中考英语写作初级课件2

学习目标通过本节课的学习，学生能够在写作中拓宽思维，运用同义词、近义词、反义词和释义来使文章的表达更丰富；辨识重复，学会单词增删、主语替换等技能来精炼句子；认识到词句积累的重要性，在平时养成词句积累的习惯。知识清单无词怎么办？同义之近义之反义之释义之重复怎么办？舍弃之Warmup.Didyouhaveagreattimeonyourlastholiday?Whatdidyoudo?Wheredidyougo?Expressions.visitthemuseumclimbthemountainsplaygamesExpressions.haveapicnicreadingbooksvisitthezooLeadin:

ReginawenttoGuangzhouwithherfriend.Iwanttowriteatravelblog.Butitdoesn’tlookvivid.I’mMagicPencil.Letmehelpyou.Howcanwemakeitvivid?Howcanwemakeitvivid?Let’sobservethetravelblogfirst.Ireallydon’tknowtherearesomanyrepetitionsinmyarticle.So,let’sreplacethemfirst.Areyoustudyinghardorareyouhavingfun?I’mhavinggreattimeinEurope.(7BUnit7)Thestartoftheyearisalsoatimeformakingresolutions.Whenwemakeresolutionsatthebeginningoftheyear,wehopethatwearegoingtoimproveourlives.(8AUnit6)Readandthink.Readandthink.LindaMiller,amotherofthree,knowsallaboutsuchstress.Doctorssaytoomuchpressureisnotgoodforachild’sdevelopment.(8BUnit4)Whydon’tyoutalkaboutthesefeelingswithyourfamily?Maybeyoucoulddomorejobsaroundthehousesothattheyhavemoretimeforpropercommunication.Whydon’tyousitdownandcommunicatewithyourbrother?(8BUnit4)Isee.Wecanusesynonyms(同义词).Let’shaveatry.Replacethewords.(Ifnecessary,youcanchangethesentences)OnthemorningofSaturday,wewenttoGuangzhoumuseum.Itwasreallyinteresting.IlikethisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethinginteresting.OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoGuangzhoumuseum.Itwasanamazingplace.Ilearnedalotofusefulthingsthere,soI’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.Replacethewords.(Ifnecessary,youcanchangethesentences)Howinterestingthetripwas!Howwonderfulthetripwas!Howfantasticthetripwas!Readandthink.Westartedat9:30am,andsawlotsofspecialMalaysianflowersalongtheway.(8AUnit1)Iwasquitetired,butthecitylookedwonderfulfromthetopofthehill.(8AUnit1)However,noteverybodyenjoyswatchingtheseshows.(8AUnit4)Theyhavesimilarmeanings,buttheyareusedindifferentplaces.Therearemanysynonyms(近义词)inEnglish.Andwecanusethemtoexpressaccurate(准确的)meanings.Emotionalrollercoaster,actoutallthe“smiles”screamwithlaughter笑得前仰后合burstintolaughter突然大笑snort（讽刺、轻蔑地）高声大笑chuckle轻声笑；咯咯笑laughat嘲笑snicker

窃笑smirk傻笑；假笑smilebitterly苦笑giggle咯咯地笑grin咧嘴而笑Readandthink.Formanystudentsitiseasytogettoschool,butforthestudentsinonesmallvillageinChinaitisdifficult.(7BUnit3)It‘snotnecessarytobethesame.MybestfriendLarryisquitedifferentfromme.(8AUnit3)Theyusedantonyms(反义词).Whenyoudon’tknowhowtoexpressyoursentence,Youmightaswellputitinanotherway.正话反说TomisthinnerthanMike.TomisnotsoheavyasMike.MikeisheavierthanTom.正话反说Mybrotheristooyoungtodresshimself.Mybrotherisnotoldenoughtodresshimself.正话反说Butbecauseofthehotweather,wedidn’tgottothetop.Butbecauseofthehotweather,wecamebackhalfway.IwenttoGuangzhouwithmyfriendLiHualastweekends.OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoGuangzhoumuseum.Itwasanamazingplace.Ilearnedalotofusefulthingsthere,soI’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.Intheafternoon,weclimbedtheBaiYunmountain.Itwastiringbutreallygreatfun!Butbecauseofthehotweather,wedidn’tgettothetop.Intheevening,wevisitedthenightsafari.Isawalotofanimalsinit.Theywerequitecute!Ilikedthem.SoItookmanyphotosofthem.Thenextday,wewenttoabookshoptobuybooks.Ienjoyedreadingbooks.Wespentalldaythere.Wealsoboughtsomebooks.Ithinkitwassointeresting.Howwonderfulthetripwas!Wehadagoodtime.Um…Let’smakeitmorevividandspecific.IsthatOK?Readandthink.Weallknowandlovetheblackmousewithtwolargeroundears—MickeyMouse.(8AUnit5)Doyouknowwhataresolutionis?It’sthekindofpromise.(8AUnit6)Singaporeisalsoanexcellentplacetotrynewfood.WhetheryoulikeIndianfood,Westernfood,orJapanesefood,you’llfinditallinSingapore.(8BUnit9)WhichwordcanIexplainmore?Explainingaparticularwordcanmakethesentencemorevividandconcrete.Soyoucanchoosetogowheneveryoulike—___________________________.（8BUnit9）However,you’llfindalotoffoodfromChina.Youwon’thaveanyproblemeating_________________________.（8BUnit9）Fillintheblanks.spring,summer,autumnorwinterrice,noodlesordumplings12Fillintheblanks.Itremindsusthatthebestthingsinlifearefree—______________________________________________________________.（8BUnit8）laughter,friends,family,andthebeautyofthenatureandthecountryside3Expandthesentences.Iboughtsomevegetables.Iboughtsomecarrots,cucumbers,tomatoesandsoon.1Expandthesentences.Acarspedpastme.Afancyredsportscarspedpastme.2Expandthesentences.Isawalotofanimalsinit.Isawalotofanimalsthere—tigers,elephants,giraffesandsoon.3Expandthesentences.Weboughtsomebooks.LiHuaboughtacomicbookandIgotsomebooksabouthistory.4当词汇贫乏，用词单调时，我们可以：调动接触过的更生动，更丰富的词汇；文中如需要多次表达同一词义时，以同义词，近义词，反义词等避免重复使用同一词；用具体，生动，有针对性的词语对前词进行必要的释义；最重要的是平时注意积累哦！Thenewblogismuchbetterthanbefore.Thistimewearegoingtodeleteunnecessarycontentinthearticle.Findtherepeatedcontentandgivethereason.主语重复主语+动词重复意义重复Thelittlegirlwasscared.Thelittlegirlcouldnotfindhermother.Aftertheaccident,wedialed911.Wedialedquickly.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourideaiscreative.Changethesentences.Thelittlegirlwasscared.Thelittlegirlcouldnotfindhermother.Thescaredlittlegirlcouldnotfindhermother.Thelittlegirlwasscared,for

shecouldnotfindhermother.1Changethesentences.Aftertheaccident,wedialed911.Wedialedquickly.Aftertheaccident,wedialed911quickly.2Changethesentences.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourideaiscreative.Inmyopinion,yourideaiscreative.Ithinkyourideaiscreative.3划出重复内容，说出属于哪类重复类型；然后改写句子，使其简洁明了，保持句意不变。Thecauseofthefloodwasduetotheheavyrain.1意义重复Thecauseofthefloodwastheheavyrain.Thefloodwasduetotheheavyrain.划出重复内容，说出属于哪类重复类型；然后改写句子，使其简洁明了，保持句意不变。Thefootballfanreceivedthelastticket.Thefootballfanwassmiling.2主语重复Thefootballfanwhoreceivedthelastticketwassmiling.划出重复内容，说出属于哪类重复类型；然后改写句子，使其简洁明了，保持句意不变。Andylovessportsandplaysbasketball.Heplaysvolleyball.3动词重复Andylovessportsandplaysbasketballandvolleyball.划出重复内容，说出属于哪类重复类型；然后改写句子，使其简洁明了，保持句意不变。ThereasonwhyIwassoupsetwasbecausemymumseemedsoangrywithme.4意义重复ThereasonwhyIwassoupsetwasthatmymumseemedsoangrywithme.Iwassoupsetbecausemymumseemedsoangrywithme.InEnglish,wedonotputthereasonwhyorbecausetogether.划出重复内容，说出属于哪类重复类型；然后改写句子，使其简洁明了，保持句意不变。Thenextday,wewenttoabookshop.Ireallyenjoyedreadingbooks.Wespentalldaythereandboughtsomebooks.LiHuaboughtacomicbookandIgotsomebooksabouthistory.IwasreallyinterestedinthehistoryofGuangzhou.5Thenextday,wewenttoabookshoptobuybooks.Ienjoyedreadingbooks.Wespentalldaythere.Wealsoboughtsomebooks.LiHuaboughtacomicbookandIgotsomebooksabouthistory.IwasreallyinterestedinthehistoryofGuangzhou.重复主要包括：主语重复、动词重复和意义重复。我们可以：删减单词；替换主语；移位形容词，来精炼句子，使句子简洁明了。Let’srevise.ItwassuchanamazingplacethatIlearnedalotaboutthehistoryofthecity.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.Let’srevise.Afterlunch,weclimbedtheBaiYunmountain.Let’srevise.Itwastiringbutreallygreatfun!Butbecauseofthehotweather,wedidn’tgettothetop.Let’srevise.Intheevening,wevisitedthenightsafari.Ihavenevervisitedazooatnight.Let’srevise.Isawalotofanimalsthatareactiveatnight——lions,tigers，wolvesandsoon.OfcourseItookmanyphotosofthem.Therevisedversion.OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoGuangzhoumuseum.ItwassuchanamazingplacethatIlearnedalotaboutthehistoryofthecity.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.Afterlunch,weclimbedtheBaiYunmountain.Itwastiringbutreallygreatfun!Butbecauseofthehotweather,wedidn’tgottothetop.Intheevening,wevisitedthenightsafari.Ihavenevervisitedazooatnight.Isawalotofanimalsthatareactiveatnight——lions,tigers,wolvesandsoon.OfcourseItookmanyphotosofthem.Let’srevise.Thenextday,wewenttoabookshop.Let’srevise.Wespentalldaythereandboughtsomebooks.LiHuaboughtacomicbookandIgotsomebooksabouthistory.IwasreallyinterestedinthehistoryofGuangzhou.Let’srevise.Howwonderfulthetripwas!Wehadagoodtime.Therevisedversion.IwenttoGuangzhouwithmyfriendLiHualastweekends.OnSaturdaymorning,wewenttoGuangzhoumuseum.ItwassuchanamazingplacethatIlearnedalotaboutthehistoryofthecity.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.Afterlunch,weclimbedtheBaiYunmountain.Itwastiringbutreallygreatfun!Butbecauseofthehotweather,wedidn’tgottothetop.Intheevening,wevisitedthenightsafari.Ihavenevervisitedazooatnight.Isawalotofanimalsthatareactiveatnight——lions,tigers,wolvesandsoon.Ofcourse,Itookmanyphotosofthem.Thenextday,wewenttoabookshop.Ireallyenjoyedreadingbooks.Wespentalldaythereandboughtsomebooks.LiHuaboughtacomicbookandIgotsomebooksabouthistory.IwasreallyinterestedinthehistoryofGuangzhou.Howwonderfulthetripwas!Wehadagoodtime.Wow,it’squitedifferentnow.同义词(组)转换Thatdaywecouldseeflowershereandthere.Thatdaywecouldseeflowers____________.Theteacheralwaystakesgoodcareofthechildrenintheschool.Theteacheralways____________thechildrenwellintheschool.12everywherelooksafter反义词(组)的否定式转换It’sclearthatthisvisitisdifferentfromlasttime.It’sclearthatthisvisitisnotthe____________lasttime.Ithinkwealthislessimportantthanhealth.I______thinkwealthis______importantthanhealth.Helentsomemoneytohisfriend.Hisfriend_________somemoney______him.12sameas3don’tmoreborrowedfrom辨析填空wear,puton,dress,(be)inYou’relate!Quickly_______yourclothesandsetoff!I’dlikeyouto_______upformybirthdaypartytonight.He______whitetoday.Itmadehimlookmorecharming.Wealwayshaveto______theschooluniform.putondresswasinwear辨析填空voice,sound,noiseAsingerisalwaysverycarefultokeephisorher________ingoodcondition.Ifyoulistencarefully,allthe_________intheforestislikeabeautifulsong.Ifyourhouseisneartherailwaystation,youwillhavetolivewiththe_________.voicesoundnoiseSuperSentenceOrganizer.Make

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vivid.2Aboyplayedhappily.Theexcitedchildjumpedupanddown.UsewhatwelearnedtodaytohelpDickimproveherwriting.IwenttoQingdaowithmyfamily.Inthemorning,mysisterandIswaminthesea.Weplayedvolleyballonthebeach.Wetriedparagliding,too.IfeltlikeIcanfly.Itwassoexciting.Iwasveryhappy.Forlunch.Wehadsomelocalspecialties.Theyweredelicious.Intheafternoon,wewenttoMountLao.Itwasveryhigh,sowedecidedtotakethecablecar.Wesawsomethingspeci