读后续写练习写作讲义 高三英语一轮复习

读后续写试题原题第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。ThoughIeatanapplealmosteveryday,onemonthagomydoctorcametomyhousestandinginfrontofme,notbeingkeptaway,duetomysuddenillness.“WellJian,IthinkI

needtohaveastrongtalkwithyou.Youareoverweight.HaveyoueverheardaboutBodyMassIndex(指数),BMI?Well,I’veweighedyouandmeasuredyourheightandyouhaveaBMIof28.

Thatisobese(肥胖的),”saidthedoctor.IknewIwasalittlebitoverweightbutIdidn’tthinkitwasthatbad.HeaddedthatmynamemeanshealthyinChineseandhethoughtitistimethatI

shouldbecomehealthy.Thereisadirectlinkbetweenmyhealthandsport.Soheaskedme,“Howmuchsportdoyoudoeveryweek?”ItoldhimthatIgoforawalkeveryweekend.Thenhereplied,“Hmm,that’snotalot.Sportandhealthgotogether.Theyaffectyourmental,physicalandemotionalhealth.Forexample,sportcanimproveyourmentalhealth,allowingyourbraintothinkbetterandfocus.Itwillhelpyoutolearnmoreeasily.Isthatclear,Jian?”“Ithinkso.Iknowitwouldbegoodtobeabletoconcentratebetteratschool.”Isaid.Thedoctorexplainedtomethatfromaphysicalpointofview,sportmakesustiredsohelpsustosleepbetter.Atthesametime,sportburnsoffthecalories

thatwehaveconsumed.Itbuildsmuscleandimprovesourcirculation

(血液循环).Sporthelpstocontrolourcholesterolcount(胆固醇指标)andthisisimportanttostopushavingaheartattack.Additionally,italsokeepsourbloodpressurenormalandstrengthensourbones.注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.

“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.

​​​试题分析1.主要人物☞

I：overweight☞

thedoctor：givesgoodadviceinjoininginsports2.前文情节虽然平时都注意健康饮食，但一个月前因为突然生病，医生来到我跟前说我超重要减肥了，然后跟我说了好多体育运动的好处。于是，我......3.续写安排第一段：Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.①（与前一句衔接）我是怎么想的②我接下去有什么行动③（与下文开头句衔接）锻炼很枯燥，打算放弃。于是，问医生找对策第二段：“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.①（与前一句衔接）于是，听从医生建议去参加团队性运动②效果不错③（主题升华）反思锻炼之路下水作文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.Indeed,lackofexerciseiswhatIfeltashamedof.Sometimes,seeingothersdoingexercisehappily,Ihadsomethoughtsofdoingthesameasthem.ButtheresultwasthatIalwayshadtheexcusesofputtingofftheso-calledplanofexercise.Nowthedoctor’swordsdraggedmeintothedecisionthatIhadtoshowmygreatconcernformyhealth.Ipickedupjoggingastheeasiestwaytokeepmyselffit.However,aweeklater,Ihadtoturntomydoctor,fornofunofexercisingwasfound.(94words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Asanintrovert,Ishowednointerestinjoiningothersfortheworkout.Butwiththedoctor’sencouragement,Ifinallydecidedtohaveatryforthesakeofmyhealth.Contactingwithalocalrunningclub,Iwasshockedbytheirenthusiasm,acceptingmewithoutanythoughts.Peopleintheclubweresoeasy-goingthatIhadnodifficultyinsteppingoutofmycomfortzone.Everydaywegatheredandranalongthebeautifullake,enjoyingandsharingthemarveloustime.Thankstomydoctor,notonlydidIimprovemyhealthbutIharvestedpreciousfriendship.(99words)参考范文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.IrealizedthatIneededtotakemyhealthmoreseriouslyandmakesomechangestomylifestyle.IstartedtolookintodifferentsportsandexercisesthatIcoulddotoimprovemyhealth.Ialsobegantopaymoreattentiontomydiet,cuttingoutunhealthyfoodsandreplacingthemwithhealthieralternatives.Iknewthatitwouldn’tbeeasy,butIwasdeterminedtomakeachange.(70words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Ithoughtaboutitforamomentandrealizedthathewasright.Ihadalwaysbeenhesitanttojoinasportsteam,butIdecidedtogiveitatry.IjoinedalocalsoccerteamandwassurprisedathowmuchIenjoyedit.NotonlywasIgettingtheexercisethatIneeded,butIwasalsomakingnewfriendsandhavingfunintheprocess.Istartedtolookforwardtoourweeklypracticesandgames,andIcouldfeelmyselfgettingstrongerandhealthierwitheachpassingweek.Thankstomydoctor'sadvice,Ihadfoundanewwaytoimprovemyhealthandmylife.(111words)试题原题第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。thought.Onthewaybacktoschool,herememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,theylefttheirschoolbagsoutsidetoreducetheburden.Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfellandblockedtheentrance.“Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.Victorhappenedtopassbytheentrancetothecave,andfiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who’sinthere?”Victorshouted.“I’mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!”Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan’tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I’llhelpyougetout!”Paragraph1:Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Paragraph2:Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.参考范文

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,Williamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmand