老高考适用2023版高考英语二轮总复习第3部分写作技能升华篇专题1短文改错第1讲词法类错误

第三部分专题一第1讲词法类错误A(2022·山西省晋城市高三第二次模拟)MygrandmotherwerebornonafarminNewYork.At20,shelefthomeandworkedasahousekeeperinapainterʼshouseuntilshemarriedwithmygrandfatherat27.Acouplefarmedformostoftheirlives,firstinVirginiaandtheninNewYork.Inmygrandmotherʼslateseventy,shemadeadecisionlearntopaint.Shesaidshejustwantedtokeepbusily,thoughshehadhadthatdreamsinceshefirstsawhisformeremployerpaint.Afewyearslate,herhardworkfinallypaidoff.Herpictureswerefirstsellingatalocalmarketandweresoonnoticedbyabusinessman,whichboughteverythingshepainted.【答案】Mygrandmothereq\o(were,\s\do10(was))bornonafarminNewYork.At20,shelefthomeandworkedasahousekeeperinapainterʼshouseuntilshemarriedwithmygrandfatherat27.eq\o(A,\s\do10(The))couplefarmedformostoftheirlives,firstinVirginiaandtheninNewYork.Inmygrandmotherʼslateeq\o(seventy,\s\do10(seventies))，shemadeadecisioneq\o(∧,\s\do10(to))learntopaint.Shesaidshejustwantedtokeepeq\o(busily,\s\do10(busy))，thoughshehadhadthatdreamsinceshefirstsaweq\o(his,\s\do10(her))formeremployerpaint.Afewyearseq\o(late,\s\do10(later))，herhardworkfinallypaidoff.Herpictureswerefirsteq\o(selling,\s\do10(sold))atalocalmarketandweresoonnoticedbyabusinessman,eq\o(which,\s\do10(who))boughteverythingshepainted.【解析】这是一篇记叙文，文章讲述了作者祖母的生平，她在晚年时开始学画画，后来实现了当画家的梦想。1．考查主谓一致。句意：我的祖母出生在纽约的一个农场。主语Mygrandmother表示单数意义，be动词应用was。故将were改为was。2．考查动词用法。句意：20岁时，她离开了家，在一个油漆工家里做管家，直到27岁嫁给了我的祖父。marry是及物动词，marrysb.意为“和某人结婚”，with多余。故删除with。3．考查冠词。句意：这对夫妇一生中大部分时间都在务农，先是在弗吉尼亚州，然后是在纽约。此处是特指“祖父和祖母”这对夫妇，应用定冠词the。故将A改为The。4．考查数词。句意：在我祖母70多岁的时候，她决定学习绘画。“inoneʼs＋整十数的复数”表示“在某人几十多岁时”，应用seventies。故将seventy改为seventies。5．考查非谓语动词。句意同上题。此处应用动词不定式作后置定语，修饰名词decision，adecisiontodosth.表示“做某事的决定”。故在learn前加to。6．考查形容词。句意：她说她只是想让自己忙起来，尽管从她第一次看到她的前雇主画画起，她就一直有这样的梦想。keep在句中用作连系动词，后接形容词作表语。故将busily改为busy。7．考查代词。句意同上题。结合句意可知，此处是祖母说她第一次看到她的前雇主画画起，应用her。故将his改为her。8．考查副词。句意：几年后，她的努力最终有了回报。late可作形容词和副词，意为“迟，晚”，later作副词时意为“以后，其后”，“几年以后”应用“afewyearslater”。故将late改为later。9．考查非谓语动词。句意：她的画最初是在当地的一个市场上出售的，很快就被一个商人注意到，他买走了她画的所有东西。分析句子结构可知，此处是一般过去时的被动语态，应用过去分词形式。故将selling改为sold。10．考查定语从句。句意同上题。分析句子结构可知，此处引导一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是businessman，指人，关系词在从句中作主语，应用who引导。故将which改为who。B(2022·江西省赣州市高三下学期一模)Afewweeksago,Ireceivedapackagewhichcontainedsomeseedsasgiftfrommyfriend.Isowedtheseedsinthesoilofabeautifulflowerpotbutduringthefirstfewdays,somethinghappened.Ibegantofeeldisappointingandabitdown.Iwatertheseedsindryperiodsandmadesurenottoover-waterthem.Also,Iplacedtheflowerpotinthesunlights.Moredayspassed.Undermycare,theflowerpotsoonbecamecrowdedofgreenplants.Thankstomyfriendandmypatient,theseplantshaveplayedanimportantpartinbrightenmyeverydaylife.Letusalltoslowourpacedownbutbepatienttoobservetheworldarounduscarefully.【答案】Afewweeksago,Ireceivedapackagewhichcontainedsomeseedsaseq\o(∧,\s\do10(a))giftfrommyfriend.Isowedtheseedsinthesoilofabeautifulflowerpotbutduringthefirstfewdays,eq\o(something,\s\do10(nothing))happened.Ibegantofeeleq\o(disappointing,\s\do10(disappointed))andabitdown.Ieq\o(water,\s\do10(watered))theseedsindryperiodsandmadesurenottoover-waterthem.Also,Iplacedtheflowerpotintheeq\o(sunlights,\s\do10(sunlight)).Moredayspassed.Undermycare,theflowerpotsoonbecamecrowdedeq\o(of,\s\do10(with))greenplants.Thankstomyfriendandmyeq\o(patient,\s\do10(patience))，theseplantshaveplayedanimportantpartineq\o(brighten,\s\do10(brightening))myeverydaylife.Letusalltoslowourpacedowneq\o(but,\s\do10(and))bepatienttoobservetheworldarounduscarefully.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。作者收到了朋友送的一包种子，作者把种子种在一个美丽的花盆里，经过作者的细心照料，花盆长满了植物，这让作者非常高兴，并感悟，我们应该放慢脚步观察周围的世界。1．考查冠词。句意：几个星期前，我收到朋友的一个包裹，里面有一些种子作为礼物。gift为可数名词单数，应用不定冠词修饰，gift以辅音音素开头，应用不定冠词a。故在as后加a。2．考查不定代词。句意：我把种子种在一个美丽的花盆里，但在最初的几天里，什么都没有发生。根据句意和but表示的转折关系可知，应该是“没有事”发生。故将something改为nothing。3．考查形容词。句意：我开始感到失望，有点沮丧。主语I为人，应用-ed形式的形容词作表语。故将disappointing改为disappointed。4．考查时态。句意：我在干旱的时候给种子浇水，确保不要浇水过多。根据语境和并列句谓语made可知，时态为一般过去时，动词用过去式。故将water改为watered。5．考查名词。句意：此外，我把花盆放在阳光下。sunlight是不可数名词，无复数形式。故将sunlights改为sunlight。6．考查介词。句意：在我的照料下，花盆很快就长满了绿色的植物。becrowdedwith表示“充满……”，为固定搭配。故将of改为with。7．考查名词。句意：多亏了我的朋友和我的耐心，这些植物在照亮我的日常生活中发挥了重要的作用。patient意为“耐心的”或“病人”，不符合语法和句意，此处表达“我的耐心”，应用名词patience，故将patient改为patience。8．考查非谓语动词。句意同上题。in为介词，后接动名词作宾语，brighten为动词原形。故将brighten改为brightening。9．考查非谓语动词。句意：让我们都放慢脚步，耐心地仔细观察我们周围的世界。使役动词let后接动词不定式todo时，to省略，即letsbdo，表示“让某人做……”。故将all后的to删去。10．考查连词。句意同上题。由句意可知，前后句意为递进关系，而非转折。故将but改为and。C(2022·内蒙古包头市高三一模)FatimaMadrigalofCaliforniarecentgavebirthtoaboyandagirl.However,whichsurprisesusmostisthattwinshavedifferentbirthdatesandevenbirthyears.AlfredowasbornonDecember31st,2021at11:45p.m.About15minuteslate,hissisterAylinwasbornonJanuary1st,2022.Fatimasaidherfamily,includingherpartnerRobertandtheirthreeotherschildren,werehappytowelcomethenewbabies.Thebabiesweresupposetocometwoweekslater,buttheirearlyarrivecreatedararesetofbirthdatesandyears.Aylinweighing2.66kilogramsandherbrother2.75kilogramsatbirth.Themedicalcenterwherethetwinswerebornsaidthereareabout120，000twinsbornineachyearintheU．S.However,twinswithdifferentbirthdaysarerare,andthechanceoftwinsbeingbornindifferentyearsisaboutoneintwomillions.【答案】FatimaMadrigalofCaliforniaeq\o(recent,\s\do10(recently))gavebirthtoaboyandagirl.However,eq\o(which,\s\do10(what))surprisesusmostisthateq\o(∧,\s\do10(the))twinshavedifferentbirthdatesandevenbirthyears.AlfredowasbornonDecember31st,2021at11:45p.m.About15minuteseq\o(late,\s\do10(later))，hissisterAylinwasbornonJanuary1st,2022.Fatimasaidherfamily,includingherpartnerRobertandtheirthreeeq\o(others,\s\do10(other))children,werehappytowelcomethenewbabies.Thebabieswereeq\o(suppose,\s\do10(supposed))tocometwoweekslater,buttheirearlyeq\o(arrive,\s\do10(arrival))createdararesetofbirthdatesandyears.Aylineq\o(weighing,\s\do10(weighed))2.66kilogramsandherbrother2.75kilogramsatbirth.Themedicalcenterwherethetwinswerebornsaidthereareabout120，000twinsbornineachyearintheU．S．However,twinswithdifferentbirthdaysarerare,andthechanceoftwinsbeingbornindifferentyearsisaboutoneintwoeq\o(millions,\s\do10(million)).【解析】本文是记叙文。文章主要讲述出生在不同的日期和年份的一对双胞胎。1．考查副词。句意：加利福尼亚的FatimaMadrigal最近生了一个男孩和一个女孩。根据句子结构和意思可知，修饰动词gave应用副词形式。故将recent改为recently。2．考查连接词。句意：最让我们吃惊的是这对双胞胎有不同的出生日期和出生年份。根据句子结构和意思可知，is的主语是主语从句，从句中缺主语，指事情，表示“什么；……事情”的意思。故将which改为what。3．考查冠词。句意同上题。根据句子结构和意思可知，定冠词修饰名词twins，表示特指。故在that后加the。4．考查副词。句意：大约15分钟后，他的妹妹Aylin在2022年1月1日出生了。根据句子结构和意思可知，表示15分钟后，用副词later。故将late改为later。5．考查形容词。句意：Fatima说，她的家人，包括她的丈夫Robert和他们的其他3个孩子都很高兴地欢迎新宝宝们。根据句子结构和意思可知，用形容词表示“其他的”意思，修饰后面的名词children。故将others改为other。6．考查谓语动词。句意：这对双胞胎被预计是2周后到预产期，但是他们的到来创造了稀有的出生年月日。根据句子结构和意思可知，主语Thebabies和动词suppose是被动的关系，前面已经有were，所以动词要用过去分词形式。故将suppose改为supposed。7．考查名词。句意同上题。表示“到来，到达”，作主语，是抽象名词，所以用arrival。故将arrive改为arrival。8．考查谓语动词。句意：出生时，Aylin重2.66公斤，她的哥哥重2.75公斤。表示过去的事情，用一般过去时。故将weighing改为weighed。9．考查介词。句意：这对双胞胎出生的医疗中心说，在美国，每年有12万对双胞胎出生。eachyear表示“每年”的意思，可以独立作时间状语，所以前面不用介词。故将in删掉。10．考查数词。句意：然而，有不同的出生日期的双胞胎却很少见，并且出生在不同的年份的双胞胎的几率只有大约两百万分之一。数词million前面有基数词修饰时，用单数形式。故将millions改为million。D(2022·吉林省白山市高三一模)Perhapseverymotheriswillingtogiveherchildrenenoughlove.Amotherʼsloveinspiresherchildrentoovercomedifficulties,makeprogressesandremainhealthy.However,toomuchlovecanalsohaveabadlyeffectonchildren.Outoflove,mymotherusednottoletmetodoanything—sheactuallydoesallthethingsaroundthehouse.Butnowsheʼsstartingtoaskmetodosomehouseworkbecauseshefoundthatitcausedmetobeinglazyandevenkeptmemasteringlivingskills.Inmyopinion,weshoulddosomethingsbythemselves.Weshouldalsohelpourmothersdoasmanyhouseworkaspossible.Alwaysfightinghardtobecomestrongerandpaybackourmotherslove.【答案】Perhapseverymotheriswillingtogiveherchildrenenoughlove.Amotherʼsloveinspiresherchildrentoovercomedifficulties,makeeq\o(progresses,\s\do10(progress))andremainhealthy.However,toomuchlovecanalsohaveaeq\o(badly,\s\do10(bad))effectonchildren.Outoflove,mymotherusednottoletmetodoanything—sheactuallyeq\o(does,\s\do10(did))allthethingsaroundthehouse.Butnowsheʼsstartingtoaskmetodosomehouseworkbecauseshefoundthatitcausedmetoeq\o(being,\s\do10(be))lazyandevenkeptmeeq\o(∧,\s\do10(from))masteringlivingskills.Inmyopinion,weshoulddosomethingsbyeq\o(themselves,\s\do10(ourselves)).We