基础写作常用10种表达手段

Dearfriends，Asweallknow,wearewhatweeat.Therefore,it’simportantforustodevelophealthyeatinghabits.However,somestudentshaveformedvariousbadhabits,suchasbeingparticularaboutfood,eatinganddrinkingtoomuchandsoon,whichwillsurelydoharmtous.

Tokeepfit,weshouldkeephealthyeatinghabits

.

Notonlyshouldwehavevarioushealthydiets,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitsandrice,noodles,butalsoweshouldeatregularlyandproperly.Personally,Ithinkitsignificanttokeephealthyeatinghabits

,whichbuildsupastrongbody.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.Dearfriends，Asweallknow,wearewhatweeat.

Therefore,it’simportantforustodevelophealthyeatinghabits

However,somestudentshaveformedvariousbadhabits,suchas

beingparticularaboutfood,eatinganddrinkingtoomuchandsoon,

which

willsurelydoharmtous.

Tokeepfit,weshould

keephealthyeatinghabits

.

Notonlyshouldwehavevarioushealthydiets,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitsandrice,noodles,butalsoweshouldeatregularlyandproperly.Personally,Ithinkitsignificantto

keephealthyeatinghabits

,which

buildsupastrongbody.Onlyinthisway

canwe

haveenoughenergytostudybetter.基础写作中常用10种表达手段写作的目的是考查考生整合信息和信息表达,并用适当短语、句型等语言手段产生出连贯语篇的能力。现介绍10种常用的语言表达手段，这些语言手段在近年的广东高考题中和各地模拟写作题中出现的频率非常高,掌握这些语言手段对提高写作能力一定帮助很大。◆一、同位语手段同位语主要用于介绍人物、事物、地点、产品、书名等。[典型例题]信息点：书名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother作者：AmyChua,美籍华人,耶鲁大学教授中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售(2011年广东高考)信息表达：Abook,____________________________,writtenbyAmyChua,__________________,hasbeensoldinChinasincethebeginningof2011.(BattleHymnoftheTigerMother作abook的同位语,anAmerican-Chinese作AmyChua的同位语)BattleHymnoftheTigerMotheranAmerican-Chinese1.用同位语完成句子。(1)去年,我被邀请参加一个为“待援助的孩子”(TuesdayChild)举办的一个狂欢节(carnival),“待援助的孩子”是一个帮助艾滋患儿的组织。Lastyear,IwasinvitedtoparticipateinacarnivalforTuesday’sChild,___________________________________________.[课堂练习]anorganizationthathelpschildrenwithAIDS(2)离2012年还有一个月时间,但《孤星指南》(theLonelyPlanet)等不及宣布来年十大旅游城市排行榜,《孤星指南》是世界最畅销旅游指南杂志之一。Thereisstillmorethanonemonthtogobefore2012.ButtheLonelyPlanet,____________________________________,can’twaittoannounceitstop10citiestotraveltointhecomingyear.oneoftheworld’sbest-sellingtravelguides2.信息点：姓名：SteveJobs别名：苹果教父(godfather)出生地：美国加州三藩市(SanFrancisco)出生日期：1955年2月24日逝世日期：2011年10月5日信息表达：2.SteveJobs,__________________,wasborninSanFrancisco,________,

_______onFebruary24th,1955andpassedawayonOctober5th,2011.thegodfatherofAppleCaliforniatheUSA◆二、观点的呈现手段可用短语如accordingtosb.(根据某人的看法)，inmyopinion/inmyview(在我看来，我认为)，fromone’spointofview(在某人看来)，asfarasI’mconcerned(对我而言),asfor(至于……，就……而言)等,句型有sbbelieves/thinks/claims，sbtoldusthat...，sbpointedoutthat...(某人指出)等。专家解读(王教授)：学生近视(1)发生率：略高于50％(2)人数：世界第一(2009广东)信息表达：___________ProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.[典型例题]信息点：Accordingto1.翻译：我的看法是我们应保护自然资源,减少环境污染。1._______________,weshouldtrytoprotectnaturalresourcesanddecreaseenvironmentpollution.2.翻译：依我看,合作需要有效的交流,没有它人们会盲目地做事情。2._______________________,cooperationcallsforeffectivecommunication,withoutwhichpeoplewilldothingsblindly.

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InmyopinionFrommypointofview3.要点组合：你的观点：微博(microblog)提供大量信息,应根据个人情况谨慎使用信息表达：_______________________,microblogprovidesuswithlargequantitiesofinformation,soweshouldbecautiouswhileusingitaccordingtoourpersonalsituation.AsfarasIamconcerned◆三、比例的表达手段1.百分比的表达。如：(1)70%of...(2)seventypercentof...(3)70percentofthe...(注意：)2.其它一些比例的表达手段。如：(1)一半：halfofthe...=fiftypercentofthe...(2)四分之一(25%)：aquarterof=25percentofthe...考生最易漏用of(3)四分之三(75%)：________________=75percentofthe...3.分数表达法：分子是基数词,分母是序数词。如：1/4：2/3：7/8：五个当中有三个：onefourthtwothirdsseveneighthsthreeoutoffive，threeinfivethreequartersof[典型例题]信息点：相关数据:(1)(目前中国)吸烟人数:约3,5亿(2)分布：男性75％,女性：25％(2010广东)信息表达：CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among________75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom1.Thesurveyshowsthat______________(50%的学生)gainhappinessfromtheloveoftheirparentsorrelativesandfromthewarmthoffamilies.[课堂练习]

50%ofthestudents2.Inthestudy,_________________________(800个……的青少年中,大约有40%)whohavebeenexposedtosecondhandsmokehaddetectablehearingproblems.the800teensaround40%of小学、初中、高中学校每天提供体育锻炼的分布情况：小学：50%初中：30%高中：20%不提供锻炼的学校：十分之一信息表达:_______primaryschools,____juniormiddleschoolsand20%ofseniorhighschoolsprovidephysicaleducationeachschooldaywhile___________schoolsdidnotrequirephysicaleducationatall.one-tenthof50%of30%of3.信息点：◆四、排位的表达手段表“排位”要用到的词语有：rank+(the+)序数词,be+the+序数词,be+inthe+序数词+place或getthe+序数词+place等;也可以用“isthe+形容词最高级+范围”来表达。[典型例题]信息点：基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50％(2)人数：世界第一(2009广东高考)信息表达：AccordingtoProfessorWang，alittlemorethan50%oftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,ranking

thefirstintheworld.[课堂练习]1.翻译：江苏卫视的《非诚勿扰》(YouaretheOne)这个相亲节目的收视率排第一。TheratingsofJiangsuTV’sYouaretheOne______________amongalltheprograms.ranks(the)first2.翻译：东京大学(Todai)在所有的日本大学排行榜中名列第一,因为她的毕业生在大公司担任重要位置的数量很多。Todai______________amongJapaneseuniversitiesforthenumberofgraduateswhoholdimportantpositionsinbigcompanies.ranksthefirst李娜的主要成绩：(1)目前世界排名第四;(2)2011年1月澳大利亚网球公开赛(TheAustralianOpen)亚军;(3)2011年6月法国网球公开赛(TheFrenchOpen)冠军。信息表达：Theyear2011hasseenherachievegreatsuccess:she__________________intheAustralianOpeninJanuaryandwonthechampionshipintheFrenchOpeninJune,and_________________inwomentennisplayersintheworld.3.信息点：isnowrankedNo.4gotthesecondplace◆五、建议的表达手段短语：________________(劝某人做某事)从句：(1)Sbsuggeststhat...(2)Sbgivessba__________that...(3)Itissuggestedthat...(4)givesbsome____________on...advisesbtodo...suggestionadvice[典型例题]信息点：专家解读：建议：(中小学生)不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动(2009广东高考)信息表达：_________________schoolchildrenavoidoveruseoftheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.或______________________________schoolchildrenshouldavoidoverusingtheireyesandtakemoreoutdooractivities.HesuggestedthatHegaveusasuggestionthat或Schoolchildrenareadvisednottooverusetheireyesbuttotakemoreoutdooractivities.[课堂练习]1.翻译：你对班上同学的建议：学习时尤其是听课时要充分利用眼、脑、口、耳、手等器官共同参与,这样学习才更有效。_____________________whenstudying,especiallyinclassstudentsshouldmakefulluseofthebrain,eyes,ears,hands,andotherorgansforjointparticipation,whichwillmaketheirstudymoreefficient.Itismysuggestionthat2.翻译：因此我强烈地建议那些同学不要沉迷于这些网络活动而把更多的时间花到有意义的活动中去,如锻炼身体。Therefore,Istrongly________________________getaddictedtotheseonlineactivitiesandspendmoresparetimeonmeaningfulactivities,suchastakingexercise.advisethoseclassmatesnotto你给Jack的建议：(1)制定学习计划,尽力把心思放到学习上；(2)多和同学交流学习经验,以提高学习成绩。信息表达：Toimproveyourstudy,Ithinkitisveryimportantforyoutomakeagoodplanforyoustudyandputyourheartintostudy.Besides,_____________youcommunicatewithyourclassmatessothatyoucanlearntheirexperienceandimproveyourownstudy.3.信息点：Isuggestthat◆六、提醒的表达手段表示提示或提醒的表达有：___________________________(某人提醒我们……)_________________________________(某人提醒我们做/不要做某事)Sbreminds/warnsusthat...Sbreminds/warnsus(not)todosth[典型例题]信息点：专家解读：(4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关(2009广东高考)信息表达：______________________________howtoholdapenisalsorelatedtoshort-sightedness.Heparticularlyremindedusthat[课堂练习]1.翻译：提醒大家不要轻易在网上透露个人信息和不要随意打开不认识的人发来的文档。_______________tokeepsecretourpersonalinformation,includingourrealname,phonenumber,emailaddressandsoon,andnottoopenanyfilesfromastranger.Youarereminded2.翻译：Alex提醒我们不同国家的各种领域的时事新闻不仅丰富我们的知识,同时帮助我们明智地思考我们的人生。___________________newsandcurrentaffairsonvariousfieldsfromdifferentcountriesnotonlyenrichourknowledgebutalsohelpusthinkwiselyaboutourlife.Alexremindsusthat3.信息点：温馨提醒：有效期：一个半月;过期后果自负。信息表达:________________________thatyouhavetoun