新教材适用2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作层级训练层级1表达正确-规避常犯的9大错误课件

写作层级训练层级一表达正确——规避常犯的9大错误考生写作中常犯的错误主要表现在词性不明、措辞不当、用法不妥、重复累赘、句法混乱、中式英语、拼写与标点错误等。下面通过整理归类，列举正误例句，指出错误所在，总结其规律，以便帮助考生尽快提高英语书面语言的准确表达能力。一、词性不明误：Thosewhostronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosetheirfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.正：Thosewhoarestronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosetheirfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.分析：误将介词作动词：against(反对)是介词而不是动词，用介词表达动作意义，要加系动词be；for为其反义词，意为“同意”。二、措辞不当误：Underthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers，ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.正：Withthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers，ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.正：Thankstothehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers，ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.分析：思维方式差异：“在……的帮助下”实则是“由于……的帮助”，under常用于“undertheleadership/protectionof...”。三、用法不妥误：Finallywewereshownaroundtheplaygroundatthefarbackoftheschool,wherethereweresomeboyshadafootballgame.正：Finallywewereshownaroundtheplaygroundatthefarbackoftheschool,wherethereweresomeboyshavingafootballgame.分析：此处have作非谓语，应用-ing形式表示主动关系。四、重复累赘误：ThemomentwhenIthinkofmymotto,I'llbecomeenergeticanddevotemyselftowhatI'mdoing.正：ThemomentIthinkofmymotto，I'llbecomeenergeticanddevotemyselftowhatI'mdoing.分析：themoment/minute/instant...或each/every/next/thefirsttime...等名词性短语作从属连词引导时间状语从句时，其后不再接when。五、句法混乱误：Thoughittookussometimetohelphim，butwewerehappyanyway.正：Thoughittookussometimetohelphim，wewerehappyanyway.正：Thoughittookussometimetohelphim，yetwewerehappyanyway.分析：汉语复合句的关联词语要求完整，但英语复合句中的从属连词和并列连词不可并用，否则句子的类型无法确定。“because...,so...”亦属此类。六、中式英语误：Grandpaisinhiseighties,buthisbodyishealthy.正：Grandpaisinhiseighties,butheisingoodhealth.分析：body可用来表示强壮的身体(astrongbody)，但不能指健康状况。七、拼写错误误：NowdaysvotingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.正：NowadaysvotingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.分析：nowadays的书写是考生常犯的错误，一定牢记中间有a。拼写错误一般是漫不经心，自以为然所致。八、标点错误误：IamgratefultomyEnglishteacherforallthehelpandsupporthehasgivenme.whichhasmademestrongerandabetterperson。正：IamgratefultomyEnglishteacherforallthehelpandsupporthehasgivenme,whichhasmademestrongerandabetterperson.分析：中英文句号的符号截然不同。九、其他错误误：Itwashotandwewereexhausted.