外研版高中英语必修二 （On the move）PartⅤ 教学课件

PartⅤ

Writing——体育故事Unit3

Onthemove

故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。【增分表达】1.oneofthebestathletesinourcountry2.Heisgoodat...3.Heiseventhemostcapable...intheworld.4.keepthebestrecordof...untilnow.5.Ifindmyselffullofpassioninmyheart.6.Heisthebestexampleofmakingeveryefforttodevelophissportcareerandbreaksomanyrecords.7.Thisspiritisworthytobelearnedbyallofus.8.Withthisambition，hecoulddefeatanydifficulties.9.Facingdifficulties，heneverlosesheart.10.makemoreprogress...请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下：1.我是山东人。2.学校游泳队队员。3.从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。4.我认为……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：布局谋篇很关键►审题1.确定体裁：

本文为记叙文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要为____________；3.确定主题时态：______________________________。►构思第一部分：简要介绍自己。第二部分：________________。第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。

第一人称一般现在时或过去时自己的故事第二步：核心词汇想周全

1.__________________是……的一员2.__________________赢得一枚金牌3.__________________成为冠军4.__________________获得巨大成就5.__________________失去信心6.__________________建议某人做某事

amemberof...winagoldmedalbecomeachampiongetgreatachievementsloseheartadvisesbtodosth第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.Iam______________________________________.我是学校游泳队的队员。2.I___________________________whenIwasasmallboy.我小的时候喜欢游泳。3.Ihavegot_________________________________.我已经取得了巨大成就。4.Inever______________________________________________.我从来不放弃训练。5.I___________________________________________________.我遇到困难。6.Inever______________________________________________.我从来不灰心丧气。

amemberofschoolswimmingteamlovedswimminggreatachievementsgiveuptrainingmeetdifficultiesloseheart第四步：句型升级造亮点

1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。________________________________________________________________________2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。________________________________________________________________________3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。________________________________________________________________________IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇

IamfromShandong，amemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Iam198cminheight.IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.At7Ibecameamemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Fiveyearslater，IwonagoldmedalattheCountySwimmingChampionshipandbecameachampionattheNationalSwimmingChampionshipslater.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.OnedayIinjuredmyarmintraining，someoneadvisedmetoseeadoctor，butIrefused.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.Swimmingnotonlybuildsmybodybutalso