应试翻译与写作

应试翻译与写作7结尾的写法文章的结尾一般篇幅不宜过长，但却也是决定文章成败的点睛之笔。面对堆积如山的试卷，阅卷老师的精力更多的是放在文章的开头、各段的过渡及文章的结尾。好的结尾，可以增添文章的效果和说服力，加深阅卷老师的印象。一篇文章的结尾是否能够产生最佳效果，关键是能否使用恰当的方法和优秀的句式有效地体现文章主题。

1)总结法所谓总结法，就是通过文章前面的讨论分析引出一段总结性的言论，重申文章的中心思想或总结自己的观点，作为全文的结束。这是一种最常见的结尾方式，主要用于观点论证型作文和对比选择型作文。Toconclude,smokingisnothingbutevilasitissoharmfultopeople.Allsmokersshouldbetaughtofthegreatharmofsmokingandbepersuadedoutofsmoking.Moreimportantly,weshouldprotectourchildrenfromtheharmofsmokingthrougheducation.【分析】本段文字是吸烟有害健康的文章结尾，运用了总结法。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatparentsdoplayavitalroleintheeducationoftheirchildren,whichcannotbereplacedbyschooling.常用句式Fromwhathasbeendiscussed,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors/Inviewoftheabove-mentionedfacts,weshoulddrawtheconclusionthat…Allthereliableevidencegoestoshowthat…Alltheanalysisconfirmsanunshakableviewthat…Tosumup/conclude,…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,Iprefer…Practice1ItPaystoBeHonest1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2）诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实Allreliableevidencegoestoshowthathonestyisthebestpolicy.Whateveryouraimis,youmustworkhonestlytoattainit.Thosedishonestpeoplewillobtainnothingbuttroublesandfailuresintheend.2)后果法所谓后果法，就是对所讨论的问题或现象可能会产生的后果做出预测或分析。这种后果可能是积极的，也可能是消极的，需根据文章主题而定。这种结尾方式主要适用于问题解决型作文和现象解释型作文。Allthesethingscometoonesimplefact:peoplearealwaystryingveryhardtogetabetterlife.Anynationwhichignorestheimportanceofdevelopingitsproductivityandconsequentlyimprovingthelifeofitspeoplewillhavetopayaheavyprice.本段文字是关于要重视提高人们生活水平的文章结尾，运用了后果法。Clearly,ifweareblindtothisrecklessexploitationofourlimitednaturalresources,itisverylikelythattherewillnotbeanynaturalresourcesforustoexploitanymore.Andifthatdaydoescome,itwillbetheendofourmoderncivilization.常用句式Obviously,ifweareblindto…,itisverylikelythat…Anypersonfailstolearn…wouldpayaheavyprice.Fortunately,however,moreandmorepeoplecometorealizetheimportanceof…andimprovementinnearfuture.Ifweworkon…fromnowon,inforeseeablefuture,wewillnotbeoverwhelmedbythesameproblem.Ifwecansolvetheproblemwithnoeffortsspared,humanbeingwillnotbecaughtinthesameconditions.Thereisnoeasysolutiontotheissue,butourcommitmentwillberewardedaslongasweinsistonassumingourresponsibilityonit.Followingthesemethodsmaynotguaranteethesuccess,butthepay-offwillbeworththesweatweshed.3)呼吁法所谓呼吁法，就是在文章结尾敦促或呼吁读者作出努力，对某问题予以关注或采取行动。但是需要注意的是，不能空感口号，痛下决心，这样会使文章显得空洞，不伦不类。这种结尾方式主要适用于问题解决型作文。Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.Governmentshouldmakealawtopunishthosepollutingourenvironment,andthepublicshouldrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.【分析】本段文字是关于如何保护社会环境的文章结尾，运用了呼吁法。Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.Governmentshouldmakealawtopunishthosepollutingourenvironment,andthepublicshouldrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.Onlywhenthewholecountryanditspeopleallgointoactionandfightagainstcrimecanwepurifyoursocietyandliveinsecurity.常用句式Itishightimethatwe…innohalf-heartedmanner.Itisessentialthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakento…Toreversethetrendisnotaeasytask,anditrequireskeenconsciousnessof…Thereisnodenyingthatconsiderableattentionmustbepaidtotheplightof…Wemustcallforanimmediateaction,becausethecurrenttendencyof…,ifpermittedtodevelopatwill,itwillresultinthedestructionof…Onlywhen…canwe…Practice3ReduceWasteonCampus1)目前有些校园内浪费现象严重2）浪费的危害3）从我做起，杜绝浪费Itishightimewerememberedtheoldsaying“Wastenot,wantnot.”Andfightingagainstwasteiseverybody’sbusiness.Asforuscollegestudents,wearesupposedtostrivetoreducewasteoncampus.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,itwon’tbelongbeforethegoodoldsayingcomesback.需要注意的是，结尾一定要与主题相匹配，切忌谈一些与主题无关的内容。另外，除了以上方法，结尾也可采用引用法和提出建议法。而且在实际写作时，可以不必局限于一种方法，要根据实际情况将几种方法有效结合。Exercise总而言之，应试教育既有缺点又有不足。Insum,test-orientededucation______________.Insum,test-orientededucationhasbothmeritsanddemerits.总之，参与支教计划的经历对大学生是极其重要的。Tosumup,theexperienceofaid-educationproject______________universitystudents.Tosumup,theexperienceofaid-educationprojectisofimmenseimportancetouniversitystudents.总的来说，我相信电力的使用将会极大地缓解环境保护的压力。Insummary,Ibelievetheemploymentofelectricitywillgreatly______________environmentalprotection.Insummary,Ibelievetheemploymentofelectricitywillgreatlyrelievethepressureofenvironmentalprotection.总之，正规教育会在人们未来的职业生涯中起到非常重要的作用。______________,formaleducationwillplayaveryimportantroleinpeople’sfuturecareer.Inconclusion,formaleducationwillplayaveryimportantroleinpeople’sfuturecareer.总而言之，控制剽窃行为的最佳方法是建立一个终身信用体系。Allinall,thebestwaytokeepplagiarism______________istosetupalifelongsystemofcredibility.Allinall,thebestwaytokeepplagiarismundercontrolistosetupalifelongsystemofcredibility.根据我们以上的讨论，我们可以清楚地看到保持健康的最佳方法是结合适当的体育锻炼和健康的饮食。______________,wecanseeclearlythat______________tokeepfitiscombiningproperphysicalexerciseswithahealthydiet.Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wecanseeclearlythatthebestwaytokeepfitiscombiningproperphysicalexerciseswithahealthydiet.根据以上的讨论，我们确实可以得出结论：大学生当保姆是不合适的。______________,wecansafely______________thatitisunsuitableforuniversitystudentstoworkasbaby-sitters.Fromtheabovediscussion,wecansafelyarriveattheconclusionthatitisunsuitableforuniversitystudentstoworkasbaby-sitters.从上述事实得出以下结论：大学生比中学生更独立。_______________________thatuniversitystudentsenjoymoreindependencethanmiddleschoolstudents.Theabove-mentionedfactorsleadtotheconclusionthatuniversitystudentsenjoymoreindependencethanmiddleschoolstudents.在权衡优劣势之后，我们会得出结论：应试教育在某种程度上对学生有负面影响。________________________,we’llcometotheconclusionthattest-orientededucationtosomeextent______________students.Afterweighingtheadvantagesanddisadvantages,we’llcometotheconclusionthattest-orientededucationtosomeextentexertsnegativeeffectsuponstudents.所有的因素都考虑之后，我们确实可以得出结论：结合锻炼和均衡的饮食对我们的健康是最有益的。______________________,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthecombinationofexerciseandabalanceddietismostbeneficial.Whenallthefactorsareexamined,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthecombinationofexerciseandabalanceddietismostbeneficial.我给那些崇拜超级明星的人的建议是他们应该表现得更理性一些。______________tothosewhoworshipsuperstarsisthattheyshouldbemorereasonable.Mysuggestiontothosewhoworshipsuperstarsisthattheyshouldbemorereasonable对于那些对课外活动感兴趣的人，我会建议他们爬山。______________areinterestedinextracurricularactivities（课外活动）,Iwouldsuggestmountainclimbing.Tothosewhoareinterestedinextracurricularactivities（课外活动）,Iwouldsuggestmountainclimbing.我强烈建议青少年做更多的健身运动，不要采用久坐的生活方式。I______________youngsterstakemoreexercisesratherthanadoptthatsedentarylifestyle.Istronglyrecommendthatyoungsterstakemoreexercisesratherthanadoptthatsedentarylifestyle.我相信应该采取一些措施以对抗水污染。Ibelievethatsomemeasures______________soastofightagainstwaterpollution.Ibelievethatsomemeasuresshouldbetakensoastofightagainstwaterpollution.我的提议是通过维持饮食平衡来培养更健康的生活方式。It______________tocultivateahealthierlifestylebybalancingoutdiet.Itismyproposaltocultivateahealthierlifestylebybalancingoutdiet.除非人们意识到抗击艾滋病的重要，否则我们决不能期望缓解这种可怕疾病的蔓延。_____________________combatingAids,wecanneverexpecttheslowingdownprevalenceofsuchamaliciousdisease.UnlesspeopleareawareoftheimportanceofcombatingAids,wecanneverexpecttheslowingdownprevalenceofsuchamaliciousdisease.只有这样，我们才能处理城市空气污染的问题。______________wesettletheproblemofurbanaircontamination.Onlyinthiswaycanwesettletheproblemofurbanaircontamination.只有当我们意识到保护环境的重要性的时候，我们才能创建一个更好的世界。______________________environmentprotection,canweconstructabetterworld.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotection,canweconstructabetterworld.我们应该谨记的是我们有责任保护独特的中国文化特色。____________________isthatwehavethedutytopreserveuniqueChineseculturalfeatures.WhatweshouldkeepinmindisthatwehavethedutytopreserveuniqueChineseculturalfeatures.我们应该优先考虑自己的性格，而不是盲目追随潮流。Weshould______________ourownpersonalitiesratherthanblindlyfollowthefashiontrend.Weshouldgivemoreprioritytoourownpersonalitiesratherthanblindlyfollowthefashiontrend.应该给予超级明星的宝贵品质，如坚定不移和热心，更多优先考虑。_______________________