高三英语2022届山东卷应用文报道省赛一等奖

第三部分写作第一节满分15分假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1参加人员:2跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3活动反响。注意:1写作词数应为80左右:2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace新闻报道的写作结构：标题：导语主题结语或补充浓缩概括简洁明了新闻报道的写作结构：标题：导语：主题：结语或补充：报道的核心内容5W1HTheancientcityofi'an,caingNationalDayholidaywhichfallsonOct1-8Thisyear'sNationalDayonOct1coincideswiththeMid-AutumnFestivalwhichfallsonthe15thdayoftheChineselunarcalendar'seighthmonthThisoustouristattractionini'anFrenchauthoritieshaveaimumvirusalert,banningfestivegatheringsandrequiringallbarstoclosebutallowingrestaurantstoremainoberofinfectionsincreasesrapidly新闻报道的写作结构：标题：导语：主题：结语或补充：详实，具体一句话总结；一段话概括；预测趋势，发人深思，背景补充第一步：审题假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1参加人员:2跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3活动反响。一般过去时六要素：What:across-contryrunningraceWhen:lastSundayWhere：跑步线路（fromtheschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthHill）Who：活动举办方ourschool,活动参与人员Students（&teachers）Why：强身健体；增强凝聚力How：具体表现：活动反响，特写，细节第二步：搭建结构——三段式Para1：（导语）Para2：（正文）Para3：（评价及升华）Why、What、When、Where、WhoHowInfluence、Feeling第三步：分类寻词why:inorderto;inabidto;aimedat/todosthwhat:include;hold;organiewho:taeaeeveryefforttodosthenjoyoneselffeeling/influence:benefit;beneficial;im;notonlybutalso;thinhighlyof;turnouttobe;enrichourschoollife;learnfrom;bringjoy;strengthenourteamsotethefriendship第四步：文章初形成Cross-CountryRunningRace导语:_________________为了builduetreracelastSundayfromtheschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthhill正文:Itwasa________day介绍天气200ostofthemwerestudentsandteachersAllofthem___________________尽全力finishtherunningraceand_______________________玩的开心评价:Allofus____________________高度评价therunningraceNotonlydidit___________________________________丰富了我们的学校生活，italso________________________带来快乐Inordertoheldfineparticipateintriedtheirbesttoenjoyedthemselvesthoughthighlyofenrichourschoollifebroughtjoytousall第五步：美化文章成1主被动句式转换InordertobuilduetreracelastSundayfromtheschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthHill。变为被动句,a5000-metreracewasheldbytheschoolstudents'unionlastSundayfromtheschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthHill2非限制性定语从句200ostofthemwerestudentsandteachers用非限制性定语从句=200ostofwhomwerestudentsandteachers3非谓语动词AlloftheparticipantsthoughthighlyoftherunningraceTheysaidthatnotonlydiditenrichourschoollife,italsobroughtjoytousall用非谓语动词Alloftheparticipantsthoughthighlyoftherunningrace,addingthatnotonlydiditenrichourschoollife,italsobroughtjoytousallACross-CountryRunningraceInordertobuilduetreracewasheldbytheschoolstudents'unionlastSundayfromtheschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthHillItwasasunnyday200ostofwhomwerestudentsandteachersAllofthemtriedtheirbesttofinishtherunningraceThoughehaustedwithsweat,allcheeredwithgreatjoyAlloftheparticipantsthoughthighlyoftherunningrace,addingthatnotonlydiditenrichourschoollife,italsobroughtjoytousall【实践提高】7月20日，我校隆重举行了高三年级的毕业典礼。作为学校英语学习微信公众号的学生通讯员，请你写份通讯稿，报道此次盛大活动。要点如下:1时间和地点：上午9点开始，校体育馆内，院士广场上2主要活动：毕业典礼校长致辞，学生代表发言，举行成人礼，拍合照，给未来的