjunkfood,usetheInternet,belateforschoolandleavehishomeworkundone.

Asaresult,hefailedthetestand

feltweak.Paragraph1:Hansonexlainedtotheteacherwhy

he

failedthetestandfeltweak.

Theteachertaughthimalesson!Paragraph2:

Whattheteachersaid

workedwonder.Hansoncorrectedhismistakesandtriedtobehavehimself.下水作文：红色为非谓语，斜体为从句，划线部分为高级表达Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

Atfirst,he

droopedhishead,

utteringnoword.Theteachertoldhim

tolookup.He

hadnoalternativebut

totell

thathismother

whoused

toattendanddiscipline

him

hadgoneonbusiness

andthathehadbeenstayinguplate

using

theInternet,

hanging

outwithhisfriends,

eating

snacksand

doing

nohomework（排比）.Theteachertoldhimastoryaboutamotherbearandababybear,

whowaspusheddownthehillwhenhereachedthetopsothathecouldbeindependentand

survivetheharshenvironment.

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（与参考答案相比，造成他考试不及格、身体虚弱的原因描写比较具体；老师的言论不是普通的说教，而是通过讲述故事让Hanson明白独立生活的重要性。）Theteacher’swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

Ontheveryevening,heate

whathisgrandmotherhadpreparedforhim,

afterwhichhewenttohisownroom

anddidallthehomeworkbyhimself.He

resistedhistemptation

tosurftheInternet

andwenttobedatthe

fixed

time.

Tohisrelief,hefoundnodifficulty

gettingup

atseventhenextmorningandhewas

energetic

enoughtofollowtheteachers

attentively.Feeling

significantlyfine,he

madeuphismindtoliveandstudy

onaregularbasis

and

tobe

a

totally

differentboy

whenhismotherreturnedhome.

96W（与参考答案相比，与原文的契合度更高，结尾与原文首尾呼应。）中文：一天，他的老师终于要求知道他发生了什么事。起初，他低着头，一言不发。老师叫他抬头看。他别无选择，只能告诉他，过去经常照顾和管教他的母亲出差了，他一直在熬夜上网、和朋友一起玩、吃零食、不做作业。老师给他讲了一个故事，讲的是一只熊妈妈和一只熊宝宝，当他爬到山顶时，熊宝宝被推下山，这样他就可以独立生活，在恶劣的环境中生存下来。老师的话深深地印在他的脑子里，对他来说很有道理。就在那天晚上，他吃了奶奶为他准备的东西，然后他去自己的房间，独立做了所有的家庭作业。他抵制住了上网的诱惑，在固定的时间上床睡觉。让他感到欣慰的是，他发现第二天早上七点起床没有困难，而且他足够有精力专心地跟着老师。他感觉特好，所以他下定决心有规律地生活和学习，当母亲回家时，他将成为一个完全不同的男孩。参考答案：Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.WhenHasantoldherthingswerenotingoodorderbecausehismotherwasnotintown,hewasexpectingakindsmileandsympatheticwords.However,hegotawake-uptalkfromtheteacher.“Youareoldenoughtotakecareofyourself.It'snotyourmother'sjobtohandleyourschoolwork,Youhavetoberesponsibleforyourownattendance,homework,testpreparationandsoon.”68W一天，他的老师终于要求知道他发生了什么事。当哈桑告诉她，由于母亲不在城里，情况不太好时，他期待着一个善意的微笑和同情的话语。然而，他从老师那里得到了一个警醒。“你已经长大了，可以照顾自己了。处理你的功课不是你母亲的工作。你必须负责自己的出勤、家庭作业、备考等等。”Theteacher'wordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.AfterHasanwenthome，heateaproperhomemadedinner.Then,forthefirsttime,hedidhishomeworkwithoutanyoneremindinghimofit.Hefeltasenseofaccomplishment.Hewenttobedearlythateveningandreachedhisschoolontimethenextmorning.wheretheteachergavehimabigsmileandathumbs-up.Hasandecidedhewasgoingtosurprisehisteacher,h