高三英语一轮复习应用文新闻报道：环保时装秀+讲义

试题呈现：假如你是李华，上周六你校举办了一场以“变废为宝”为主题的环保时装秀。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括:1.参加人员;2.活动情况;3.活动反响。注意:词数80左右TheTrashionShow审题指导首先我们要明确，这是一篇新闻报道。报道一般是记述最近发生的事情，给人们提供最新的消息。报道的特点：准确性、真实性、简明性和及时性。写作时人称以第三人称为主，在交代事件或活动的情况及反响时应该用一般过去时，在对事件或活动进行评价、揭示意义时可用一般现在时。本次题目要求写的主要内容包括参与人员、活动情况和活动反响。因此，文章的三段可以如下安排：首段：活动的简要描述（题目中的背景）+参与人员。主体：活动情况，可以写过程、结果，也可以突出活动中的亮点。结尾：活动反响，可以结合评价和意义来写。考生出现的问题：卷面字迹不理想，最大失误是内容要点缺失。要点基本齐全，语言较为支离破碎。建议多积累写作的短语或句式。情态动词+动词原形的谓语动词不适合在这样的文章中出现。关键位置尽量少犯错，字母大小稍加控制，尽量避免大小不均。关键位置放上亮点表达，如“witness”“Asscheduled”“theactivityturnedouttobe

challenging

but

rewarding

because

notonlydiditenrich

ourschoollife（倒装句式）...”当然，如果分段更清晰，卷面更漂亮会更加分。参考范文：TheTrashionShowLastSaturday,ourschoolauditoriumwitnessedahot“trashion’show,afashionshowfeaturingoutfitsmadeoftrashTheeventwasaimedatpromotingawarenessaboutthehugeamountofwastethatweproduceinourday-to-daylives,muchofwhichsadlygoesuncycled.Numerousstudentsvolunteeredtomodelfortheshow.Theywalkedtherunwayincostumescleverlyputtogetherwithdiscardeditems,rangingfromplasticbottlestonewspapers.Theresponsefromtheaudiencewasincrediblypositive.Notonlydidtheeventshowcasetheremarkablycreativityofourpeers,butitalsoservedasapowerfulreminderforallofustoreconsiderourdailyconsumptionhabits.Afterall,asustainablefutureisshapedbythedailychoiceswemake.这篇参考范文使用了部分难度较大的词汇和表达，但整体有不少可以学习借鉴之处。首先，范文分成三段，第一段写活动简介；第二段写参与人员和活动情况；末段写活动反响。结构清晰明了，内容要点齐全、语言有亮点。文章第一段就用了一句话，简洁明了，从

trashion

这个词下手，使用同位语进行解释，再用一个现在分词短语做后置定语进行修饰。亮点词有

witness，feature。第二段，第一句写了活动目的，然后给出参与人员。活动情况也是简单介绍。用上了

定语从句

muchofwhichsadlygoesuncycled

和

现在分词短语做非限制性后置定语

rangingfrom...to...

等亮点表达。末段直接用上

response

写活动反响。notonly...butalso...

的部分倒装句式运用贴切。最后一句还稍微升华了一下。词汇方面有

showcase,remarkably,

reminder,consumptionhabits,

sustainablefuture

等亮点表达。下水文1ATrashionShowLastSaturday,ourschoolhostedaneco-fashionshowcenteredaroundthethemeof“TurningTrashintoTreasureInabidtoraiseourenvironmentalconsciousnessandhighlightthesignificanceofsustainablepractices,theTrashionShow,captivatedthecampusforafullhour.Designersfromeachclasspresentedtheirremarkablecreationscraftedfromdiscardedpaper,plastic,deliveryboxesandzip-topcans.Whataddedadynamictouchtothesespecially-createdcostumeswasthestellarperformanceofourschoolmodelingteam.Intheend,theaudiencevotedfor“BestDesign”whichwasawardedtoadelicatenecklacemadefromplasticandcans.Theshow,withavibrantandenthusiasticatmosphere,drewthunderousapplauseandturnedouttobearesoundingsuccess,whichemphasizedthepotentialforinnovativesolutionstoreducingwasteandstimulatedusalltoassumearoleinpreservingourplanet.下水文2TheTrashionShowLastSaturday,ourschoolauditoriumwitnessedahot"garbage"show,whichwasafashionshowfeaturinggarbageclothingTheactivityaimstoraisepeople'sawarenessofthelargeamountofwastegeneratedinourdailylives,butunfortunately,mostofithasnotbeenrecycled.Manystudentsvolunteertomodelfortheperformance.Theywalkedontherunwaywearingclothingcleverlycombinedwithdiscardeditemsfromplasticbottlestonewspapers.Theaudience'sresponsewasverypositive.Thiseventnotonlyshowcasestheextraordinarycreativityofourpeers,butalsostronglyremindsusalltoreconsiderourdailyconsumptionhabits.Afterall,asustainablefutureisdeterminedbythechoiceswemakeeveryday.环保类巩固练习：（倡导低碳生活方式）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris给你发来电子邮件，询问你校正在开展的“低碳生活”活动的情况。请你就以下几个方面的活动内容用英语写一封邮件回复。

（1）上学（骑自行车）；

（2）校内（节电节水）；

（3）你对该活动的看法。Asample

writingontheabovetopic:DearChris,

Iampleasedtosharethedetailsofthe'low-carbonlifestyle'campaigncurrentlyunderwayatourschool.

Theinitiativehasreceivedapositiveresponsefromourstudents,andwehaveactivelyparticipatedintheprograminvariousways.Cyclingtoschoolhasbeenwidelyadoptedasanalternativetousingprivatecars.Notonlyisitabetterchoicefortheenvironment,butitalsoprovidesuswithvaluableexercise.Furthermore,wehavebecomemoreconscientiousaboutenergy