读后续写+社会温情类（extra+photos）讲义 高三英语一轮复习

读后续写社会温情类（ExtraPhotos）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Wakeup,Mom!“Ifeltalittlehandonmyfaceandreluctantlyopenedmyeyes.Therewasmyson,readytostarttheday.Ialsoheardmybabiesawakeinthenextroom.Readyornotthedayhadbegun!Ilovedbeinghomewithmylittleones,butIfelttheweightoftheworldonmyshoulders.MyhusbandandIhadjustboughtahouse,andsomeunexpectedexpensesmadeourbudgettighterthanithadeverbeen.Iwaswearyofspendingmorepennies.Weweren'tfoolishwithourmoney.Weworkedhard.Weweredoingalltherightthings,butwehadhadonefinancialdisappointmentafteranother.Iwasgoingtopickupmykids’photoportraitsfromthestudioatthelocalmall.Despiteoursmallbudget,itwasimportanttometohavepicturesofmychildrenastheyweregrowingup.Thepreviousweek,Ihadfoundacoupon(优惠券)andusedsomechangefromthecartobuya$7.99portraitpackage,andtodaywasthedayIwastopickuptheportraits.Sinceweweregoingtothemall,Idecidedtomakeitanoutingandpackedsomesandwichesforustoeatatthefoodcourt.What'smore,therearemanyride-ontoycarsinthemall’sfoodcourtforfunandforfree.Afterbreakfast,wewentoff.Afterweparked,wewalkedintotheportraitstudioatthemall,andIapproachedthecounter.Theyoungwomansmiled.“MayIhelpyou?”“Yes,I'mheretopickupourphotos.”Thewomanaskedmynameandopenedherdrawer,“Ah,yes,heretheyare.Aren'ttheyjustsoadorable?”Shetookoutthephotos,andthesmilingfacesofmykidswarmedmyheart.“Yes,theyaregreat.Thankyou,“Isaid.Sheputthephotosintoanenvelope.Thenshespreadoutadditionalphotosofmykidsthatlhadn'tordered.Iknewwhatthatmeant.Theupsellpitch(推销)wascoming.“Wouldyouliketopurchasetheseextraportraits?Theyareonlyfifteendollarsapiece!”shesmiledsweetly.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”._______________________Para.2Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand._______________________________一、文本解读：1叙事视角：第一人称2故事梗概：我家刚买了房子，加上还有几个孩子需要抚养，一家人生活比较拮据，但我想给孩子们拍一些照片记录孩子的成长。上周，我带着孩子们去超市的照相馆拍了一组照片。今天是去取照片的日子，我带上三明治，超市那边的食品区有玩具马可可骑，我打算带孩子玩玩，然后在那边就餐。到了店里取照片时，店员建议我买下额外的一些照片。二、续写主题：社会温情类，陌生人的善意三、构建续写情节续写思路：Para1：Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”---拒绝购买多余的照片—带着孩子离开---接着带孩子们在商场的食品区玩耍---午饭时间到了，吃自带的三明治Para2:Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand.---店员给我送了额外的照片，可能还有一些钱---我的反应---简短的交流---我的感悟四官方范文Myheartturnedcold“Idon'thavefifteendollars.“Itookthephotoenvelopeand

walkedaway,withmycheeksredaftermyreply.Next,westoppedattheride-ontoy

carsinthemall'sfoodcourt.Thereweren'tanyotherkidsthere.Mykidsclimbedon

themenjoyingthemselvesverymuch.Afterawhile,weweretired,soweunwrapped

ourlunchesthatIhadbroughtfromhome.Althoughthemall'sfoodcourtwasnear,I

didn'thaveextramoney.Itwasearlyforlunch,butwewerehungry.Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomething

ontomyhand.Shesaid,"Here.Takeyourfamilyoutforicecreamafterlunch.Iwas

surprised.Imanagedtosay"thankyou“assheturnedandwalkedaway.ThenIlooked

downatwhatshehadgivenme.Itwastheadditionalphotosandfifteendollars.Tearsrolleddownmy

cheeksasIquietlyfinishedmysandwich.Thedoubtsinmyheartmeltedawayandmy

faithwasrenewedKindnesscanchangesomeone'sdarkmomentintoabrightone五、下水作文：Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”.Upsetandembarrassed,IcouldfeelmyfaceburningwithheatwhenIblurtedoutthatdisappointingrejection.“Itrulyappreciateyourkindnesstoprintthemoutformeastheyaresoimportanttome.However,Ireallydidn’thaveanyextramoneyforthembecauseofmycurrentlyextremetightbudget.”Theyoungwoman’sexcitementplunged（突降）asshegraspedthatImeantit.Apparently,bothofourheartsanktothebottom.Shetimidly（羞涩地）replied“Sorry”,asweheadedtothedoorforourlunch.Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand.Withconfusion,Ilookedintomypalmandfoundmykids’extraportraits.Withatoothysmile,shetoldmeitwasnousekeepingtheseadorablepictureswhileknowingIwouldtreasurethemthemost.Atthesightofthephotos,Icouldn’thelpsheddinggratefultears.Itdawnedonmethatweoftenstruggledwithdifficultiesinlifeandfeltdisappointedwithourlifebutwecouldstillreceivekindnessfromstrangersthatcouldbrightenupoursaddays.六、素材积累（有关善意的主题升华）1.Lifewillhitusunexpectedly,butthereisalwayssomeonetohelpusoutandthereisalwayshopewaitingforus.2.Iheldthephotostightly,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Itwaslovethatmadetheworldgoaround,whichIfeltdeepinmyheart.3Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifferencetoothers’l