广东高三第一次调研读后续写A+dream+born+in+the+fire讲义 高考英语作文专项复习

阅读下面材料，根据共内容和所给段开头诺续写两段，便之构成一篇究整的短文.试题呈现：Itwasadreamborninfire.AndreaPetersonwas5whenshewastrappedontheledge(窗台)ofaburningbuilding.“Throwthekiddown!”saidoneofthefiremenbelow,whoseeyesarefirmandcourageous,alongwithprofessionalrescuetechniques.Seeingthis,littleAndreajumpedintolifesavingarmsandalife-longambition:Shewantedtofightfiresasherrescuersdid.Shetoldthattothemenwhohadsavedher,andtheylaughednaturallythewaygrown-upsdowhenakidsayshewantstobeanastronautorasportsstar.Butthiswasbackinatimewhenlittlegirlsweren’tevenallowedtofantasize(幻想)aboutsuchgrandgoals.“You’llbeagoodmommy,”thefirementoldher.“You’llbeagoodteacher,maybeyou’llbeanurse,butyoucanneverbeafireman.”Indeed,lifesidelinedherambitiousdream.Shewasstudyingforadegreeinaviationtechnology(航空科技)andthat’swhereshemetherhusband,Dennis.Unfortunately,Denniswasdiagnosedwithcancer.Petersonspent31yearscaringforthemansheloved,andin2007,whenDenniswasabouttoleave,hewasatpeacebutworriedforher.“Butwhatareyougoingtodo?”“I’llbefine,”shetoldhim.At61,sheattendedacourseforemergencies.Shewentonanambulanceride-alongfromtimetotime.Itturnedouttobealife-and-deathsituation,whichremindedherofthechildhoodexperiencebackinthefire.Buteverytimeshesawpeoplewhowereinneedweresuccessfullyrescued,Petersonfeltthatlong-agochildhoodcalling.Sheearnedheremergencymedicaltechnicianlicenseandrespondedtofirecallswiththeambulance.ShefoundthatheryearsoftendingtoDennishadpreparedherfordealingwiththevarietyofhurtsandills.Theinsidecallingechoedincreasinglystronger.注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afterayear,shesignedupforatrainingunitforfirefighters.Finallycamethewrittenandphysicalfitnesstestday.参考范文一，Afterayear,shesignedupforatrainingunitforfirefighters.Nosoonerhadshesteppedintothetrainingvenuethanshefoundallherclassmateswere18—22youngkids.“CouldIreallymakeit？”Petersonthoughttoherself,struggling.Attheverymoment,shewasonceagainthoughtofthefirmandcourageouseyesofthefirefighterswhocametorescueherover50yearsago.Sheinstantlyrolleduphersleevesandbegantolearnboththeoreticalandpracticalknowledgeashermuchyoungerpeers.Finallycamethewrittenandphysicalfitnesstestday.ForPeterson,shewasatanadvantageoussituationforthetheoreticalpart,asherpastrescueexperiencesonambulanceride-alongmadeheraqualifiedrescueralready.However,the3-kmrunning,push-ups,sit-ups,etc.allbehavedashugegapsawaitinghertoconquer.Thoughsherankedthelastamongsuchitems,herpersistence,enduranceaswellasthepassionforachildhooddreammadehernameappearonthelistofnewly-announcedfirefighters.Thistime,tearsblurredhereyes,asthedreamborninthefirewaseventuallyfulfilled.参考范文二，Afterayear,shesignedupforatrainingunitforfirefighters.Atfirst,allthetrainingcrewwereallsurprisedtoseesuchanoldlady.Someevenjokedoradvisedhertogiveupandenjoytheretirement.However,soonsheimpressedallofthemwithherpersistenceandprofessionalskills.Comparedwiththeseenergeticgreenhands,sheevenappearedmorecomfortingandpersuasivewhenhelpingthevictims.Gradually,jokesgavewaytorespect.Actually,littledidtheseclassmatesknowhowhardAndreahadpreparedtoqualifyasafirefighter.Shelearntdayandnight,practicedhardafterclassandkeptphysicaltraining.Shehadpreparedwellforthefinaltestday.Finallycamethewrittenandphysicalfitnesstestday.Writtentestwasneveraheadache,andshehadtotalconfidenceaboutit.Whenthephysicalfitnesstestcame,shetookadeepbreathandbegantodoasthetestrequired,suchas,takingtheheavywaterpipeswhilerunning,crossinghurdlesandclimbingupaladderwhoseendrestonhighfloors.Hardasshetried,asanoldman,shelostenergyandgraduallylaggedbehind.Thenpeoplearoundclappedtheirhands,calledhernameandcheeredheron.“Comeon,youcandoit!”Finallyshefinishedallthetestitems.Thenundertheagreementofjudges,shewasannouncedqualifiedontheconditionthatshewouldworkasaback-upfirefighter.Now,shecouldfinallyhonorherdreamandbecamearealfirefighter.

参考范文三Afterayear,shesignedupforatrainingunitforfirefighters.Shewasdeterminedtoprovethatwomenwerejustascapableoffightingfiresasmen.Thetrainingsessionswerephysicallydemanding,pushingherlimitstotheedge.However,shetrainedtirelessly,practicedlonghours,strivingtogainthephysicalandmentalstrengthrequiredforafirefighter.Atfirst,shewasoftenmetwithskepticismfromherfellowtrainees,butherunwaveringresolveanddedicationgraduallyearnedtheirrespect.Withtimepassingby,shegotfullypreparedphysicallyandmentally.

Finallycamethewrittenandphysicalfitnesstestday.Thiswasacrucialmomentinherjourney.Withherheartpounding,shetackledthewrittenexamwithconfidenceandpasseditwithflyingcolors.Thenshefacedthephysicalfitnesstest,showcasingherstrength,agilityandendurance.Despiteherage,sheamazedeveryonewithherperformance,shatteringstereotypesalongtheway.Finally,shegotthepermitofbeingafirefight.AndreaPeterson’sstoryisaninspiringreminderthatit’snevertoolatetochaseone’sdream.Withthepowerofdeterminationandperseverance,wecanturnlong-lostdreamsintoreality.

参考范文四：

Afterayear,shesignedupforatrainingunitforfirefighters.Despitethefactthatshewasfullymentallyprepared,shestillcouldn’tasenseofbelonginginthecommunitytheinstantshereachedtheplace,becauseallthepeoplepresentwereallroughly20orintheirthirties..“Probablyit’sawrongideatoregisteratsuchanage,”

shedoubted.Sheintendedtowithdrawfromthetrainingproject,yetthedreamofbeingafirefighter,whichhadbeenburiedatthebottomofherheartforlong,emerged.Afterthinkingtwice,Petersoncommittedherselftothetraining,bothlearningthebasicknowledgeaboutcopingwithfiresandrescuingpeopletrapped,butparticipatinginthefiredrillandseverephys