Module+4+Unit3+Writing 外研版英语九年级上册++

九年级英语上册Module4

HomealoneHaveyouseenanAmericanfilmHomeAlone?Module4Writingtask:WritingaarticleaboutlivingaloneLet’sreview(复习)someimportantsentences.Hegotup____late____he

missedthebus.Hewas_____excited______hecouldn’tgotosleepthatnight.sothatsothat________shewantstogotoParis,shedoesn’twanttofly.(变同义句)ShewantstogotoParis,_____shedoesn’twanttofly.×butAlthough________heisold,heisverystrong.

(同义句)Heisold,______heisverystrong.AlthoughbutHe_____makethebed____cookthemeals.

(同义句)He__________makethebed_________cookthemeals.

canandisabletoaswellas整理床铺做饭CanyoutranslatetheHomealonerules(规则)

forchildren.

makethebedtidyupsweepthefloorgotoschoolwashthedisheshaveclassestakeouttherubbishdothehomeworkcookthemealswashclothes整理床铺收拾扫地上学洗碗上课倒垃圾做作业做饭洗衣服Icanwakeupontime.Icannotmakebreakfast.Step1:Makealistofwhatyoucandoandcannotdowhenyourparentsareaway.Whichthingscanyoudoalone?Icanmakebedalone.Icansweeptheflooralone.dohomeworktakeexeicisesurftheInternetdosomehouseworkgooverthelessons...Whichthingscan’tyoudoalone?Ican’tcookalone.Ican’twashtheclothesalone.watchTVforalongtimeplaytoomanycomputergamestayuplateeatinthebedroomplaythefireopenthedoorforthestrangers...

Step2:IwanttoshareapassagecalledHomeAloneforyou.Thethief（小偷）isHarry.TheotherisMarv.TheboyisKevin./θiːf/thieves/θiːvz/HomeAloneHomeAloneisaveryfunnyAmericanfilm.It’sastoryaboutaboywhoisaccidentally（偶然地）leftaloneathome.Kevinistheyoungestchildinhisfamily.OnenightbeforeChristmas,Kevin’sfamilyareplanningtoflytoParisfortheholidayandarebusygettingreadyforit.Inthemorning,everyonewakesupverylate.Theyareallinahurrytogettotheairport,sotheyforgetKevinandheisleftaloneathomebyaccident.

AlthoughKevinisalone,heisveryhappyatfirst.Histerriblefamilyhasgone--hiswishhascometrue.HewatchesTV,eatslotsoffastfoodandplaysgames.Hehasagoodtime.Butlateron（后来）,hegoesoutandhearstwobadmencalledHarryandMarvplanningtosteal（偷）fromhishouse.HestaysathomeandplanssomeveryfunnywaystostopHarryandMarv.Finally,thepolicecomeandthemenaretakenaway（带走）.Thehouseisnowamess,soKevintidiesitupandwaitsforhisparents.TheygetbackfromParisandareveryhappytofindthatKevinissafe.假如你是珍妮，而你的父母已经去上海出差几天了，你一个人在家。请根据下面的提示，以“HomeAlonefortheFirstTime”为题，写一篇英文日记，记录你今天的生活。80词左右。日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。内容包括：1.独自在家的原因；2.如何度过？上午、中午、下午做了什么事情；3.此次经历的感悟。HomeAlonefortheFirstTimeMyparents…onbusiness,soI…1.(开篇点题，说明第一次一个人在家的理由。)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

beginningbodyending2.介绍如何度过。（包括早、中、晚）3.总结自己的感悟。（3分）（2分）（1分）firstofall，what'smore，andthen，lastbutnotleasthowever,allinall,asaresult,inaword...dohomeworktakeexeicisesurftheInternetdosomehouseworkgooverthelessons...goonbusinesshavetoworkovertimetakecareofgrandparents...difficultexcitedwonderful...Asasayinggoes:Ignorehousework,donotknowlifeisdifficult.不理家务事，不知生活难。Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。East,west,homeisbest.金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝Takelittle,butgivemuch.应少索取，而多奉献。Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言。Takelittle,butgivemuch.应少索取，而多奉献。Businessbeforepleasure.干完正事再玩儿。East,west,homeisbest.金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言。Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.实践出真知。Asasayinggoes:Ignorehousework,donotknowlifeisdifficult.不理家务事，不知生活难。

查（checkbyyourself）1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？第一档：12-15分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。第二档：11-12分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。第三档：8-10分内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚,但有一些语言错误。

（以上为及格线）第四档：4-7分内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：0-3分只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。评分档次和要求：ShowtimeOctober15,Saturday SunnyHomeAlonefortheFirstTimeMy

parents

have

gone

to

Shanghai

on

business,so

I

have

to

stay

at

home

alone.They

worry

about

me

a

lot,but

I

believe

I

can

look

after

myself

well.(独自在家的原因)In

the

morning,I

got

up

early

and

tidied

up

my

bedroom.(独自在家的活动1)After

that

I

washed

my

clothes.(活动2)At

noon,I

cooked

for

the

first

time.It

was

a

very

simple

but

delicious

lunch.(活动3)In

the

afternoon,I

did

my

homework

first,and

then

watched

TV.(活动4)

I